Asya TS: My Nakli boy friend part 3 on pg 21 - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: divya_asya

omg it was amazing

loved it
he kissed her too
plz accept my request and do pm me


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hurya112

plz update soon😳



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Zoya was too shocked at first. She wanted to stop him. But her body turned in to jelly by his touch. Un knowingly she responded. She too kissed him back with equal passion. Finally they had to broke there kiss for oxygen. Both were not facing each other.
Asad: I will see you tomorrow.
With out waiting for her response asad left. Zoya was still in a state of shocked. Asad had kissed her. She too kissed him back. She was feeling so confused. There is no naval officer in Mumbai port named asad. That was a lie which haider bhaijaan crooked up infront of ammi. Haider bhaijaan also doesn't know him. Then who is he? How come he knows her? Why kissing him felt so correct? Is she falling for him? No doubt he is handsome. He seems to be a good guy. But still she doesn't know him. How can she fall for him without knowing about his intentions. Once zoya returned back FM she was still in dilemma. Haider too noticed it. Even he failed to understand who is this asad? Zoya could only suspect her ammi now. But ammi will do something like this? She doubted. She had noted down asad's cars registration number. She made a call to a known person in RT office. She gave the register no. Since it's already evening she will get the information only tomorrow. She could still feel asad on her lips. That thought itself made her blush. She is getting scared now. She is developing feeling for asad. What if he turns out to be a monster in reality?she was not able to sleep the whole night. If she close her eyes she remembers about the kiss they shared. It was very difficult for zoya to sleep. Even in sleep he was haunting her. When she woke up in the morning still that thought didn't leave her. She was determined that she will reveal truth to her ammi. Even if she suspect her ammi by revealing truth if she knows something about asad she will reveal it. She can't bare this torcher any more.

Zainab's room

Zainab was getting ready in her room to go to court. She was surprised to see zoya in her room at this time.
Zainab: Andar aao beta!
Zoya: ammi I want to say something to you. Please be calm & don't get angry once I finished.
Zainab: bolo beta.
Zoya: ammi frankly speaking I was not interested in getting married when you started seeing proposals for me. I want someone who could understand me. My passion for journalism & awaken. That's why I was so against when you asked to get married. I discussed it with bhaijaan. It was his idea about a bf in Mumbai. Frankly speaking there was none. He only wanted to save me. But when we saw asad we both were shocked to find out that our lie had turned out into reality. I don't know him. But in this few days I have actually started liking him.
No doubt zainab was in seventh heaven. Zoya started loving asad. There plan is finally successful. But she didn't show it out. Without discussing with rashid & dilshad she can't reveal truth to zoya. Zainab just faked anger & left from there. Zoya had tears in her eyes. She had hurted her ammi so badly. On top of that she doesn't know about the real identity of the man whom she has feelings.

Same time in KV.

Asad was also shocked by his behaviour to zoya last day. He was always straightforward & reserved. But after meeting zoya he was shocked himself to find this hidden side. He is carefree when he is around zoya. He boldly expressed his feelings when she is near to him. He understood that he started loving zoya. He should confess Infront of her soon.

Awaken

Zoya was completely lost when she was preparing for an upcoming campaign. Her thoughts were filled with asad. She was eagerly waiting for the RT office person's call for asad's address. If she gets his address it's easy for her to find about him. Finally she received asad's address as a message. She was shocked when she read the message.

Khan villa

No doubt zainab, dilshad & rashid was on cloud. Both asad & zoya had fall for each other.
Dilshad: zainab now that asad & zoya likes each other I guess we should reveal the truth to zoya.
Rashid: I feel it's better if asad confess Infront of her.
Zainab: ha I too feel that's the correct way. Any way I am happy that our plan has succeeded.
Suddenly they heard a noise from the door. The trio was shocked to see zoya there. Zoya looked at zainab with tearful eyes. Zainab realised that zoya is hurt. Even tough she had lied to her towards the end she confessed
But zainab has hidden truth from her. Zoya didn't speak anything. She ran back & took her Scotty and left from there. The trio realised that it's a complicated situation. Dilshad called asad & informed about everything. Asad was getting tensed. He immediately left to FM. But zoya was not there. He went to awaken there also she was not there. Asad called & informed zainab. She called haider & revealed the truth. He called anze & Humeira she was not with them also. Asad gave her number to a software specialist & asked to trace. Her cellphone range was in Mazar area. Asad left to Mazar immediately.
Asad saw her sitting in Mazar. He went near her.
Asad: zoya.
She turned towards him.
Asad: I know you are hurt zoya. I didn't want to meet you through a lie. But for my parents sake I came to meet you in FM. When I saw you I really liked you. You were innocent & sweet. Then when you helped our company I was attracted by your efficiency. When I saw you in your NGO. The way you are dedicated to the society & your simplicity attracted me. I was about to confess to you zoya. I don't know your opinion. But I really love you zoya.
Zoya: mr.asad Ahmed khan it's not you who can play along with a lie.
Asad: ji
Zoya: mr.asad Ahmed khan it's true that I lied Infront of my ammi by creating a fake bf because I didn't want to get married. When I saw you no doubt I was shocked. But eventually I started falling for you. But I was confused because I don't know you & your mysterious arrival. I had a doubt on ammi. So I confessed Infront of her hoping that if she is behind all this she will clear me from this dilemma. I was hurt to see ammi & phupi in KV revealing there plan even after my confession. I just wanted to know what you will do at that point. So I came & sat here for some time.
Asad: so can I take it as an yes
Zoya: yes for what?
Asad: zoya! Ok I will do it in a filmy way.
He went on his knees & caught her hands.
Asad: zoya I have fallen In love with you. I want to be with you forever. Will you please marry me zoya?
Zoya smiled: yes but only in one condition.
Asad: kya hai?
Zoya: I will not quit my journalism & awaken.
Asad: even if you want to quit I won't allow you.
She smiled.
Asad: so I will speak with our parents that we are ready for the nikkah. We can conduct sagaai this week & nikkah next month so that we both can spend sometime with each other & know each other better.
Zoya hugged him. Zoya: I love you too asad!
She thanked Allah & her bhaijaan for bringing asad into her life. Finally her Nakli bf turned out as asli bf.

The end!

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Posted: 11 years ago
I just loved it ...😊

finally nakli bf turned into asli cho sweet 😳

pls why don't u turn it into ff

its awesome

Thanks for pm
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Edited by aishw09 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow amazing :)
too gud
i don't have words to describe :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very gud os tht was.. Loved it... Keep writing...
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Posted: 11 years ago
A ver cute story indeed. ... loved it thank for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update!!!
Loved the journey of AsYa from a Nakli bf to an asli bf!!!
Loved it!!!
Thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome dear.. Lovely.. Superb.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Gud 1 thz fo pm
Edited by Surbhibornstar - 11 years ago

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