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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">that was just amazing
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sorry fr late comments
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but that was superb
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thank god ayan is safe
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but isnt unusual things happening
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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">welcome written on d wall
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girl in d washroom
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kinfe in the air
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mummy!! to scary
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but superbly written
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aww so cute
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loved how arnav goes n wakes up zoya
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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">so cute
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haha arnav will come to wke up asad n zoya after marriage
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hehe
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aww adorable
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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">lovd how she went to khushi asad n arjun
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ADORABLE
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lovd how she huged khushi
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😃<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">pecked asad on cheek
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n embraced arjun
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CUTE
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well written
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but srsly ayaan plz take care
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bcoz all these things are quite weird n fr sure nt gud
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i guess nw they will realize that something is fr sure wrng
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hopes nothing goes wrong
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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">or else i will col bhaseena bi
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even d ghost der will gt scard
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so not to mention
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dat it was jst
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wnderful, amazing, superb
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plz update soon
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Thnk u for such a lovely
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We r glad ur loving it
Yeah we r also loving the brother and sis
Bonding.
I'm sure the ghost will
Definitely get sacred of
Bhaseena bi
And again thnx for a lovely
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh god!

Super interesting!

The story is shaping up really nicely!

Loving it! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rockstar_16

hi alisha...nice name
my name is soumya


Thats a lovely name
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rosyluck



Thnk u for such a lovely
Comment
We r glad ur loving it
Yeah we r also loving the brother and sis
Bonding.
I'm sure the ghost will
Definitely get sacred of
Bhaseena bi
And again thnx for a lovely
Comment


NO NEED TO DO THAT
ITS AMAZING
N U PPL DESERVE IT
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read all ofthe chapter amazing
well done girls
All the couples are my fave too
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome updt
all is ayaan dream
other play prank on aayaan
but wht about dummy
cont soon
thnx fr pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
Great story, just finish reading it. Can't wait for the next chapter
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey guys here is the update. Guys i've changed my name from masteruni6 to SprinklesOfLove.

Chapter 5 : Revealing The Truth?

" What dummy?" Arjun asked.


" Ayaan : " The one in the bathroom with white dress and blood stains on it

Asad : " We didn't put any dummy "


Arnav : " Yeah we just did the knife and the wall prank "


Ayaan was hell shocked to hear this. He clearly remembered seeing the girl and her eyes flickr open.


Ayaan : " I saw that girl and her eyes even opened " he said trying to make them understand.


Humaira : " Guys what happened."

Zoya : " We can hear you and we heard Ayaan scream, so we came downstairs. " She said coming downstairs with the other girls.

Khushi : " What happened Arnav? Is everything alright?"

Arnav explained every thing about how they planned the prank on Ayaan and how Ayaan saw a girl.

Purvi : " Ayaan I think you might have hallucinated it."

Arjun : " Yeah because you were scared and maybe because of fright you might have imagined it."

Ayaan : " Guys believe me! I saw a girl " he tried to explain, but they wouldn't listen.

Humaira : " I think we should go and check it "

Arjun : " Let's go "

They all went towards the bathroom and opened the bathroom and found nothing .

Purvi : " There is nothing here, see i told you it was your imagination."

Ayaan : " Maybe it was my imagination." He said thinking carefully.

Arnav : " Ok then lets just get back to sleep."

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Ayaan heard some noises, which disturbed his sleep, he tried to ignore it, but it just got worse. He decided to go and check it. As he descended down the stairs he heard sobs of what seemed like a little girl.

He started to follow the sound and reached a dark room.

Ayaan : " Hello is anyone there."

" Maybe or maybe not." A voice came near his ear.

He immediately turned around saw there was no one. Cold air filled the room and there was nothing except darkness.

Ayaan : " Why the hell are you after me." He literally screamed.

This time there was no reply and silent again filled the room.

He turned around to go when something hugged his knee, he tried to move his leg away, but the grip was too strong. He pinched himself to see if he was dreaming, but all his effort went in vain and he was still there.

He realized it was a little girl, but he couldn't see her face properly. He tried to shake his leg of again, but this time she dug her long nails inside his skin making blood ooze out. He screamed in agony and again she dug her nails, but only deeper this time.

He could hear her laughter echoing in the room. The girl looked up at Ayaan and smiled evilly at him. He realized it was the same girl he saw in the bathroom and that's when it hit him, that the bathroom incident wasn't an imagination. He screamed for help louder and louder.

" No one can hear you Ayaan." She looked at him with an evilly smile.

Ayaan : " Let go of me please."

" But I want to play Ayaan." She said swinging back and forth on his knee.

********

The boys woke up and found that Ayaan was already awake.

Asad : " Don't you think Ayaan wakes up early ever since he came here." He said to Arjun.

Arjun : " Well that's a good change." He said while getting up.

Arnav came in to the room and saw Ayaan awake.

Arjun : " Today's day should be remembered."

Asad : " Why "

Arnav : " Because for the first time in history Ayaan woke up early."

They all shared a good laugh and enjoyed chatting.

*******

They all were sitting in the boys room and chatting when Purvi noticed something different.

Purvi : " Ayaan why are you so quiet today."

Zoya : " Yeah Ayaan usually you're cracking some stupid jokes and laughing at them yourself."

Ayaan : " It's nothing." Was all he said.

Humaira held Ayaan's hand and noticed that they were extremely cold.

Humaira : " Ayaan why is your hand so cold." She said while holding his other hand.

Ayaan : " It's nothing." He said again and pulled his hand away from Humaira.

Humaira : " Guys I think I left my phone in the room so I'll just go and check ."

Saying so she went upstairs and went to her room. She saw her phone on the bed and went to grab it when she heard some noises from the cupboard. She listened to it carefully again and heard there was something in the cupboard making noises.

She went closer to the cupboard and held the handle. She slowly opened it and what she saw traumatised her. The whole cupboard was full of blood, but this wasn't the thing that traumatised her, it was Ayaan. Yes, Ayaan's body fully covered in blood with gashes all over his body.

Humaira : " If...if Ay...Ayaan's b...b...body is here then who is d...d...d...Downstairs."

That is it guys hope you like it !!

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Edited by SprinklesOfLove - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ooh the suspense, can't wait to read the next part 😲
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
It's cliffy end.
Eagerly waiting for next part
Is ayaan alive or not
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

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