TAKE MEMR.KHAN.. an ASYA(kabhi) OS part 3 @P-21-18/3/14(16+) - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: mariam1368

Kal this was lovely and so sweet!
Pictures were really nice... Still i remember that asya
electric shock wala hug scene.
Beautifully written.
KSG is always Asad For Mee


hi mariam,

thank u for ur comments..

it is a run down the memory lane of qubool hai...which i waws crazy about in the past



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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: anita257

loves it. AWESOME

Write more...



Originally posted by: Linnet


Kals make it 2 shot

Just loved it

Keep writing

😛


thank u guys,

the part 2 is here.. hope u will like that too..

love

kalyani
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: aksasya

IT WAS AMAZING.⭐️..I DON'T KNW WHAT HAPND Y'DAY...BUT THIS WAS AWESOME...😛


hai dear,

thank u.. i hope u will like the next part 2..

will be waiting for ur comments...😛😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: pwenCezz_symrun

AWESOME!!!
i just loved it..it took me back to the lane of the memory..
would love to read the second chapter too..😊


hai

thank u.. and the part 2 is here.. hope u will like that too
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Very well written i liked it. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: Divi.C

ohh myy god...

i had just thought about this nly n u had made os of it...
it should be in serial also...
their 1st in that farmhouse...


Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

Lovely os!!! AsYa bhaang wala episode!!!! Wish I could go back to dat tym


ha guys,

thank u for ur comments.

the part 2 is here.. let me know what u think about that
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Hey Kalyani,

This is so subtle and beautiful
I so loved it. Zoya sadi take me.😲
Ok our Adku never does anything without some nudges isn't it!
Well my Asad does., the only Man who is high on testosterone.😆
But beautifully captured. one of my fav songs after hulchul hui.
Great job,👏


hi juliet,

i am blushing seeing ur comments...😳😳

yeah.. zoya has to take the intiiative .. as asad is very cautoius about her..

ur asad has to be filled with testosterone.. as u r filled with estrogen dear... god does create people in pair..😉😉

thank u for ur comments...

just taking a bow..😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

i am getting more right? I mean hell i wanna know exactly how Asad took her. which position? i know Jules has set the bar to a seven and Navi compromised with a 5 and I am soon gonna drop lower to 3 after my exams so tell me what are you giving? 🤣


hai sadie,

u r geting more... but what more.. u will read in the update.. if u r not satisfied... will try exclusive part 3.. for u...

i will settle for 2 maximum.. dear.. jules and navi will handle higher numbers... as they have mastered the arts...

when r u giving ur 3.. hope ur exams end soon..

thank u for ur comments
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: pinky06

Hi 😊Wow wonderful is dear..honestly I don't c qh..so dint know which scene U were talking about...but this is was so nostalgic..dreamy and wonderful..

Asad took zoya in bridal style😳...just lovely...and haider dadi n everyone s coco was so cute😊
The pics were really lovely...and where could asad possibly take her for deflowering her??It had to b that place...bol na Halke halke ...oye hoye...just awesome...
the kisses were😳..mr khan take me...plz mr khan do the job soon😉..
cont..
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I definetly want part 2...u have to write another part..prety plzzz..
Continue sooonish..thanks for the pm😃

hai pinks,


thank u for ur wonderful comments...

it has to be KV.. or this place for me.. i hate the SM...

nice to know u liked it.. the part 2 is here.. let me know did u like that...


it is walk down the memory lane for me.. too

love

kalyani


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Posted: 11 years ago
#70


This part goes to the crazy4asya(shrasti), shreyamehra, aksasya, and my cutie pie sis.. anitha

here are whole lot of asya(kabhi) scenes I have repeated watched in youtube in the past..i have given a few here.. I am thinking about writing one shot.. or three shot on them.. let me know which 2 u want me to write..

1. Tractor journey from mangalpur

2. Blueberry cheese cake..

3. The walima

4. Holi- bathroom scene

5. The toss scene

6. Zoya imagination about asad after the first engagement..as he comes to call her for dinner..

Anyways.. the list still long.. let me know..if u guys want to read it..

Part 2

Zoya was overwhelmed looking at the farm house, with her minds filled with the past. It looked like devu ju for her. Just like today, the other day was also started with her in search of her abbu, and ended by realizing her love for asad, and today also it started on the same note, she was so upset with the turn of events, but once again ending in the arms of her love to become one with him in the most intimate way.

Asad led her closer to the front door, only for her to see ASYA VILLA... in the name board, and she caressed it.

Z: mr.khan.. this is ours...

A: yes.. Mrs Khan.. our love Retreat.. like it..

Z: I love it.. but when did u.. buy this..

A: long back,.. Before our first nikkah attempt.. I thought I will bring you here for our SR.. and confess to you that the words I uttered the other day.. was not under the intoxication of baangg.. but under the intoxication of my love for you.. but things went horribly wrong..and this place used to give me peace.. during our tough time... it gave me hope... always.. shall we..

They both entered the house hand in hand.. and zoya was mesmerized by the place.. it was dimly lighted, and in one corner a table for 2 was setup.. she explored the house, and opened the side door to see the gazebo dimly lite with LEDS... the chill breeze caressing her face.. it looked like romance in the air.. and then she looked at herself, she was in her night dress.. so odd out.. and turned to see asad looking at with all the love in his eyes. She wanted to be perfect for him on this day.

Z: Mr.Khan.. u said u bought me dress remember...

A: yeah it is in our room.. and he took her to the master bedroom, and showed her the cupboard, she opened it to see different dresses from jeans, to saree arranged there, and she opened the next to see filled with asad dresses, and she picked the black pant and shirt and left it in the cot for him, and took the pink saree for her, to recreate that day.. asad stood there and smiled at her thoughts. Zoya took the towel and moved towards the bathroom to refresh her..

Asad held her hand ...

A: Mrs..khan.. any help...

Z: Not Today.. MrKhan... and winked at him and entered the bathroom, asad took his dress and went towards the guest room to get ready. He came out in 15 minutes refreshed, and checked the dinner arrangement, and stood at the side door and watched the dark clouds of the sky with the occasional lightning...


two hands crawled on his chest and hugged his shoulders and felt a feather touch on his back.. and zoya hugged him from behind he held the hand, and turned to see his zoya.. looking stunning in the pink saree and open hair.. and her eyes twinkling at him... he pulled her closer and his hands memorized her face with his touch.. and he bent down to peck her lips lightly and hugged her tightly.

A: Dinner Mrskhan...

Z: when I am hugging the feast.. do I need dinner.. Mr.Khan..

A: Mrs. Khan... you need all the energy today... to enjoy ur feast..later and winked.. and he took her to the table, being the gentleman he is.. he pulled the chair for her to sit. Then he kept the plate infront of her and served her the starters of baby corn fry and sweet corn soup, as he pulled the chair in the opposite and kept a plate for himself, zoya stretched and took the plate. As he looked up, and then pulled himself closer to her and sat next to her. Zoya took the soup and fed him and then herself in turns.. and she took baby corn in the toothstick and fed him and occasionally her hand brushed his manly lips..sending shivers in her stomach.

She served the main of butter naan and malai kofta, asad pulled the plates to his side..(I a m bored with pizza)

A: we are equal partners.. Mrs.Khan.. and then he took a piece of naan dipped at the gravy and took it her mouth.. and fed her.. and he also ate in turns. Zoya was staring at him with awe... and her eyes drifted down from the manly face to the broad chest.. as 2 buttons were left wide open for her to drool. Her hands were itching to workship them, she could no longer control herself, and got up and moved closer to asad. As he looked up, she split his legs and sat on his left thigh with her hands around his neck. Asad was surprised her actions.. then thought.. MRs.Khan.. can do anything.. and held her waist by his left hand and pulled her closer to him. He continued to feed her as if nothing happened. Zoya hands slipped from his neck to his broad chest and started drawing patterns in them, and asad hands played piano in her hips for her delight.. the mating of the fingers continued.. as zoya hands caressed his nipples, asad hands climbed high and squeezed her bosom with soft touch.. and zoya sighed in pleasure. Both of them played the mating game, with the fire of desire burning inside them, and yet they showed as if nothing is happening. Asad was still feeding her the food, as her hands shifted to the next nipples, his hands sqeezed her closer to him and reached it next destination and continue its journey there.

Asad was so lost in her touch, when he took food to her mouth, he accidently let the gravy dip on her saree...

Z: mr.khan.. look u spilled the gravy..

A: sorry.. I was lost...

Zoya hands went back to his neck and held him closer and whispered..

Z: so lost in me... and pecked his lips...

A: hmmm... and kissed her.. softly... the loud noise of the sudden thunder shaked zoya and she held him tightly.. and the drops of the rain.. played music for their romance and the earthly smell from the rain.. filled the atmosphere with love... zoya looked up from asad...

It is raining.. just like that day...

A: yes..it is...

Zoya got up from his lap and moved towards the door...

A: zoya.. dessert...

Z: later mr.khan.. and she ran outside into the rain... and played in the rain like a kid.. and spinned herself.. in rain..asad stood by the door and drank the beauty with his eyes the saree becoming her second skin and enhancing her curves for him..zoya looked at him and invited him, and he shook his head in a NO and walked inside the house for zoya dismay.. as she was above to follow him inside.. he heard the music was BOL..NA.. Halke.. softly filling the garden.. from the stereo.. and asad walked towards her with the rain drops drenching from top to toe.. revealing his six packs to her..

He went down on his knees infront of her and extended his hands towards her and asked..

A: Mrs. Khan.. will you dance with me...

Z: with pleasure.. she put her hand in his..



And they swayed in each others.. for the music.. and the rain down poured on them, and it just added fire to their passion and hunger for each other.. asad hands came close to her face and cupped her face for a kiss, and zoya felt shy and moved towards the gazebo to his pleasant surprise. He followed her inside and pulled her in his arms for a passionate kiss.. as the song came to an end.. asad sweeped zoya in his arms.. and moved inside the house... to let the fire of passion burn them ...


The END...

@sadie I finished writing the second part before I read ur comments.. so I am letting u imagine the angle...from 0 to 90 degree.. hope the bedroom helps u in ur imagination...


and this is asya bedroom.. and imagine zoya feeling shy all of a sudden and they both played hide and seek in the curtain. And zoya blindfolds asad... Before making love...


Love to know your comments... but even your likes are liked... so leave a like... if u liked it enough...

Edited by kals82 - 11 years ago

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