AsYa Story-UNRECOGNIZED EMOTIONS-Thread 3- chapters 9 to 13

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#771

nice update
what is wrong with asad what happened
zoya was so worried she launch herself in his arms
but he did not hug her but at the end he held on to her
like his life depended on it
so dilshad dont remember shireen so he told her nothing
but his mom ask him about zoya and he smiled
continue soon worried about asad

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-Astrid-

@-Astrid-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#772

Amazing update...loved it...what's up with Asad?😕...the hug😳...update soon😃

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#773

Beautiful update dear...

so finally Asad decide to ask Dilshad about Shireen...but her reaction was so confusing...

& what happen with Asad suddenly...???

last part was so beautiful...both found solace in each others arms...

continue soon dear...

Thanks for pm 😊

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#774

Originally posted by: suganti
asad is so sad..must be related to rashid..
nice update

thank you..glad that you liked it...
yeah, related to Rashid only 😉

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#775

Originally posted by: aksasya
I am late.,,butt better late than never na...It was an awesome update dear...I loved the whole update...

Hey Aks...
you are not late at all buddy 😳
thanks a lot!! i am so glad that you liked it 😛
🤗

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#776

Originally posted by: tejaswini.253
datz awesome
loved it
y do i feel like dilshad is wantedly skipping shireen's topic...coz who'll nt remember his/her secretary... kuch tho chut raha hai...
bt wat happened to asad???????
thanx fr d pm
continue soon

thank you so much!!
really glad that you liked it...
ha ha.. you will get to know about everything in the next update 😉
will try to update soon 😃

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kalyani

@kals82

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Posted: 11 years ago

#777

my dear miss,

i know i am late...😕...

but here i am...😉😉

now to the story... asad is taking the steps to face the past... and inturn he get caught by dilshad.. nicely portrayed.

i could understand his relectance.. it is not easy to say such things. just like that..isnt..

it a make or break.. or sometime even a silence to keep the family from broken...

now what made asad that upset...

is the fact dilshad know about shireen and hid it from him, and he accidently came to know that.

or rashid is maintaning another family...

i think go out influenced by ur friend bubble... leaving in twist...

now the hug is really cute.. and emotional...

awesome written..

update soon

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Amulya

@Amulya9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#778

Hey...read all parts in one go..its a beautiful story.loved it..ur an awesome writer..
AAK is college topper, dancer, ...wat not... our jahapanah Six packs..n ur Zoya is soo mature n sweet gal..the initial chapters reminded me of my CLG days.lol...gradually Asad trusted Zoya n shared his painful flashback..last chapter loved the way they fought fr each other.the subhanallah song made me feel nostalgic.it was the most beautiful scene of our innocent ASYA..wat happened 2 Asad ..sure its related 2 that gud fr ntg rashid.they hugged each other.. much needed hug ..I'm sending u buddy request.. pls accept n PM me fr upcoming chapters

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#779

Ankitha.. That was beautiful... Apologies for the delay in reading and commenting.. Dilshaad is such a sweet mother.. 😊.. but am so eager to know what happened to Asad now ?? Why was he behaving so indifferently and later he needed Zoya to comfort him.. 😭

Eager to read the next update .. Please update soon.. 😊

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#780

part 11..

Asya ... getting closer again... they build up nice
comfortable level...
dilshad notice something... from asad ... and going to find out

Dilshad meet zoya... its confirm she is the one...
and a invitation to asad house...

and meet rashid... and how zoya control asad...
the bond between them is getting strong...