AsYa Story-UNRECOGNIZED EMOTIONS-Thread 3- chapters 9 to 13

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#441

Originally posted by: sasir
awesome.
loved it.
plz update soon

Originally posted by: nilusoni
Lovely update
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon

Originally posted by: ZoyaAsadKhan
wow a very beutiful update
plzz PM me :)

thank you to you all..
i am really glad that you liked the update..
will surely PM you when i update next..
will try updating soon 😛

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#442

Originally posted by: kals82
hai dear,
that was awesome update..

right now the physics brainis drained out bcoz of presentation..

so simple english now...

the progress is sweet.. and slow too..

slowly they are standing by each other.. zoya anticipation for his call, then he thought about her dress for asad house.. implies her heart wants more.. but ..

rashid.. i cant judge him till i know him fully... looks like he slipped once...

will wait for the story to un fold...

to say something physics.. their love story started in semi conductor state.. now slowly moving towards conducting.. and ultimate will be super conducting..

love it

Hi Kalyani Di,

thanks a lot,..
i am really glad that you liked it..

no problem at all..a comment in simple english is also equally precious to me 😳

yes, the story is progressing towards its main plot now 😉

yes, her heart wants more, but her mind is not thinking in that direction yet

yes... he did slip once, the rest about rashid will be clear in the upcoming updates 😳

yes, they are still in semiconducting state.. let's see it they turn to non conductors or a super conductors😉😆
thank you for this lovely comment..

Ankita 🤗

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#443

Originally posted by: aashiqua
dilshad is such a nice soul..and nw she knw zoya and asad's relation and approves it

dilshad is just great as a person 😛
thanks a lot..
i am glad that you liked it 😃

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#444

Originally posted by: Shubh007
Awesome update...👏

Every scene from starting to end is amazing...👍🏼

Just love it...😃

Waiting for nxt part egarly so update soon...😊

thank you so much for this lovely comment..
i really appreciate it..
i am really very glad that you liked it 😛
will try updating asap 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#445

hai dear,

they better be super conductors.. if not appu. will tunnel through this...

and may make you write...

take care

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#446

Originally posted by: ankitabaran
It was beatuifully written...plz make two together as Rashid look to zoya and passed smile seems something fishy...Thanks for pm...😛😛

thanks a lot 😛
they will get together at some point of time 😉
nope, nothing fishy is there about his look to zoya..
you will get to know more about rashid in the coming updates 😛

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#447

Originally posted by: kals82
hai dear,
they better be super conductors.. if not appu. will tunnel through this...

and may make you write...

take care

haha 😆
yes.. i know that she wants that..
and i will make them super conductors after a certain point of time..
right now, the plot that i had decided long ago will pop in 😉😆

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#448

Originally posted by: CHOCOSWATHI
excellent update👏

thanks a lot..i am glad that you liked it 😛

love the bond growing between asad and zoya😳

they have at last made through the most important thing , i.e trust 😊

especially their night chats 😉😆

😆😆

dilshad had found the reason behind asad's happiness
hope she takes steps to make it permanently😃
i love this lady very much😳
her kindness will attract her to everyone😳

yes,,dilshad is a very kind lady..she can love someone with all her heart and soul 😳
let's see if she does anything 😉

also loved the scene where zoya being strength of asad in presence of rashid😳😃
just like the way u wrap each chapters without cliffy's❤️
plz maintain it😃

i always try to do that coz that is what i love the to read..and since i give long updates, cliffy's are not possible 😆

thanks for this lovely comment dear 😳

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#449

Originally posted by: anopama
loved the update
asad and zoya friendship growing
loved their phone convo b4 bed every nite
dishad is amazing she notice her son change
and wanted to know who brought that change
and she realizes zoya to be the reason
wow zoya his strength but him being her weakness
continue soon

thanks a lot..
i really appreciate your effort to mention the things that you have liked..
i really helps me a lot as a writer.. 😛

yes, dilshad knows her son very well even though he doesn't share anything as such with her..

will try updating soon 😃