1#Tumhe Pyaar Kab Tak Na Karenge Bhala: AsYa FF (Ch1-5|#2Link pg1)

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sona_naksh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#201

lemme read n i ll comment 😆

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#202

brilliant update...😊

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LAKSHMI KRISHNA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#203

Nice update.poor asad.i hate zoya's rude behaviour towards asad.

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Prashni Singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#204

Like the progression! 😃

Inimitable read! ⭐️

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-Astrid-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#205

Beauifully written...would love to read more😳...though I've always read your posts regarding the show,I have read very few of your works of fiction😔...but I'll surely catch up with them whenever I get time😊...update soon..err...I mean if you wish to😆

P.S.-Your index is awesome...the best I've seen so far😃

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love.asad.zoya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#206

Awesome update !!!!! 👏
Asad is so understanding ...love him ❤️ 😳
Zoya ... For some chapters " NO WORDS " 🤬
I know she will take time that's why I don't say anything against her 😛
Continue soon 😃

And good night 😆 sweet dreams about KaBhi 😉

Edited by love.asad.zoya - 11 years ago

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DevikaRavish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#207

Ankie... That was wonderful.. The pain of a woman who has lost her love and trying to handle the situation forced upon her.. beautifully written... 👏👏👏

I loved the car scene.. where she dozed off on his shoulder and he also dozed off peacefully after 2 weeks.. giving an insight of what Asad is going through.. 👏

Asad is so very adorable with lot of patience...He no doubts loves her a lot and the little gestures of him .. preparing maggi and coffee for her... touched my heart... 😊😊

I am so curious to now know what makes Zoya come out of her shell and accept Asad.. I am sure you have planned for something awsome.. So go on dear.. I am waiting to read more..

Take care and loads of love.. 🤗🤗