#WeSupportKSG |AsYa FF| Destinies Intertwined, Thread # 5

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Mehvish Fatima

@MissSparkling

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#921

YAHAN PR BHI TANVEER I HATE IT

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#922

Oh, it's Tanveer. Yay. 😳

Anyways, I was glad with the way this chapter was shaping up! 👍🏼 With the much-needed confrontation between Zaroon and Asad, Asad's kind-of apology to Zoya, and him carrying her to bed. 😳

Asad watched her silently as his thoughts raced ahead. Why was he feeling contented? Shouldn't he be awkward with the proximity of this girl? He was surprised that it was never the case with Zoya. Her proximity always made him feel good. Her touch was soothing and he found himself reveling in it. That was the thing with her; she always seemed to emanating warmth. Her touch was like sunlight on a wintry morning, always leaving a warm, fuzzy contented feeling behind; dissipating his fears and worries. He wondered how perfect life would be if he woke up like this every morning.

^Aw. That was the highlight right there for me. My babies. :') Beautifully written.

And then I was brutally slapped and shoved to the ground by the cold, bitter mention of Tanveer and my babygirl Zoe's heart being shattered into millions and millions of tiny pieces. Harsh? Good. 😳 😆

Bleh. 🤢 Just when I thought things were getting better, the witch decides to make an entrance. 😡

Fari, you better get rid of her quickly. 😆

-Fari. 😳 ❤️

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#923

ok I was loving the chapter at first
because it has asya snd their time
and convo was very beatiful and meaningful
even the bit with asad and zaroon was great
a very verbal discussion and if one didnt walk
away it would have been a brawl. "I will break your face"😆
the the tanveer part that had me is asad telling tanveer her
missed her what the hell 😡
cant wait for more guess this would lead to the previous precap
continue like now plz

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Lavina

@volatile

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#924

Awww...thanks for the dedication Smiley! It was my pleasure to stand up for you and your writing especially when you feeling low about your work!

To echo Asad in your update, just like how its impossible to live with a pure and genuine person like Zoya without feeling something for her, it is also unthinkable to read this story, which tugs at your heartstrings without developing some respect and affection for the author! 😉

Anyways, coming to the chapter, you were right...it was a sad one, but you managed to fill it with such beautiful and heartfelt moments. Love the talk AsYa had, their every line was filled with such underlying meaning.

Zaroons behaviour with Asad is just the tip of the iceberg, I am sure he is gonna have a go at Asad in the next chapter, especially if he catches Zoya crying about Tanveer! Haha, looking forward to the fight, and wondering who Zoya is gonna tend to first...Zaroons swollen face or Asads swollen hand????

I always feel really sad at the end of your updates, cos that means story is getting closer to its end. And this time it was worse, cos I could literally feel Zoyas heart breaking when she heard him talking to Tanveer. I swear sometimes I just wanna give your Asad a smack on the back of his head. (Dilshaad style!)

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#925

awesome update the worse thing to happen to a person is on requited love and zoya thinks he does not love her and now a misunderstanding she thinks he is in love with tanveer awesome update loved assad and zaroon conversation awesome update thanks for the pm loved it

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#926

Fari... They need to confess their feelings to each other

ASAP

Even Zaroon is tired of these 2...

But I like the way he tackled Asad...

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Appu

@A.Kh_20

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#927

superb!! yar i dont why u were saying its not good!!

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manognasai

@manognasai

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#928

Nice update...Zoya told him that she dont want to leave!Asad is confused,shocked as well as happy with her confession!Now Zoya's visa has expired and she has to leave at any cost...she is so heart broken!😭

Edited by manognasai - 11 years ago

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#929

It's heartbreaking to see how badly Zoya wants to stay and how Asad has it confused to her feeling that way for his family and not him. I wish he could read in between the lines of what Zoya is saying. I'm so glad Zaroon is there to comfort Zoya and protect her. The way he almost confronted Asad at night, being an AsYa fan, I actually wanted Zaroon to punch Asad for making Zoya cry so much. Let's see where this Tanveer track will lead us to, do update soon.