AsYa FF Our Lives Entwined - Thread 7 - Chapter 21 to 24 - Page 96

Originally posted by: ammu228

nice update...

loved it...continue soon...

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

Bubble...At the end of each chapter I feel it should have been a little more in this chapter since I am always so eager to read more of what you write.. 😊

Coming to the update... Loved the dining table scene...Zoya blurted out that Asad gifted her a guitar.. Humeira asking him if she could call him jeejz.. 😊 and finally the deal..😉

Hospital scene with little Abhi was beautifully written.. So Zoya has told the child that her akdu is best husband.. and the surprise on his face.. 😛

Women expect all the attention from their hubby but Men .. once their lady love accept their love or forgive for their mistake.. no gifts and cards.. 😭😭 .. Asad asking Zoya that he thought he has been forgiven and so no need to send her pizza.. aww... poor Zoya... 😭

When will Akdu know that his notes or small surprises are making her so so happy... ??

Next update on Monday.. .Bubble.. not fair da.. you should give the next update on Sunday.. 😊 but I know studies come first.. So good luck.. Take care till the next update.. 😊

Originally posted by: kals82

calm after the strom.. but brooding for the bigger one i guess...

i so love the dining table... why i asad doesnt weant humi to call him jeeju.. he is her jeeju. and not bhaijaan...

if he is her bhaijann.. and oh lord.. zoya becomes his sister.. buddu ahmed khan...

and the promise of the kiss.. cute..

the hospital.. asad was caught by zoya... and what is his problem .. why cant he say it openly.. bcoz girls love the display of love.. and he thought what is special in the notes.. if only he knows... girls of IF like his notes more then his flowers and pizza...

oh zoya...... u have a to do a whole load of work to bring him around...

but as they say matches are made in heaven.. and we just have to find them... here.. they r poles apart.. yet.. perfect for each other..

awesome update.. bubblee...

next is on monday... will see u then...

Originally posted by: skavya

Cute update Bubble..!!!!

like morning breakfast scene...& how everyone react when Zoya told them that Asad gifted her Guitar...

now what Vishal told about Sehrish...

like Asya with Abhi...

continue soon..

Thankew so much for pm😊

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

lovely

Originally posted by: geet7057

😳yeah sure.
its Maheen
Ppl call me maahi or maano! 😉