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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

Aww.. poor baby zoya in hospital..

and I like how he express his feelings..

and Zoya.. I want my ASAD back..

i just loved it..

continue soon..

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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

Trailblazer

+ 9

Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Prologue, Part 1 n Part 2

Unique concept👏😊

I am disgusted wid Asad🤢😡

How can he take advantage of an innocent girl😡

Bloody pervert n pedophile🤢😡

Feeling bad for Zoya😭

Will keep commenting on other parts😃

Updat soon n PM me😊

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

Stunner

+ 40

Posted: 11 years ago

#223

@ ImmortalLove-thanx a lot for loving it & commenting.
@zoyaah-thanky so much.
@ angel_juhi04-thanx for commenting dear .Will be waiting to know ur views for further parts. Yup will pm u pakka.

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#224

I know right Zan! And here she freaked us out by removing it!! Of course your dawg Ke jadoo...kamal kardiya..it was back in no time!

Yes.

Zoya getting Asad's attention...hmm..foolishly smart right?? See the the paradox???!!!

Wow!!

Asad weak! This is something worth watching..er reading. To see the depth of his feelings. And what he would do to keep Zoya happy...

Suddenly I'm kinda shipping them...ooopps. Just a lil bit. He he.

But don't you worry..I'm very much with Tannu!!
Up Tannu! I wanna know your story!

Mwahhh Ms Foxy eh Miss Bubble! Yay powerpuff girls!!

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Zanutix

@Zanutix

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: farz_parachute
I know right Zan! And here she freaked us out by removing it!! Of course your dawg Ke jadoo...kamal kardiya..it was back in no time!

Yes.

Zoya getting Asad's attention...hmm..foolishly smart right?? See the the paradox???!!!

Wow!!

Asad weak! This is something worth watching..er reading. To see the depth of his feelings. And what he would do to keep Zoya happy...

Suddenly I'm kinda shipping them...ooopps. Just a lil bit. He he.

But don't you worry..I'm very much with Tannu!!
Up Tannu! I wanna know your story!

Mwahhh Ms Foxy eh Miss Bubble! Yay powerpuff girls!!

I KNOW, RIGHT?!
It's like I'm suddenly shipping them too! Just a lil' bit! 😳 😆

Ooh, we have a VERY possessive Zoya here.

Asad's growing weak!

Oh! Oh! I got the paradox!

'Coz I'm like ridiculously cool. 😎

Wait...let's not get carried away by my awesomeness!

WAKE UP TANNU!

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Shivanya

@IfritAmbrose

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#226

hey..where is d update sona??

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

Stunner

+ 40

Posted: 11 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: ...1234
hey..where is d update sona??

hey dear will be updating in few hours.

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safa/fuii

@Splash-ASYA

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#228

res
unres..

yayy.. mee first.. 😃

amazing updatee...
the kisss was woww...
didnt expect this from zoya...
OMG! she is indeed a tigress ASAD...

didnt understand this
"tanveer ur time starts now"..

hope ot gets clear in few updates...

continue ASAP...
n pm me..!
thanx for the pm if u have sent it..! 😊

-fuii-

Edited by Splash-ASYA - 11 years ago

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#229

Woah.

That was one helluva kiss right there.

I mean she kissed till she passed out yo. Fuh.

And I'm actually so psyched to know thaty Asad is very much aware that Zoya's body is NOT ready for his! And that his love is sinful. For now...

Tannu!!!!

Her time starts now?

When is now!

Come on Tannu!! Do the right thing!!

Miss Bubble Foxy...you write well!

Zan mah dawg. Tannu's time starts NOW!! hehe.

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karan-007

@karan-007

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#230

The update was superb so Zoya has fallen for Asad too & Tanveer I thought her to be innocent but she is not as gud as I thought her to be there is surely some mystery which only Asad n Tanveer know n Zoya has no idea about. Tanveer won't make it easy for Asad from now on I guess

Edited by karan-007 - 11 years ago

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