Ye hausla..kaise jhuke 'ASYA TS' Part 1 updated page 5

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Hola my lovely foram vasio! 🤗

Those who don't know me, hey! M eshita! A groupie! And m currently writing THE DARK SHADOWS. This is my third piece of fiction!

I am highly inspired by satyamev jayate guys! What a show! Hats off. The rage and the angst I felt, is inexpressible. So, to vent my frustration out, I had to write! Since I have written, I needed to share! And.. to share , what's better than forum!
And you, my poor readers, have to take the torture! 😆

Anyways, its a three shot and is written taking karan and surbhi as asad and zoya respectively. However, you are free to imagine any of your favorite actors. Hence, I DO NOT need to shift my story. ( Honestly, I really found it idiotic. Shift your work because karan is no more a part! Hell, he was the one who created asad. Raquesh is just taking the lead ahead. As long as the matter is related to QH, how does it matter author ne kisko asad rakha hai! readers are free to imagine any one! 😡 )

NOTE
This is just a piece of fiction and my mind's imagination. It has nothing to do with reality. However, the content is inspired by an indian show 'satyamev jayate'. Neither the author nor the plot promote Rape. Its a hazardous crime and needs to be stopped. World wide.






The story is about a 19 year old normal college going happy go lucky kind of girl named zoya who faces the worst of the fate. Its about how she becomes the prey of those hungry human faced devils. Its about how she didn't give up! Its about how her life eventually changes when her family stands with her firm and still. Its about how her university and friends held her hands to pull her out of this trauma. And lastly, its about how she refuses to file a complaint against the same man.


The story is about a 28 year old man named asad ahmed khan who mercilessly raped a young a girl even when he was NOT a rapist, when heavily drunk. Its about how his life changes when he sees the same very girl after 8 months at the same place!


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P.S Since its a fiction, expect high voltage drama and extreme situations

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Good..? Bad..? Worst..? Intolerable..? Do tell.
Press likes, if you want to read further.! 😊

Sayonara!
Love
eshita

**Better the response, quicker is the update!! 😆

BUDDY ME FOR P.M
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Niyatiswaragini thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing storyline
dieing to read forward
do pm me
i dnt knw how to react
me 2 lovd satyameva jyate
asad rapist
zoya victim
very intrstng
update asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg!! Omg!! Omg!!! 😲
I soo want to know what will happen!!
DO continue soon... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Total agree with u that satymave jayte is a eye opener show...👍🏼

Concept is intresting...👏

Asad is a rapeist...😲😡

poor zoya...😔

Waiting for update egarly so update soon...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting...😊
You sure, about the three shot...though... for a whole gamut of emotions & expressions to be covered...
Continue soon..😃
🤗
Mili.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey intrstng stry ln.. U should continue... Nd yes it's a grt shw... But i mssd the vry 1st epi :( :( :(...
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Interesting
Lagta h satyamev jayate ka asar h lol
Interesting indeed,
Cont. Soon..
Pmme
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Please continue soon, with a long update, the sneak peek has already go me at the edge of my seat


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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's wonderful ... U should continue 😃
Want an update fast 😳

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