ASYATS: MOMENTS OF CELEBRATIONS (PART 3 - PG58

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ArshiAsya

@Alai123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Awesome OS 👏

Continue soon!!!

Thanks for the pm😉

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Zanutix

@Zanutix

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Wow.

That was so beautifully written!

I could visualize every little scene, especially the Mehendi Ceremony's.

I wish the EXACT SAME things happen on the show as well.

Bravo! 👏

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

omg this is absolutely beautiful
but I hope you wrote this with ksg in mind
because he was all I was envisioning...wow
loved loved his mehendi gift and the vows absolutely
breathtaking.
cant wait for suhaagraat.
continue

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

I guess you had KSG in mind when you penned this..
It was amazingly superbly awesome..

Loved it to the core.. Can't wait for your valentines treat.. *dreamy eyes*

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

You write very well. The OS is most definitely engaging. Beautiful flow and great usage of the language. Am absolutely thrilled to have read this. Most definitely one of the best OSes around. Heartwarming and simply poignant![BR][DIV]And I love how you subtly paired up Humeira and Haider. No direct mention anywhere but message delivered. That's a sign of a great writer.

Keep writing, and posting.

Cannot thank you enough for thinking of us all as worthy a reader to this amazing work of yours. A piece of art this is.

Mwah.

FaRz

Edited by farz_parachute - 11 years ago

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deziqt611

@deziqt611

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Loved it!!! Please definitely make this a 2-shot!!!

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bindasss

@bindasss

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Omg!!! This was absolutely amazing!! You write so well!!!

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Bharathi

@jajebha

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

awesome😊wish it'll happen for real as you mentioned..

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jasminerose

@jasminerose

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Hey Navi. This was awesome. You are a brilliant writer be it mature or cute romance and whenever u come up with something, it is always as amazing as this piece is. It was nice to see family around this time. I think alone time could be kept for "in the heat of the moment" . We won't disturb them there. 😉 You are coming up witb more and more interaction between the characters and its nice to read that. Asya were adorable and I definitely like the naughty Asad. Oh the vows were lovely and so was the way they were sealed.

If it is heading to Suhagraat and since I know the overloaded hotness that you can deliver in your writings, I am so in interested to read it.😉

Lovely post