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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
Chapter 17

Aww that was so cute
Lovely
Hehe d questionare
First question 😆
Hehe asad's fight
Aww he lovd his mother so much
Lovd their questions to each odr
So adorable
Zoya is so honest n i lovd dat he lovd the questions answer
Lovd the way zoya was thinking abt her wud b child
N lovd d way she described autumn
Actually u
N the last part was lovely
Awesome


Edited by riddhi1206 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
Chapter 18

It was so cute,...
Aww lovd the conversation
Aww they missed each odr
Asad wanted her to b by his side
So cute
Aww she was also engrossed in his thots
So cute
Love wud b too early to say but its nt only physial attraction
But mental too
So cute..
Aww lovely he stopped her

Chapter 19

Okay that was d most adorable update till now
It was cho chweet
Aww lovd how zoya went to him n gave him coffee
Lovd how she learned crocheting
Hehe quite smart
Ht dogs n marshmallow s
Aww lovd that part where u wrote that the same scenario shud b everyday
So he planned to take her out..
Bt this was btter
Aww k just lovd d garden scene
So cute
N i love d thing that zoya cums n sit btw his legs
The thots inf the garden that asad had
Superb
Amazing
This is d best update
I really wanna read this update again n again
Genuinely its awesome
I m sure he is in love now
Adorable


Edited by riddhi1206 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
Chapter 20

First of ol congo fr new thread
Update was wonderful
Lovd d whole horse riding part
The running part
The concerned part
Wonderful
So finally he asked her
And she answered r in a funny way
So sweet
Oye hoye najma knows it
Rashid dont worry u will b proofed wrong
Zoya is lovely girl
Superb
Amazing
I m liking the story alot now
Hey wen u read d comments
Plz hit likes, so i will knw u read it n if u wish u can reply too i will check it
Edited by riddhi1206 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Chapter 21

Hey i m so sorry i know i havent continued commenting, actually i got busy..
Sorry
The update is very nice
Oh so they got married, lovely description of how their life had moved on..
Hey i guess asad is now rely fallen fr her.
Omg back to taklu's den..
Oye taklu , everything doesnt goes on money n all , sumtimes its frm heart oo
Oh he guessed it
Arghhh he insulted him so bad..
He is so bad, they r nt playing there is a baby btw..
Lovd how asad is possesive abt d baby..
God, again dat money..
Lovely how he showed him down by saying nt to nterrupt in their marriaage
that taklu is nt going to let off easily..
Excited to read ahead..
Lovely part
Written amazingly..


Edited by riddhi1206 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Chapter 22

Hey that was lovely
Oh yay!!
Zoya also loves him ..
Yay yay!!
😆Heh
Oh so asad said everything..
N she brought that asad back
Lovd d promise..
Oh so cute..
Lovely update
Good job..

Edited by riddhi1206 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Chapter 23

Lovely chapter
Oh so they revealed all d things..
Good..
Oh so she was feared of losing their baby
Bt why suddenly
Oh so difgivult to ontact
Long distance relationship..
Nice one..
Hehe cute one..
Lovd it'...
Hope they get together soon..
Edited by riddhi1206 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Chapter 24

That was very nice
Oh humi darling is back
Lovely
So she knws abt it now..
Hehe her opinion regarding asad
Hmm letter letter khel rahe ho
God its really creating bad impression of asad in front of humera
Hope everythng goes well
Awww so cute , zoya feeling like a mommy
So sweet
Lovely chapter, bcoz of d baby part it added grace to it
Awesome
Lvd it
Edited by riddhi1206 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Thank you ever so much for the pm been waiting like forever... Love this story! Thank you!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update
Ghafoor is scared for hiding the truth
He was pale during conversation
Zoya called asad & he said to call him after 15 mins
Asad wanted to call back but stopped himself
After 11 yrs both talked on phone like normal people
Zoya said she wants to meet him in person
Hope truth come out & they sort it out their misunderstanding
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
chapter 25

hey that was a lovely update
god this taklu!!
he is doing this all stupid gestures
arghh i hate u taklu..
wat zoya lost her baby?
oh no!
bt asad didnt came!?
so sad
poor zoya
bt the update was nevertheless fantastic
waiting fr the story to unfold quickly..
lovd it so much n u so much

Edited by riddhi1206 - 11 years ago

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