Pain of rejection - Asya TS part 2 on pg 9

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This story starts from asad calling off his nikkah with zoya when she returned back from Ajmer & tanveer declaring her pregnancy to asad. ( here zoya had not slapped tanveer & tanveer had not revealed to zoya about her abbu being alive)

Zoya couldn't believe her eyes & ears. The man whom she loved & trusted more than herself had once again broken her heart. After all the misunderstandings & pain she was ready to give him a second chance. She knew asad is innocent. That's the main reason she came back to save him from that witch. But he himself once again went & fell in her trap. She felt like a fool. Even after all this he is not ready to see tanveer's real face. He is not even having a suspicion on her. She know asad is only trusting his bestie but even after this much problems he feels like his bestie is innocent. Zoya is fed up. Fed up by proving herself in front of him. Even if she shout truth he prefer to believe the polite lies of tanveer. She came into conclusion that he can never trust her & she will be never his priority. She saw tanveer smirking at her. She felt disgusted. This women can stoop so low. She doesn't even want to know about her dirty trick this time. She tried her level best to bring out this women's real face. But she failed miserably. What can she do if asad prefer to believe tanveer over her again & again. She is determined that she will not cry any more for that man. He doesn't deserve it. She went to her room without uttering a word.

Even dilshad & najma was in same condition. Najma was lying on dilshad's lap & crying her heart out in dilshad's bedroom. They both were really happy to see zoya back in KV. They were in seventh heaven when zoya declared that she ready to give a second chance for asad & she ready for the nikkah. But asad again broke everyone's happiness. Dilshad was worried about zoya. She praying to Allah to give strength for zoya. She was hoping that she won't do anything to herself.
Najma: ammi why it always happens to us? We never deserve any happiness in the life? We suffered for past 17 yrs. then zoya came into our life by spreading happiness. But now everything is finished.
Dilshad: I don't know why asad broke my zoya's heart once again? How will that poor girl bear all this?
Najma: I am scared for zoya ammi. Should we go & see her once?
Dilshad: she is a strong girl beta. She needs time. But I won't let her live in this misery. I won't allow tanveer to enjoy when my zoya is crying.
Najma: I can't understand ammi what are you trying to say?
Dilshad: you will come to know soon beta.

Next day morning

Asad came to KV in the morning. He went to his worksite & sat there for the whole night cursing himself for spoiling his zoya's life. After all the chaos he had created she came back to him & she was ready to accept him & give a second chance. But he once again broke her heart. He can't reveal truth to her, it will only hurt her more. He had became just like his abbu. He can give only pain to his love his zoya. He was getting worried about her condition. But he don't have the guts to face her once again.
Dilshad's & najma's face turn in to anger by seeing him. Zoya was no where to be seen. Tanveer was sitting in the hall & working on some designs. When he was about to go to his room dilshad called him.
Dilshad: asad I need to talk to you. I am not asking the reason for breaking your nikkah with zoya. It's crystal clear that even after all this you prefer tanveer over zoya. But let me make it clear it with you. If you want you can marry tanveer I won't stop you. But I will never accept her as my dil. Zoya will be here as my own daughter & I will fulfill all my responsibilities towards her. So you & tanveer are not allowed to be any where near my zoya. I won't allow you people to hurt her more.
Dilshad left from there.
Najma: bhaijaan I completely agree with ammi. For me zoya is only my Bhabhi I will not give that position to any one. Especially to a women like tanveer.
She too left from there. Before tanveer could pacify asad he too left to his room.
Tanveer's thoughts: run jammy run how much you want but at last you will come to me only. I don't want all this love & respect. You can give that to your zoya. I only want to enjoy the status in the society by being your wife.

Dilshad went to zoya's room. She was lying down in her bed. It was like a lifeless body. There was no emotions in her face. Dilshad caressed her face. She got up seeing dilshad.
Dilshad: you have not ate anything at least drink this beta.
She forcefully made zoya to drink milk.
Dilshad: beta I know you are going through a difficult phase. Beta I am ashamed of my son. For breaking your heart like this. But beta don't surrender in front of those people who hurt you. You should show them that they can't affect you. My zoya is real fighter.

Zoya felt like her phupi is correct. She shouldn't behave like this. It will only give satisfaction to tanveer.

Zoya: ji phupi I will not allow any one to play with my feelings.
Dilshad: zoya I know you consider me as your ammi. As a mother I have some duties & responsibilities. Please allow me to fulfil it.
Zoya: phupi you are like my ammi. You have complete right over me.
Dilshad: beta you have to come out from this misery. Just trust your phupi. Today is Chand Raat. Beginning of Ramzan month. I want my zoya back.
Zoya hugged her phupi.

Chand Raat

Every one was waiting out in the garden to see Chand. Asad was steeling glances at zoya. But zoya didn't even bother to see asad or tanveer. When they saw Chand they wished Chand Mubarak each other. When asad was about to wish zoya Chand Mubarak he saw a young gentle man coming towards zoya.
Man: Chand Mubarak ho
Zoya: aapko bhi. Maaf kijiye mein ne aapko pehachana nahi.
Man: oh don't worry zoya. We meeting for the first. I am haider sheik.
He extended his hands towards her.
Haider: it's a pleasure to meet you zoya!
Zoya: same here.
Dilshad came towards them with najma.
Haider: Chand Mubarak ho Khala
Dilshad: tumey bhi beta. Zoya he is my friend iman sheik's son. Iman, his wife zubida & I were classmates. They are settled in Dubai. Every year they spend Ramzan ki paak mahina in Bhopal. Iman had some emergencies. So he & zubida will come only towards Ramzan. I have told till they arrive haider can stay with us. Zoya he is an architect. He too joined his family business 1 yr back after his studies. Frankly speaking I have some other intentions also. I have spoke with iman & zubida. Actually they are interested with an alliance with you zoya.
Every one was shocked. Especially asya. Haider's parents have spoke with him. So he was not shocked like others.
Tanveer was in seventh heaven.
Tanveer: this is a great news. You both make a great pair.
Dilshad: we didn't ask your opinion tanveer. I know what is good for my daughter.
Dilshad, Zoha & najma went inside. Tanveer too followed them. Asad was standing still rooted there. His ammi is planning zoya to get married with haider. How can he see his zoya with someone else? For the first time he understood zoya's pain when she saw him & tanveer together. He had to speak with his ammi.

Zoya's room.

Zoya, najma & dilshad was having a discussion.
Dilshad: beta as a mother I want you to move on in your life. I can't see you in pain when tanveer has grabbed your happiness. For that you should keep an open mind. Almost this full Ramzan month haider will be here. I have told everything about you to haider & his family. They don't have any problem. If you & haider like each other they are ready to accept you. This full month spend sometime with him beta. If you like him we can carry on otherwise we will say no to them.
Zoya was lost in her own thoughts. She knew dilshad has a point. Even tough she loves asad he never cared her feelings. He had already rejected her. Then why she should wait for him like a fool? But will she ever be able to throw asad away from her heart? But Atleast she should try. Haider seems to be a good guy. He came to meet her even after knowing her past.
Zoya: I will try phupi.
Next day seheri time in morning

After seheri time from today every one will be in rooza. Entire family has been gathered in KV hall. After prayer they all started with fruits. Haider was passing fruits to zoya. She smiled & accepted it. Haider engaged zoya & najma in his chit chats. Zoya too responded & she was smiling at his jokes. Asad felt like someone had stabbed him. Zoya was so comfortable with haider. It seems like with in few minutes they both became good friends. Asad left from there. Tanveer noticed asad. She had pressurise him to marry her ASAP. Slowly others also left leaving Zoha alone.
Haider: so zoya I want know everything about you. So what was your subject?
Zoya: computer software.
Haider: that's cool. Your favorite colour.
Zoya: blue & pink
Haider: your age
Zoya: 20 yours?
Haider: 22
Haider: favorite food?
Zoya: pizza
Haider: favorite gadget
Zoya: iPad
They continued there chatting session. Zoya was feeling very comfortable with haider. But still she can't think about haider in a different way. She wondered whether she can give asad's place to any one.

Asad's room

Asad was almost ready for going to office. He was still not able to talk to dilshad about haider & zoya. He was thinking about the allegations zoya said about tanveer 1 month back. At that time he felt like it's her silly doubts. But now when he is thinking he felt like zoya will never say anything if she is not sure about it. In the past when ever he had never listened to her towards the end he had to regret.
Tanveer came inside.
Tanveer: jammy I think it's high time that we get married Before someone gets to know about my pregnancy. Now that you don't have to worry about zoya. Haider is a good guy & I am sure she will accept haider.
Asad's face changed when he heard about zoya & haider.
Asad: tanveer you are a married women. So first legally you should get divorce from your husband. Don't worry I will come with you & talk to him. We can get a mutual divorce. Since you are pregnant we can get married only after your delivery.
Tanveer: jammy mere Izad ka sawal hai.
Asad: tanveer I am not running away. I am ready to marry you & accept the kid. But I want you to be my legally wedded wife. For that we have to wait 9 months. I want you to trust me. Everyone knows what had happened between us. No one will blame you. Please trust me.
Tanveer felt like she had fell in her own trap. She had completed almost 3 months of her pregnancy. If asad didn't marry her everyone comes to know the truth about her pregnancy.
Asad left from there. He saw haider & zoya going out in haider's car.
Dilshad was sending them off.
Asad came towards her.
Asad: ammi this is not correct. We don't know much about haider. You are sending zoya all alone with him? What if something happens to her?
Dilshad: asad I told you to stay away from zoya. FYI haider is my close friend's son. I know him very well. Any way he won't do any thing like what you have done to her.
She left from there. Asad had no idea what to do. He wanted to come out from this mess. For that he should enquire about tanveer. He felt that there is some mystery about all of a sudden zoya's appearance in KV & declaring to give him a second chance. Moreover tanveer too followed him in Ajmer. He felt suspicious. He wanted to know truth. Did really something happened between them on that night? Was zoya correct about tanveer? Only one person can help him at the moment.

Asad had called Ayaan & asked him to meet at there usual place. Asad had explained everything to him from tanveer's entry till today's events.
Ayaan: bhaijaan I think zoya was correct. Zoya knows you trust tanveer blindly as she is your bestie. Even after knowing that she won't put forward such allegations simply. It's commen sense bhaijaan. I feel you did a mistake by not enquiring about what zoya had said about tanveer. I know bhaijaan you were only supporting your bestie. But as said we should see both sides of a problem. See bhaijaan tanveer is already married & her marriage didn't work out. What if she had a soft corner towards you when she was getting your care & affection? What if she purposefully tried to create a rift between you & zoya. You said on your jashn saguat tanveer's blood sample had been changed which was taken by zoya. Zoya had a picture of a women with a stone eye changing it. I still remember on your sangeeth ceremony zoya had mere escaped from that chandelier. I remember poorvi saying that she had seen a women with stone eye upstairs. More over it was zoya who was dancing under that chandelier. Tanveer was no were near it. After that tanveer had confessed herself that due to her husband she had lost an eye before zoya could inform you. When we connect all this I feel somewhere tanveer is related to all this. It's said that when people are too polite it's dangerous.
Asad was awestruck by ayaan's words. Being a best friend to tanveer he forgot to protect zoya. Moreover he always insulted her by trusting tanveer's words.
Ayaan: don't worry bhaijaan I will go to Kanpur & enquire about her. We will find out the truth.

Note: I love Zoha bonding in QH. But I really liked mohit & surabhi as a couple. So that's why I wrote this TS.

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I loved it...

R u going to show haider and zoya as couple...

I want ASYA at the end...

Pls don't seperate them... 😒
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awesome start.. Love it.. Totally different storyline.. Continue soon.. Thanks for pm..
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nice story update soon.
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nice update continue soon
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Awesome update Uma di. Love it. Dilshad is the world's best mother. Love the way she try to make zoya cheer. Glad that zoya ignoring asad and make herself comfortable with Haider. So asad is jealous for ZoHa. I love it. Asad is getting doubt now and all credit goes to ayan. Waiting to c how asad solve the mystrey and win zoya's love and trust again. Thanks for pm. Update soon
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As long as you don't do something disgusting in the name of a twist by making Haider and Zoya related afterwards, I can accept ZoHa as a couple in fanfiction! I think Surbhi and Mohit look good together, but I am used to Sanaya and Mohit! I didn't watch MJHT much, but I did catch a few episodes and those images are still in my brain! I can't deal with incest! I was forced to read Oedipus and it was disgusting. A son and mother had kids together, granted they didn't know the nature of their relationship when they got married, but it was disgusting!
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hey tis is amazing...
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Originally posted by: aksasya

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I loved it...

R u going to show haider and zoya as couple...

I want ASYA at the end...

Pls don't seperate them... 😒



Thanks
Even in my dreams I can't separate asya

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