~The Sunshine of My Life#2 AsYa FF~||Link to third thread PG 125

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antiquegold

@antiquegold

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Holy cow! Five res already! You ladies! 😡😉

You developed Zoyas feelings beautifully. I am in love with this tender hearted, non preachy, non judgmental character. And Asad I will accept in cash, check or credit! You are not going to believe thst on the way home from work today, I was in the mood for some baby cuteness, and there your update was! Thanks, as always for the pms. I dont know if you read my comments or not though! 😭

Edited by Oldestfan - 11 years ago

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hellodhari

@hellodhari

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Res...u just made me smile...

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manognasai

@manognasai

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Awesome update...
Nazma made me cry;(
Asad has gone through a lot in his life;(
Dilshad and Nazma playing cupid between AsYa!
So they are going out for 3days:D
Hope they come closer and Zoya teaches him how to be a child!:D
Update soon...Waiting!

Edited by manognasai - 11 years ago

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Lovely chapter! 😃

Love the relationship between Zoya and Najma & Asad and Ayaan, similar to the show! ❤️

Zoya finally makes the great discovery of Asad's past. 👏

Zoya's admiration and respect for Asad!

Aahana is as cute and adorable as ever! 😳 Simply love her antics! 😆 Absolutely love your portrayal of her, brilliantly done. ⭐️

Looking forward to the next chapter, hope the wait isn't long! 😉

Great writing and beautiful concept! 😃

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Avie

@Avie

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

THREAD 2!! YAYYY🥳

And the update..! Emotional..😭

Poor Asad! He had to go through so much..I feel bad for him and Aahana as well😔

I hope Dilshad succeeds in her plan..😎

AsYa three days together..!😆 I am excited..🤪

Waiting for your next!!😊

Thanks for the pm..😳

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linta

@Linnet

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Wow

Love it

It's as if after long days of drought, finally

Rain has arrived

Superb

Keep writing

Update soon

Love

Linnet

😛😛

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Oldestfan
Holy cow! Five res already! You ladies! 😡😉
You developed Zoyas feelings beautifully. I am in love with this tender hearted, non preachy, non judgmental character. And Asad I will accept in cash, check or credit! You are not going to believe thst on the way home from work today, I was in the mood for some baby cuteness, and there your update was! Thanks, as always for the pms. I dont know if you read my comments or not though! 😭

I like Zoya as she is in the show(minus a few things), but if I were her, or at least in a premises with a child involved I won't have much of negativity. I'd love to keep this FF as clean as the mind of the child whose the lead of my story 😳 And of course I love reading your comments, and await them. I did reply to your comment on the previous thread.

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Prashni
Lovely chapter! 😃
Love the relationship between Zoya and Najma & Asad and Ayaan, similar to the show! ❤️

Zoya finally makes the great discovery of Asad's past. 👏

Zoya's admiration and respect for Asad!

Aahana is as cute and adorable as ever! 😳 Simply love her antics! 😆 Absolutely love your portrayal of her, brilliantly done. ⭐️

Looking forward to the next chapter, hope the wait isn't long! 😉

Great writing and beautiful concept! 😃

Thanks so much for liking 😃 Well I have a few things lined up to do for my university, hopefully I find good time to keep writing and I shall update soon.