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Vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#721

Originally posted by: Aishwa09
Di ..Update soon !!

Pray kr mra net chl jaye. I ll strt writng. Nd sach khu agr sab ache se hua toh yeh update super cute hoga.🤗

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Vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#722

Originally posted by: Aishwa09
Continue soon !!

Paka aishu. Thnks for spamming.🤗

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Vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#723

Originally posted by: Aishwa09
Need a lambi update !!

Lambe update ki gurantee nh deti. Coz i dont have much ideas. Very little ideas i have. So let my xams end i ll end dis story but last part fursat se likhungi.😊. Nd plz is story ko extend krne ki dhamki mat dena. Tum dono mein se koi bhi.
Have a luk on my puppy face😔.

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Vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#724

Originally posted by: Aishwa09
Going to sleep ...But Update soon ...

No prblm dear. I ll update tmrw i guess. But abhi agr koi miracle ho gya aur net chl gya toh ur luck nh to tmrw.😊.
But uh go to sleep. Gud nyt.
Swtdrmz.
Tc
Luv uh muah🤗

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Vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#725

Hii guys.🤗.
Thnku so much guys for ur lovely comments, thnks to my readers who liked my stories.
Ok so this update is for my spammers whom i forgot to mntn in my last update: nilusoni, pravalika, aishu, ridhu who asked personally for this updates. Thnku so much who waited for my update. May be there can be few scenes which uh think r beyond the limits of a father daughter relation, sry for that but i dnt think its out of limits. But still if it hurts uh thn i am sorry. Ok without delaying more here's the update.
Part-12
Zara nd asad started with there surprise. Spotlight was on zara who was playing the role of zoya her ammi. She was running through the corridor[Fake Setup] nd from other side our hero asad was running who was getting late for his clas catching the spot light of stage.
Asad nd zara collided with eachother nd asad catched zara from her waist[Asad was siting on his knees to match her level]. They both were lost in eachothers eyes nd the fans started blowing there hairs in air. Full on filmy scene.
Zoya was seeing the whole scene with dreamy eyes.
After the pose asad leaves zara, in that process zara's choli was exposing a little more of her tummy. So instead of zara straitning herself asad did tht for her. All were smiling at the scene whereas najma, dilshaad, zoya nd zara were nodding their heads sideways at his possesive nature.
Zara-umm i am sorry my mistake nd she ran from there.
Asad acted as if lost in her beauty. He also ran for his class, they both were shocked to see eacother in their clas.
Dhire dhire asad ki zindagi mein locha-e-ulfat ho gaya.
The scene shifted to where asad was dancing on the song played by DJ same as arjun does in 2 states.
Iklauta mera dil tha
Bhola-bhaala simple tha
Tujhse main takraya
Sarphira ho gaya
Mujhe pyaar laga jo
Tujhe laga bhai-chara
Armaan to jaage
Main magar so gaya
Banke museebat
Peeche padi hai
Yeh comedy hai
Yaa tragedy hai
Naa hona tha kyun ho gaya
Locha-e-Ulfat ho gaya
After the song scene shifted to zara proposing asad nd asad rejecting her. And than finally asad confessing his feelings.
Asad-i love uh jaan.
Zara-i luv uh too abbu.😆. Everyone chuckled at her statement, it is thn she realized tht she is zoya not zara. So she corrected herself. I mean i love uh asad with that she gave a peck on his lips[Not a long one like asya did] nd burried her face in his abbu's chest.
zara-abbu m sorry galti se bol dia.
Asad-koi bat nh mri princess. Chlo dance ke liye ready?
Zara-ha. Ok so now this special dance for my ammi.
The song started.Ishq bulaava, jaane kab aave
Ishq bulaava, aave jab aave
Main ta kol tere rehna
Main ta kol tere rehna
Main ta baitha kol tere
Tainu takda rawaan
Baaton pe teri, hansda rawaan
Pagal main khud nu, bananda rawaan
Tu hansdi rawe, main hansaanda rawaan
Tainu takda rawaan.
Asad sat on his knees and swayed with zara. He kept one hand on her waist nd other entwined with her hand. Zara olso kept her one hand on asad's shoulder nd other entwined with his hand. They both were luking very cute in that position.
The Asad Ahmed Khan who never bows his head down infront of anyone is now on his knees dancing with her daughter so that he can make his lady love nd princess feel special. He picked her up from behind her knees nd zara opened her arms nd njoyed the beautiful moment with her dad.
This is what father daughter's relation is, full on swt nd possesive. Before ur husband father is the onyl one who can protect uh from this world nd can make uh feel special. I love my dad.
After the performance was over whole hall was echoed with a huge round of applause by ol the guests nd the complimnts they were giving.
But zara nd asad straight went to zoya, zara jumped in her lap nd hugged her tightly nd asad sat besides her.
Zara while hugging her-ammi kaisa laga hmara performance?
Zoya-it was awesime my princess. Nd she placed a kiss on her chubby cheeks.
Zara-ammi ab aap hum dono se naraz toh nahi ho na? Kuki abbu ne apko vo lehenga nahi pehnne dia.
Before zoya could say anythng asad also did the sam hugged zoya tightly nd asked-jaan how was ou performance?
Zoya-she was about to show fake anger but melted seeing their puppy faces.
She hugged them both-nahi ab main nahi hu naraz ap dono se. Nd this surprise was unexpected. Thnku so much for the surprise.
Zara-welcome. She gave a quick hug to both her parents. Nd went to give a intro of her new frnd to her old frnd.
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Love Vish❤️

Edited by MagsDhingra - 11 years ago

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Vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#726

Continuation of part-12
Zara went to ridhu and affu holding a girl's hand. Ridhu nd affu were talking on random topics when they saw zaru approaching thm, they ran towards her nd took her for a hug.
Affu-zaru uh were amazing. I loved ur performance.
Ridhu-seriously uh were amazing.
Zara-thnku guy. Ok guys meet my new frnd aishwarya. They ol shook hands. Nd said nyc to meet uh. Zara excused herself nd went to stage.
Zara-ok so now my few frnds nd some people from IF r going to perform.[Sry guys my pms were deleted so i dnt knw on which song uh were supposed to perform so i am taking the honour nd deciding songs bye myself]. Ok so we will start with my three best frnds. Afra, ridhi, aishwarya. Plz give a big round of applause for them.
The song started and ridhi came for her perfromance.
You Know She Like To Drama
Yeah She Is Sexy Mama
And When She Dance
Every Body Goes Ooo Oo
You Know She Like To Drama
Yeah She Is Sexy Mama
And When She Dance
Every Body Goes Ooo Oo
Haan Dekho To Bholi Kitni
Utni Per Dedhi Cheez Hai
Baatein Kare Hai Kadwi Kadwi
Phir Bhi Lazeez Hai
Itarr Gulabon Wali
Botal Sharabon Wali
Total Tabahi Wala Scene Hai
Adaayen Badi Funky
Kare Hai Nautanki
Yeh Chori Badi Drama Queen Hai
Ho Badi Badi Aankhen Hain
Aansuon Ki Tanki
Yeh Chhori Badi Drama Queen Hai
Adaayen Badi Funky
Kare Hai Nautanki
Yeh Chori Badi Drama Queen Hai
Ho Badi Badi Aankhen
Hain Aansuon Ki Tanki
Yeh Chhori Badi Drama Queen HaiSo the dance was over nd it was now aish's turn to dance.
Sone sone patole lakkhan
Sone sone patole lakkhan yeah...
Ae takdiyaan rehndiyaan ankhaan
Ae takdiyaan rehndiyaan ankhaan
Main ki dassaan apni ve
Ae chan karda hai tareefa
Ho mere husn de kone... kone kone di
Ho kone kone di..
Ho Baby doll main sone di
Ho Baby doll main sone di
Ho Baby doll main sone di
Ho Baby doll main sone di
Yeh duniya, yeh duniya pittal di
Yeh duniya pittal di
Yeh duniya pittal di..
Ho babydoll main sone di..
Gore gore pairaan vich
Nachdi nu pain hove
Laawa Zandu balm soniye.. yeah!
Nach nach thak jaangi
Baanh vich meri aaj
Karle aaram soniye soniye..After her performance now was turn of afra she started her dance.
Hey dhin tadaak dhin tadaak
Aaja ud ke saraat
Pairon se bedi zara khol
Nagada sang dhol baaje, dhol baaje
Dhaayn dhaayn dhum dhum dhaayn
Nagada sang dhol baaje, dhol baaje
Dhaayn dhaayn dhaayn dhum dhaayn (x2)
Re khat-khat haan khat-khat
Baaje dastak woh na ab tak aaya
Re tab se haan tab se
Haan dekhe raahein
Ki ab tu khol baahein aaja
Umad-ghumad ghumein
Re machle re mora mann
Goonje re baalam ke bol
Nagada sang dhol baaje, dhol baaje
Dhaayn dhaayn dhum dhum dhaaynAfter their solo performances, they danced together on the medely of the three songs drama queen, baby doll, nagada.
Zara-well that was an awesome perfromance by awesome girls. Plz give a huge round of applause for them.Nd now reema di, ashrina nd shrashti will perform. Plz give a huge round of applause to them.
First came reema di.
Heere moti main na chahoon
Main to chahoon, Sangam tera,
Mai to teri saiyaan, tu hai mera,
Saiyaan, saiyaanaaan
Tu jo choole pyaar se, araam se mar jaaun
Aaja chanda baaho mein tujhmein hi ghum hoi jaaun mai,
Tere naam mein kho jaaun,
Saiyaan, saiyaaan.
Than came shrashti.
Itna maza, kyun aa raha hai
Tune hawa mein bhaang milaya
Itna maza, kyun aa raha hai
Tune hawa mein bhaang milaya
Dugna nasha, kyun ho raha hai
Aankhon se meetha tune khilaya
Ho teri malmal ki kurti gulabi ho gayi
Manchali chaal kaise nawaabi ho gayi, toh?
Balam pichkari jo tune mujhe maari
Toh seedhi saadi chhori sharaabi ho gayi
Haa Jeans pahen ke jo tune maara thumka
Toh lattoo padosan ki bhabhi ho gayi
Thn came Ashrina
Hawa ke jhonke aaj mausamon se rooth gaye
Gulon ki shokhiyaan jo bhanwre aake loot gaye
Badal rahi hai aaj zindagi ki chaal zara
Issi bahaane kyun naa main bhi dil ka haal zara
Sanwaar loon haaye sawaar loon
Sawaar loon haaye sawaar loon
Baramade puraane hain, nayi si dhoop hai
Jo palke khatkhata raha hai kiska roop hai
Shararatein kare jo aise bhoolke hijab
Kaise usko naam se, main pukar loon
Sawaar loon, sawaar loon..
So here it is. Sorry if uh find it boring but i cant explain the dance steps nd i promised my reader to give this scene.
Nyone who want to join plz tel ur song nd join the sangeet.
Love Vish❤️

Edited by MagsDhingra - 11 years ago

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Aishu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#727

I loved it a lot

It was awesome

Cute ,

Sweet ,

Lovely ,

Amazing

Wonderful ,

Adorable

Zara is Adorably cute

Asya are So so sweet

Loved it completely !!

Edited by Aishwa09 - 11 years ago