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Posted: 11 years ago

hello everyone!

i m very happy , i crossed 10+ page ... yay lalalalala..

so i m updating this before a day..

okay thanx to all of u ... so so so so much.. for being such a wonderful readers..

welcome all the new readers..

okay this is quite long... so no complains...

okay now read..

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chapter : 5 kyuki tu hi to meri dost h...




freindship... a ship which never sinks , a ship to long last forever. friendship is the best relation ever the god has created. may b its between two strangers , cousins, siblings, father n son/ dau, mother n dau/son... something which has always made relations, something which is always there for support, something which is unamed, unknown yet known and wonderful. read how our asad and zoya started their way on the beautiful journey of friendship..

aja m havao m bhita k le chalu kyunki tu hi to meri dost h.



Dinner was quite then as both of their minds were drifted to what happened couple of hours back...they came out of their trance by the ringing of the bell..

Asad : I will go and check! 😊

He opened and saw pammi aunty on the door!

Asad<thinking>: what is she doing here at this hour.😕

Asad: salam aunty , aap yahan? 😕

Pammi : Namaste puttar ! aur nahi to kaha , vo mene socha ki ye gajar ka halwa banaya tha to socha ki tereko de du! Le beta le, are lele! 😃

Zoya : kya gajar ka halwa? 😲

Pammi gave a confusing look to her and asked asad about her!

Asad : aunty wo ye ladki h! 😆

Pammi : are waah! Mujhe to pata hi nahi tha! Vo to mujhe bhi dikh raha h! 😉

Asad : mera matlab ye zoya h! 😉

Pammi : h khoya? Kiska khoyi bachi h ye? Vese bachi to nahi dikhti! 😕

She goes to zoya

Pammi : are meri bachi tu thik to hena bol beta tere maa baap kaha h? 😭

N she embrace her tightly to which zoya was not liking and trying to get out of but she was tightening her grip around her! 🤢

Asad : aunty khoya nahi zoya! 😆

Pammi : acha zoya! 😊

N she leaves her. Zoya let out a heavy sigh of relief..

Pammi : par ye yaha kya kar rahi h?😕

Asad : voh aunty actually...😕

Asad and zoya exchanged furious looks! Suddenly our idea queen got an idea

Zoya : vo kya h na vo ... ha mein inse kam sikhne ayi hu.😃

Pammi : h? kam konsa kam? 😕

Asad: architect ka. Ha architect ka hi to sikhne ayi h 😃

Zoya : aur ha mein inki mom ki guest bhi hu to yahi rahingi.

And she gave pammi a embarrass smile.. but pammi aunty alert!

Pammi : acha okay thike .. acha beta m chalti hu! 😃

N with that she went . asad n zoya let out a sigh of relief!

Zoya: who was she? 😕

Asad : pammi aunty! 😆

Zoya : okay good night ! 😊

N they went to their respective rooms. Though they tried to sleep but incidents of today were keep on repeating in their mind!

After a long time they finally slept!

Morning :

Asad woke up and got ready to go to office but seeing his wardrobe he remembered that zoya didn't have cloths so he made a note that when he will come back he will go to buy her clothes... Zoya woke up late so she quickly got ready n went out only to find that there is no one in the house... she then saw a plate of sandwich n coffee kept with a smile on them n besides there was a note!

" hey I realized that you wont have clothes , so I will be back at 5pm and we will go to shop for your clothes and here is the breakfast eat it.. if u want to order something for yourself feel free.. I know u would.. money is in the right drawer..

Asad ahmed khan 😃😃"

She mumbled how sweet and had her breakfast. After that she was getting bored so she watched few movies but didn't find anything interesting ! she glanced at the clock , it was 2!

Zoya: its almost lunch time, I shall order something! 😃

She ordered a pizza and sat down , she didn't knew that someone's eyes were on her and guess whose! Mrs. Pammi bond!

She thought to enquire , so she want and rang the bell. Zoya opened the door to find pammi there!

Pammi :zoya beta who ghar m chini khatam hogayi thi zara milegi kya? 😕

Zoya : ji aunty 😃

She went to the kitchen and after 5 long minutes of finding sugar she came out and gave her. After that she went but again came and ask for the salt... she repeated it sometimes asking turmeric, chilli etc,..

Tired of this when she rang the bell 5 th time she went and asked pami

Zoya : ab kya du masala, chaipati, gajar , bhindi? 🤢

Pammi : nahi nahi muli dena! 😃

Zoya looked up and said : kya h ye? 😭

Zoya gave her what she needed. Again after some time the bell rang .

Zoya went and open and start rambling.

Zoya : kya du chini, masala, haldi , dhaniya , muli , gajar, dosa, burger, pizza..😆

Asad: zoya zoya zoya! What happened? 😕😆

Zoya : oh you! 🤢

Asad : what happened ? n me means? Aur ye darwaze par salesman ki tarah chize kyu bech rahi thi?? 😆

Zoya : kuch nahi ur neighbor ! subah se aake kabhi chini, kabhi chaipati mange ja rai h! 😭

Asad chuckled : oh ! she is keeping an eye on u! actually has a habit of investigating! By the way ready? Shall we leave? 😆

Zoya nodded and they left !

In the mall :

Asad : so what would you like to buy? Again fell free whatever you want to buy! 😃

Zoya : thanx! Actually asad I wanted to say ki I wont buy much because few dresses are there in my hotel room , I brought many but due to all that happened u know... so I shall we go to the hotel afterwards to get the important stuffs there. 😳😃

Asad : ya okay , but first u buy few things here.😆

With that she went for shopping. It was a refreshment for her but a decision making time for him. She always went and selected two dresses and asking asad to chose one for her. But they enjoyed themselves...afterwards they went to the hotel and got zoya's necessary stuffs. When zoya came out with her luggage he saw her that she has changed her dress but she looked indeed beautiful. And again it happened MITWA... He broke out of his trance when zoya clicked her fingers.

Asad : done? 😕

Zoya : ya , I hope u don't mind me buying so much , don't worry I will repay it! 😛

Asad : god zoya! We are friends! 😃

Zoya : acha! pakka? Bhari padega! 😉

Asad : utha lenge! 😆

Zoya chuckled: one second! 😳

She went to a small shop and came something hiding behind her!

Asad : whts that?😕

Zoya : okay so we are going to live together so shall we be frens? 😃

Asad : ya ofcourse ! and they did a handshake after which she bring the bracelets forward . 😳

Zoya : lets tie friendship bands! 😳

Asad : zoya!

Zoya : please ! 😃

N with that they tie friendship band and headed towards home!


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see i wanted to ask , do u like this track means do u want to enjoy humor , masti and their friendship or do u want to let the story take pace and move quickly. i am writing this so it will be comedy as well as u will feel the prsence of friendship. i dont want to directly make them friends and made them feel the love for each other and so i am writing.

please do share ur views

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next chapter depends on ur comments..

love,

doll pumpy riddhi

Edited by riddhi1206 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir

nice.

loved it
plz update soon


thanq so much
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Posted: 11 years ago
Helloz melloz pumpy!!
ROFL! ROFL!
Marvalous update it was
Dinner silent.
Entry of pammi aunty voilent 🤣
Lovd asad's answer yeh ladki he 🤣
Pammi aunty knws dat asad, wat had hpnd to u .
Misinterperatation of name ye h zoya.
Dump aunty heard khoya.🤣😆
God finally gai to pammi aunty.
Zoya cme to learn architecture.. Jhoote asad 🤣
Oh they were unable to sleep cz of what hpnd few hours bck.
Gosh asad cares for her he wantd her to shop for herself.❤️
most awesome n loving part was sanwich n letter scene.. Soo good.
My my .. Bored zoya
Badly iritated by bond formed aunty.🤣
Chini, chaipati, masala, salt.. Ha ha ha 🤣 sb ek sth chahie tha.
Zoya made it rhyme salt, chini, chaipati, burger 🤣 even she said this to asad also.
Now shopping scene.. Wallah kamal..
Me sambhal lunga..
Awesme dialouge asad.
All in all mashalah, mashalah, kya bt he..
Seriously well done pumps. 🤗
I wantd to read it again n again.
Totaly rofling 🤣 update.
Thanks for early update and pm
Continue asap
And sory for short cments bche lil busy these days.
Bt i cnt be away frm ur hilarious updates.
LOVE
NIYATI
Edited by KaBhilove07 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
unrd my cment above
Edited by KaBhilove07 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KaBhilove07

Helloz melloz pumpy!!
ROFL! ROFL!
Marvalous update it was
Dinner silent.
Entry of pammi aunty voilent 🤣
Lovd asad's answer yeh ladki he 🤣
Pammi aunty knws dat asad, wat had hpnd to u .
Misinterperatation of name ye h zoya.
Dump aunty heard khoya.🤣😆
God finally gai to pammi aunty.
Zoya cme to learn architecture.. Jhoote asad 🤣
Oh they were unable to sleep cz of what hpnd few hours bck.
Gosh asad cares for her he wantd her to shop for herself.❤️
most awesome n loving part was sanwich n letter scene.. Soo good.
My my .. Bored zoya
Badly iritated by bond formed aunty.🤣
Chini, chaipati, masala, salt.. Ha ha ha 🤣 sb ek sth chahie tha.
Zoya made it rhyme salt, chini, chaipati, burger 🤣 even she said this to asad also.
Now shopping scene.. Wallah kamal..
Me sambhal lunga..
Awesme dialouge asad.
All in all mashalah, mashalah, kya bt he..
Seriously well done pumps. 🤗
I wantd to read it again n again.
Totaly rofling 🤣 update.
Thanks for early update and pm
Continue asap
And sory for short cments bche lil busy these days.
Bt i cnt be away frm ur hilarious updates.
LOVE
NIYATI


thank u so much
bt was this comment short
noways.. it was long one
thanq so much
even wen i wrote this i was rolling down
god knows from where i imagine this
rofl🤣
thank u so so so so so so so o so so so so so so so much
thanq to d power of infinity
oh my god , it was so hilarious that u wanna read it again n again
thanq so much
love u to d power of infinity
KaBhiKiBasanti thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

ya replied too
thank u so so so so so much
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: riddhi1206



ya replied too
thank u so so so so so much

ya seen.. Wasnt it short? Anyway keep updating such hilarious update. I m still khoya 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KaBhilove07

ya seen.. Wasnt it short? Anyway keep updating such hilarious update. I m still khoya 🤣


no ways it was long..
🤣 omg u r still khoya?
come back or else ur family will beat me wid the broom asking wherea re u?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: riddhi1206



no ways it was long..
🤣omg u r still khoya?
come back or else ur family will beat me wid the broom asking wherea re u?

dnt wry they wil nt.
🤣
I m nt with them nw
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KaBhilove07

dnt wry they wil nt.
🤣
I m nt with them nw


oh but still if they come to know then??
then where do u live?
Edited by riddhi1206 - 11 years ago

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