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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: BeYourself

thank you for giving us this wonderful update...
it was soo sooo sooo good!!!!!


Thank you ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

'Asad baba' just cracked me up!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
and the way asad was getting annoyed by this ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Yh...Asad is Asad.

then their little bit of romance in between the baba-baby convo was also very sweet ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Romance - Asad and Zoya style ๐Ÿ˜ณ
i was waiting for Humeira to come and the most awaited entry was there!!!
the way Zoya explained everything to her was beautifully written...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Again, thanks.
and the Best part was Ayaan!!! whenever he opened his mouth, something hilarious came!!! ๐Ÿ˜†
but he behaved maturely too... he was the one to make the sisters realize that they both would have done the same thing if they were in each other's places...this was again very nicely written ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Yep, he is a funny guy but not an idiot. He handled the situation very well.
then Asad's authoritative voice made them realize that Zoya wasn't joking!!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Asad has that kind of personality. When he talks, people listen. Yh...Zoya is an exception.๐Ÿ˜†
i wonder what talk did asad actually have with Humeira...
room se bahar nikalte hi 'jiju' ban gaya wo!!!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

You will learn that in the next one.
all in all, Awesome Update as usual...

please continue soon... ๐Ÿ˜ณ
i just LOVE this story SO MUCH!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Super glad to know the love that this story received.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey Noe,

Now if I say I am out of words to tell you how this update was, will you understand?

I will try ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜ณ
You know I was scared about Humi's reaction to Zoe's illness & moreover her marriage & I was thinking of skipping this part but I am glad I didn't cause it was just PERFECT, honestly it was so close to reality.

Thanks. Glad that you choose to read the update and liked it.

I loved every bit of it. especially the baba thing by Zoe & Asad's smug reply to it. I am so proud of how Zoe told Humi everything. Humi is right in her place, any sister would react dat way. What impressed & melted my heart was Asad's response to settle things.
A job done wonderfully Noe ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ.

Thanks a lot. ๐Ÿ˜Š
Love..



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sowmy18

aWESOME UPDATE!(asusual ofcourse!)

Thank you ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

wow if i would have seen it on television i would be having glee on my face and such thrill it was man!
what a bang on update!
why don't you become a writer for a show!
the show become a block buster im sure!
and once the producers read your story they will imeediately take it up!
man you'r awesome!

Aww...that is so sweet of you. I have got nicest readers. ๐Ÿ˜ณ But, given the current scenario on TV, I guess TV writing would be a curse unless YRF is working on your story which btw are not producing any shows these days ๐Ÿ˜ก

But, thanks honey, for appreciating my work that much.

coming to the update...i love ayaan very much like very very very much!
and ayaan zoya and humeira convo was hilarious!
these people take a har time having a serious talk!
and ayra are lovely!

Yes...indeed they were having hard time having a serious talk thanks to Ayaan, but he diffused tension. Things would not have been this smooth, if he wasn't present.

and asya!๐Ÿ˜ณ
They r exactly like i wished them to be in my thousand's of dreams!(which they r not at all at present in the show...somehow their chemistry has completely changed...atleast for me...)
but that cute romance in the update tday...was really overwhelming...i was close to tears actually!
how i wished to see this on show man...sigh!

I don't watch the show, so can't comment. But, the chemistry that was is uncomparable and unmatchable and it will be so. Cheer up for the wonderful memories that we have.

and the chemistry between asad and humeira is great!
when she called him jeeju i felt so satisfied..he just behaved like a big bro to her!
i was worried that humeira might be angry on him or uncomfortable with him...but they just were very comfortable..
Glad that you liked them.

Eventhough i didn't see much of ayaan and asad..a true convo...but i can imagine how funny hilarious an cute they will be...

Hilarious and funny - with Ayaan in picture, very true, but 'cute' ? Asad newspaper leke maarega.๐Ÿ˜†

Asad already has three kids to bear for now...(in my view humeira is a bit more mature than zoya..so i hope she will help him with zoya and ayaan)!๐Ÿ˜†

Asad and three kids - ๐Ÿ˜† Yh...Humeira is mature. And, Zoya and Ayaan too. Majakiya hain, but serious when required. Mauqe ki najakat ko dekhte hain.


now im hoping to see nazma in the picture soon...is it possible?

Yes...on a phone call.
asya baba baby convo was quite hilarious!
it reminded me of tht bhatavdekar baby sweety scene...god i miss them alot!

can we get to see them having kids with zoya being pregnant?
and also some intimate scenes๐Ÿ˜ณ!(I wanted to see how asad will be intimate for so long...)
please please please!๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Well, I really do not write heavily romantic scenes. Such at writing them. Regarding Zoya's pregnancy and kids - it doesn't fit in the story. This was a journey of them starting as strangers and becoming each other's lives. If I want to write about Zoya's pregnancy, I would have to develop a new story where it is important for Zoya to be pregnant. So, very sorry, but it won't happen here.

I hope i'm nt asking much...

i blabbered alot and finally got peace...๐Ÿ˜†
ok...do update soon...๐Ÿ˜Š


Thank you for lovely comments.


Okay...I need time to reply to this one. Will reply after the update.๐Ÿ˜Š

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Edited by Noe123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

Awesome update!!!! Loved it!!! Ayaan & Humeira are here!!!!! Zoya like teasing Asad calling him Baba!!!!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Zoya told dem everything abt her illness!!!! She waited for Asad to tell her about them Marital status!!!! Humeira called Asad jiju!! Liked Ayaan 's commentary in b/w Their conversations!!! Thanks 4 pm. Update soon!!!



Thank you.

Glad that you liked the chapter.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: najma123

brilliant update noe!!!cant tell you in words.it was worth the wait.please update fast


Thank you so much ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
So ayaan & humeira knew everything now
About zoya illness, her wedding.
Both were shocked & then asad talked to humeira.
Everything back to normal as ayaan said gol mal hai
Curious to know what asad said to humeira.
Do pm me for next update
Continue soon
Thanks


Bold - you will know about it in the next chapter.

I am glad to know that their is sufficient curiosity about Asad and Humeira's conversation. I had two minds about whether to include it or not while I wrote the last chapter.

Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

hey tis is fabulous...

amazing n luv it...
asya are the cutest...
luv the way hw asad n zoya tease each other...
asya told humeira n ayaan they are married...
beautifully written...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...


Thank you very much for reading and commenting.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

amazing it is Noe ...
asad was so irritated at being called baba ...so very like asad ...
now humeira knows everything ...
update soon


Thank you very much for reading and commenting.๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lasya13

I was so happy when I saw ur pm..
loved the whole update...
so nw humeira came to know abt the nikaah n she accepted it...
amazing update..
asad baba was the best part ๐Ÿ˜†


Thank you.

Glad that you liked it. ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: CHOCOSWATHI

that was a amazing update๐Ÿ‘

asad baba and zoya baby๐Ÿ˜†
morning scene was heartwarming
asad teasing zoya about her cooking skills๐Ÿ˜†
zoya shouldnt use her pain as a reason

Yes, she shouldn't. Asad didn't like it at all.

even i was shocked for a min
open romance mr and mrs khan??๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Thoda bahot

Kyunki ye itne bade bachhe hain ki aisi chhoti chhoti cheezon se cheed jaate hain."
u cracked me up with these lines

Glad that could make you laugh. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

humi acted really mature
i was expecting silly fights and big arguments
but none happened

Humeira is mature. Plus, given Zoya's condition which sister would keep arguing.

but humeira and zoya's bickering and ayaan acting like judge๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

"Guys, meet Dr. Asad Ahmed Khan. My husband."
good intro zoya๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜†
and followed by ayaan and humi's comment๐Ÿ˜†
asad s soo good
he handled the suituation in better way
finally everything s sorted out..

Yes, the big brother of every one (of course, except Zoya ๐Ÿ˜†) took matters in his hands and sorted them out.



Thank you very much for reading and commenting.
Edited by Noe123 - 11 years ago

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