1#Tumhe Pyaar Kab Tak Na Karenge Bhala: AsYa FF (Ch1-5|#2Link pg1)

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Ankie.. That was a Wonderful start and Brilliantly written... You have a strong hold on words and hats off to your imagination...

Honestly I was confused initially reading that Asad Ahmed Khan is her husband and later was still thinking it was with him that she had gone away in bike... but towards the end got the whole picture... beautiful...

Asad is such a gentle man... I guess he loves her a lot ...Interesting... 👏

awww... so so sweet of you ... Thanks a lot for the dedication..but I really don't think I deserve it... You are a brilliant writer who inspired me also to write... 😊

Keep smiling and take care... Have a rocking day.. 😊

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RAJ

@RAJLUVRIYA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Glad to c u back Ankie. I miss your writing. U r an amazing writing. U beautifuly penned it. The concept is very interesting.Initialy i m totaly confused about what happens in the story. I think asad is her husband and think that she went with him on the bike. Then towards the end everything cleared. Looks like asad love her so much. Lets c how asad make zoya fall in love with him. Waiting for next part. Your story reminds me SRK movie Rab ne bana di jodi. Thanks 4 pm. Taratari next chapter update karo. Ami wait korchi porar janno.

Edited by RAJLUVASYA - 11 years ago

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Mariya Khan

@ShaitaanKiKhala

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

wow amazing...i hope zoya start loving asad soon!

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..Zainab..

@..Zainab..

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Great Story, I see its already pretty famous it does have a great amount of potential.

I do prefer the fiesty, sexy, and dominating Asad, but so far I like it vice versa a bit.

Its good for a change seeing Zoya being rude to him, I think I am probably the only one

saying such a thing.

great going, keep going, and thank you for the pm.

Edited by _Littles12_ - 11 years ago

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

<font size="6">😡U SHOULD BE WITH YOUR BOOKS.😡
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Yes, I am studying. I only took a 10 minute break Aapieee jaan!! :'( 🤗 Btw im DONE with Macbeth for now :|

Edited by Madame_Noddy - 11 years ago

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Soumya

@Ceon

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

glad to see u bck. and de chapter ws more lovely. love ew

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

<font size="2">nib and ink? yes i will at once, when my brain is free from all the worries and stress am talking at the moment. i.e. after April. 😃😆</font>

nib n ink ...r u planning to update it ever ...i doubt ankie

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961111

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#108

i loved the concept ankie...waiting for the next updates so that things get clearer... it's good that you have already written 4 chapters 😆 write the rest soon too and post them ASAP...
loads of love 🤗

Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago