down the memory lane- colorful holi- part 3 @ 23-18/4/14 - Page 18

Originally posted by: aishw09

Hey, I am first 🥳

Di, I just loved it ...😊

zoya is really crazy ...😆

asya are adorable ...😳

zoya was sad thinking asad is going to marry some one else ...😆

zoya thought asad is getting mariied because of his ammi's wish 😭

she thought the morning moment was dream ...

Zoya looked at the ring and his face.. and she stood up on the sofa.. 😆

She is really crazy 😆

She forgot everything which happened and started shouting ...😆

she had tears in her eyes seeing asad confessing ...😳

loved asad and zoya to core ...

Mr.Khan.. u should ask ur fiance.. before u finalise this..

zoya is mad 😆

I always wanted to cherish my love like the heroine in the movie.. u know.. meeting the lover secretly.. stealing a kiss... and all...

Asad just coughed at her words...

Lovely part ...😆

zoya applying moov for asad's back ache ...😳cho sweet ...

asya kissed ...wow ...

thank god there is no billi or chudail here ...

no negativity , all happy moments 😳😊

This was completely fabulous , awesome , mind blowing ...

Di, u are just awesome ...

Thank u so much ...

Love u ...🤗

Originally posted by: aYASHIKA

amazing update...
love the ending...👏👏👏
thanks for not bringing tanveer in the stry

Originally posted by: gowtu

Mr.khan.. U should hv ask ur fiance..
I was like 🤣

tht was awesome prt..
Loved it..

End of the prt was kickaas...

60th anniversary.. Grand children..
Haha..

Thnks for the pm..

Originally posted by: shishiksg

Lovely the update fully
It was fab
Vl miss ur writngs

Originally posted by: kals82

hi aishwa,

ofcourse u got the first place..

thank u for ur awesome.. and long comments... u make up most of the comments in this TS..

only bcoz of u i extended this story...

love u too...

Originally posted by: kals82

thank you...

tanveer is never a part of any story i write...😉😉

i hate the name and character

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

Awesome update. So beautifuly written. Perfect ending. Loved it.


The last sentences u write r so true. Pls di dont stop writing for this stupid cvs.
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: gowtu

U too kalyani..

Plz dnt stop writing..

For the stupid cv's..

Thy ruined.our asya so long ago..

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

lovely...how cute...zoya was sad as asad was marrying...someone else...lol
thank god we'd all happy moments...no negativity...

since December i miss asya whenever i log into IF...i guess this news doesn't effect me that much...but u please don't stop writing...asya will now remain alive through our words n memories...love them so much!!

Originally posted by: Sneha8337

Nice