| JusT PerfecT | An AsYa OS (OS OF THE WEEK 32#) *TQ Note Pg 21* - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
Oh My Lord, how long has it been?!😲
Reading an Ankie OS after ages
I loved it, brilliant OS
Keep writing babe :P
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
missed u!!
just like its name...it's perfect...adorable!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty


Payal Dee. Thank you!
I know, and THIS was in memory of THAT itself 😳
Ermm short. 1500 - 2000 words are my forte 😆 i cant write more than than at a go 🤣

TABEEZ. That will be my masterpiece forever. 65 hrs of wakefulness 🤣
Ahh Tabeez.
My Muse was in the best of his days

Ahh you talk high of me, am nothing, and i am happy being nothing. 😆
Readers happy, am happy. what else is needed. 😳 😆
Thank you once again. 😳

Ankie you are calling me Dee now I am emotional you know😊. You know I love this "nothing" type of people because I belong to the same category and I find solace when I am with them😉. And please baate mat ghumao ...keep on writing. Already missing your posts toh kuch toh bharpai karni paregi na...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good one Ankie! How are u dear😊
Long time no see 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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10 pgs already😲...aww my baby is still so popular here😛
i miss ur posts...not dat i watch da show anymore bt those were golden days whn u used 2 mk 5-6 posts a day aur PMs ki barsat kar dete...sigh!!!
reading it 4rm zoya's angle actually made da whole thing cuter😉
my bechara bz asad😳
kitno dini baad i read da words woh actually❤️
on a whole it ws a sweet attempt😃
PS-i luv u🤗

Posted: 11 years ago
#67
Wow, I haven't gotten a PM from you in a looong time! 😲 Anyways, on to the OS! 😉
How cute was this! So adorable. 😳 And perfectly in context too - Asad being totally engrossed in his work and Zoya being angry about not getting to spend any time with him and making sarcastic remarks. 😉😆
And the last scene was so sweet, how they were all blushy-blushy, because they still wuv each other, even though they fight a lot. 😳 I think this was one of your best ones, so good job! I adored it. 😃
-Fari. 😳 ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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perfect just perfect..loved it...u beautifully narrated everything from Zoya's angle...n last paragraph was superb...one little smile of AAK will make Zoya 2 forget everything.. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ankie where have you been?!?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ankie! Just beautiful! I love second person narrative! And your language in this one... Lyrical! I left every word! Bravo! 👏

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