AsYa OS: It's a love story

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Shau

@delena_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

I love it
can u write a sequel or another part for it please

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

That was like a fairy tale... But why OS ...Could you please make it a Two shot or three shot ..?😊

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Awsum yaar!!
Plz continue it atleast as two shot!!

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linta

@Linnet

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

⭐️

The climax

😭😭

Want them to be 2gether

Love it

Keep writing

Thanks 4 the pm

😃

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

hey a fabulous os...

totally luv it...

want them to be together...

thx fr the pm...

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Radhika. | Rads.

@--Radhika--

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

This cannot be an OS. You left poor Asad heartbroken!

OMG that song is one of my favs too! I love the whole concept of this story!

Please, please, pleeeaase continue this!!! AsYa have to unite! 🤢

Ugh, I hate Gaffur! 😡😡 🤬🤬🤬

I love the Romeo and Juliet addition, Siddique and Khan's! 😆 Creative! (:

Seriously, continue this, pleeeaase!?!!?!!??!!?!?!

Asad fell in love with Zoya just in one night, so adorable! 😳 Zoya was falling in love too, but then 'Asad Ahmed Khan' !! Both hearts shattered into pieces! WHYYY?!?!?!?!

But anyway, it was really beautifully written, loved every bit of it!

To be honest, this is like my favorite OS! But AsYa did not unite?!

You can make it a TS!! Ok, I've said enough, I loveee this story so much! (: <33

That's all! 🤗

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SimplySmile

@SimplySmile

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: --Radhika--
This cannot be an OS. You left poor Asad heartbroken!
OMG that song is one of my favs too! I love the whole concept of this story!
Please, please, pleeeaase continue this!!! AsYa have to unite! 🤢
Ugh, I hate Gaffur! 😡😡 🤬🤬🤬
I love the Romeo and Juliet addition, Siddique and Khan's! 😆 Creative! (:
Seriously, continue this, pleeeaase!?!!?!!??!!?!?!
Asad fell in love with Zoya just in one night, so adorable! 😳 Zoya was falling in love too, but then 'Asad Ahmed Khan' !! Both hearts shattered into pieces! WHYYY?!?!?!?!
But anyway, it was really beautifully written, loved every bit of it!
To be honest, this is like my favorite OS! But AsYa did not unite?!
You can make it a TS!! Ok, I've said enough, I loveee this story so much! (: <33
That's all! 🤗

Heyy thanks for the long and lovely comment, I die for them😃

And as for making it a TS, honestly I don't kniw since I have my other story to update and then I have a life outside of IF, so I need to attend to that as well😆

And plus I just wanted to right a simple fairy tale kind of OS, and I did, so really not sure if I'm going to turn it into a TS any time soon😕😃

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

I'm a lover of fairy tales and I instantly fell in love with this OS..

Sonny you have a knack for romance..

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SimplySmile

@SimplySmile

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Azraa01
I'm a lover of fairy tales and I instantly fell in love with this OS..

Sonny you have a knack for romance..

😭

Thats so sweet!!!!!😭😭😭

Thanks buddy for the touching comment, I just loved the song and I was watching the music video for it and I knew I had to do an AsYa edition of it.😃😃