AsYa Story-UNRECOGNIZED EMOTIONS-Thread 3- chapters 9 to 13

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#321

awesome update loved it thanks for the pm

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treasure11

@treasure11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

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Aishu

@Ish_Speaks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#323

it was really

lovely

awesome

pls do continue soon

and thanks for pm

pm me for next update

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#324

That was a wonderful update... Dilshad is such a sweet mom..Paying attention to all the little things of her son.. and her plan to get to know who the person was to whom he was speaking.. 😊

The last Table scene was also very beautifully written.. Asad's anger and the way Zoya cooled him off... 👏👏

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#325

Awesome update...

Loved Dilshad...so caring & loving...her plan to know who is their in her son's life...so nice...

like to see the change in Asad...he start to trust zoya...& she became his strength...

like that last scene...the way Zoya calm him...beautiful...

loved it...!!!!!

continue soon...

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#326

Originally posted by: treasure11
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i seriously can't believe that bubble is asking for an 18+ update from me 😲🤣

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--
res !

unres'ed 😎

Ankie that was an awesome update ,,
Loved it !
Aww soo finally Dilshad-Rashid are in the picture ,,
Loved the way how she caught him in night while smiling and talking to Zoya 😳
He must me looking the cutest ,,
and then in the morning she finally met Zoya ,,
and Zoya was placing her scarf rightly 😆
and their lil bit convo was cute ,,
Loved the last scene when she made sure that Asad sits down ,,
and Dilshad was happy to see a changed Asad 😃

Now my questions/requests time :

I wonder why Dilshad as a mother-in-law is not jealous of Zoya ?? 🤣
Put jealousy track here like Saas-Bahuu serials 😈🤣
It will be fun I am telling you in advance !
and why the hell they are not kissing yet ?? Make them kiss right now 😡🤣
I need a 18+ update next time !!

Love yah ,,
Bubble ❤️

Hi Bubba...
thanks a lot!! i am glad that you liked it...
yes!! rashid and Dilshad have made an entry 😎
mother's eyes after all 😉😆
Zoya thought, what if her might-happen-would-be-mother-in-law rejects her 😉😆🤣
dilshad actually got the hint 😳

this is not a saas bahu story bubba 😲🤣
i hate such kind of fun 🤢😲🤣

if in one scene i write about dilshad slapping zoya, then i will have to repeat it thrice like a daily soap 🤣

you can't be serious!!! 😲😲🤣
how can kiss be the next step after holding hands?? 😲😲🤣🤣

at first i want your AsYa to have a 18+ SR...☺️
okay okay, for you i am making it 16+😳

love ya too ❤️
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