1#Tumhe Pyaar Kab Tak Na Karenge Bhala: AsYa FF (Ch1-5|#2Link pg1)

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Niyati Gupta

@Niyatiswaragini

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

superb amazing
i dnt think it was short
bt a fantastic part
plz pm me next part
niyati

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Anusmita

@KaBhilicious

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

This is so interesting.
Hope you will update the next part soon.

Edited by Anu_Asya - 11 years ago

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lasya13

@lasya13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Ankie ji... a new story!!!
wah!! Wah!!
amazing start...
interesting plot I must say...
waiting for the story to unfold
😃

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

You wrote something.

And you didn't tell me.

Again.

-_-

Well, I guess I should start checking my PMs more often... *sigh* Wait a sec, you didn't send that either -_- Aapiieee!! :"(

And yes, im mad at you.

-_-

Reswa for comment

unreswa -_-

Well at least I'm not in the 14th or 15th page as usual *sigh of relief*

^_^

Aapuu this is the most hatke story you have written till date... And i'm certainly not complaining ^_^

I really love the concept. Zoya's experience has made her lose faith in everyone, it seems. Bechari... Poor Asad too though :'(

Zoya's character seems totally different here. She hates everyone now because she thinks that everyone wants to take advantage of her but Im sure that with time she will love this family and her husband... Well I absolutely get the title now :D

Achha, the parts in italics are flashbacks right? And is Razia a good person... seemed so...

Well I was totally confused at the beginning, but I got it now. Asad is a really caring husband no?? *haaayeee mode on* He is giving her space to adjust, and even taking care of her, but Zoya... :(

Well I guess with time it will change ^_^

Continue this before a month passes -_-

Edited by Madame_Noddy - 11 years ago

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Aditi/Swathi

@CHOCOSWATHI

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

very happy to see u writing here again😃

all ur reminders are noted and accepted😆

except discontinuing😆😆

story is awesome 👏

loved the way u mixed present and past in memories of zoya

zoya loved shoaib but after his death ended in marriage with asad

does asad loves zoya??

for both bad and good news qubool hai😉😆

plz pm me on ur next update😃

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asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Ressy

unres

hey ankie😊

its interesting, plz pm me for the next

Edited by asyaarshilover - 11 years ago

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..Breeze..

@..Breeze..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

It's awesome! Love your posts always and yeah! It's super good as usual😊

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cool_sri

@cool_sri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Ur PM after a long time😛..miss ur posts...😕

Awesome update..but continue soon...😃

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manognasai

@manognasai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Ankie🤗
Firstly for ur Reminder🤣
Did I ever tell u how cute u r?
Oh,I see I never told that!Koi nahi...Ankie ji aap bahut cute ho!🤗
My exams khatam and I get to read a new FF...that too from Ankie!
Coming to the story...Its really interesting!
Feel bad for AsYa in the flashback!
At present,I think she is happy with Asad!
U have ur exams now?
All the best!Do well...
Update when u dont feel lazy!😆
Until then will wait like crazy!

Edited by manognasai - 11 years ago