Asad-Zoya FF: Zoya Proposes, Asad Disposes I:Thread II Link on Pg 146 - Page 41

Originally posted by: Riya.S.007

I just saw this ff. I have Emma in my syllabus 🤣 it will be a good research if I read this ff.

Jokes apart its amazing Darling. Billi as Harriet and Humeira as Jane, nice. Can you send me pm for next updates or I have to send you buddy req?

Update soon.

Originally posted by: jasminerose

Hey Lovely update. With your excellent writing skills I can actually imagine Tanveer as good.😊

I am really enjoying the flow of the story. The discussion between Asad and Dilshaad was very interesting and nice.😊

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

Aiyayaa idli ki kasam NOE aapka Ysename itna bada nahi hain jee,
Vasu aapke naam ka Tattoo kara rahi/raha hain agar aap update jaldi nahi karti jee 😆
update jaldi kare jee idli ki kasam 😆

Originally posted by: Ankita.M

This is brilliant work, I am loving the way you're moving with the story and its so well written and your style is so distinct that I do not even dare compare it to the book because it's so well written and I keep wanting to see what your view of it is like.

Originally posted by: Linsie

Chapter 3..

Zota and tanveer getting close...

hmmm akram dont seem to be attracted to tanveer but
to zoya yes...

Yes, Akram is wooing Zoya, but Zoya is reading all wrong.

what can say... zoya light bulb wrong direction...

Absolutely...

well ..that is nice... Hello, Tanveer. Tumhara naam kya hain, Tanveer?"
🤣
asad just love to annoy her...

Tanveer have a partner... Imraan
but zoya is hell...trying to fix akram... very naive...

so cute... went she is at asad apartment... looking for a book
she is highly jealous of humaira...

Love asya convo...

Well asad have good point about zoya and tanveer friendship
...sounds like something coming up soon...
between this to...

Originally posted by: Noe123

And you did it again, this was exactly what I meant, and as I read it I realized it too, not while reading Emma but yes, reading this story. Asad bias is impossible to overcome, it is always going to be there, for me too, Zoe has just become more real in my POV in this story. In a good way, not sure if I explained this as I wanted to. 😆

Update happening today? 😊

Res ⭐️

It must be tough for Zoe to see her pet project going on a different tangent, kahi pe ishara, kahi pe nighaen 😉.

Excellent chapter, the beginning, the picnic set the mood. Zoe is determined to prove that she is not one match wonder 😆, and yeah she is not going to let some Kanpur ka dude ruin it for her. 😊. The jhatkas she gave Tanveer was matched by Imran's impeccable "right place, right time". And that too a photographer for Mr Khan no less.

Nice touch with Asad watching out for Tanveer at that moment, Asad is familiar with Zoe's intentions, so he kind of makes it his business to understand what is going on too, specially now, after that chat with Dilshad. Zoe wanted Asad's attention for herself, she got it too, but only after Asad was satisfied. And then it was completely Zoe. She gets his work, just as he gets hers. I really like that part, they care already, the affection is already present, and I do not get tired saying this that I find this part of the story premise really good, the way it is unraveling in your writing is just fabulous. The subtle acknowledgement of each other is just right.

And Zoe met her match when Tanveer was crushing about Imran, that was cute, and that too with a stunning pic of herself which made Zoe feel the manipulation. Who would have thought that Zoe would have to look for an opening to divert Tanveer off the course. 😆She did get her way eventually. Akram is in for surprise soon. 😈

Even Tanveer realizes what Asad is, more than Zoe does at this point, his context in their both lives are very different ways. This realization and non realization by both at the same time for the exact same thing, well written.This is the impact the man can have. 😳

The last part, it was flawless. Zoe with his pics, the smug looks just for Zoe's benefit? 😆 Very Asad. More than all of this,as annoying and knowingly manipulative Zoe is in the chapter, this last part softened it all. This, just this, gives that endearing vibes. How she cherishes Asad. Without that realization, this innocence is what makes her so much more real.

Fantastic update. And next one soon please. 😊

Yaye... Me gt 2nd... Tht was amzng one.. Zoya nd uske match makings 😆 loved it... Totally... Ohhh my.. Imran's entry 😲 haha loved the way she tried to explain her... Y tanveer comparing him wth asad 😕 is akram has feelngs for tanveer.. aaww zoya.. She was in asad's world... But she hv no idea actually she fallen for him 😳 loved the photographing scene.. Dis stry is well building up... Beautifully written... Continue soon... I m hooked to dis nw..

Cool!
Liking it liking it ;)

But story has so less of Asad :-(