ASYA SS: ABBU UH R ONLY MINE AND AMMI'S Last Part Updated ON PAGE-119 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hii guys. How r uh ol? Thnku so much for ur lovely comments. I really appreciate thm nd i am happy tht uh want to read this ss.
I want to tell uh guys tht this idea is solely mine, i have not copied from anywhere.
So here is part-1 hope uh lyk it. I will give the intro side by side. Hope uh dont mind?
Part-1
In New York
Zoya waking up her 5 year old little princess-zara uth jao baby uh r getting late for ur skul.
Zara rubbing her eyes-2 mins more ammi plz.
Zoya-no baby its already late plz get up.
After few minutes she woke up. Zoya helped her in getting fresh and finally she was dressed in her skul uniform. Dark blue mini skirt with pink striped shirt and a tie, and two cute pony tails.
Zoya gave her butter bread with juice-come on baby plz finish it.
Zara-ammi i am not hungry,plz.
Zoya-baby how many times i have said that i want uh to speak in hindi at our home.
Zara-but why ammi we live in NY.
Zoya-but ur abbu wants that her princess speaks hindi.
Zara-sachi? Ammi agar main hindi bolungi toh he ll come to stay with us.
Zoya's smile faded-umm yes. Now plz finish ur breakfast.
After having breakfast zoya drove to zara's skul.
At Holy Child School[I dont think there any skul with this name. That's my skul's name].
Zoya hugged her and kissed on her chubby cheeks-ok baby bye. Love you. Zara olso hugged her kissed her-bye ammi luv uh too.
Zoya dropped her at skul and went for her work. She was a successful businesswoman owing the best constructions name asya constructions. For her staff she is a hitler which only needs work, nothing else.
In asya constructions.
Zoya to her p.a.-somya the work i said is done or not.
Somya-its olmost done ma'am we have sent our proposal to mr. Asad ahmed khan. He ll give his answer by tomorrow.
Zoya-ok uh can leave now.
In India at night.
Khan Mansion at dining table.
Dilshad-asad yeh dekho yeh ladki kaisi hai? Showing a photo to him with a smirk which asad didnt notice as he didnt luk up.
Asad-ammi uh knw very wel tht i dont want to get married. Ap ku bar bar yeh sab karti hai. Nyway i am done bye gud nyt tamatar, ammi.
Najma-gudnyt bhaijaan.
D-ok gud nyt.
D olso took her leave nd went to her room, she dialled a no.
In NY nd India.
ZOYA-ASsalam-o-walekum ammi.
D-walekum asalam beta. Kaise ho tum dono?
Zoya-hum dono thik hai ammi. Ap bht khush lag rahi hai. Oh dont tel me aaj apne phir asad ko ek ladki ka proposal diya.
D-ha aur usne phir mana kar dia.
Zoya-ku karti hai ap ammi aise.
D-taaki mujhe pata lagta rahe that he still loves uh. Beta tum kab aogi main apne bete ko tum dono se aur dur nahi rakh sakti. Aur sad nahi dekh sakti use.
Zoya-bas ammi bht jald aungi, jis maksat se main yaha ayi thi vo ab pura ho chuka hai.
D-acha beta Allah hafiz.
Zoya-Allah hafiz ammi.
Zoya to herself-bs asad kuch time aur yeh dooriyan. Uske bad ap mere pas hoge. I miss uh love uh my love.
In India in asad's room
Asad luking at zoya's pic-ku kiya tumne aisa mere sath zoya? Ku main tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karunga. But still i love uh. Plz come back. I dont even know where r uh.
In Ny at HCS[Holy Child School]
Zara and her friends were siting.
Ruhi-Hey guys fathers day is coming. I ll give a pen to my father.
Shreya-ya i am so excited i ll give watch, i have collected money for it.
Rey-ya i ll also gift him something i have not decided yet.
Reema-me too i am so excited. Wht about uh zara, wht will uh gift him?
Zara was very sad with the mention of word father but she didnt show it to anyone-i thing i ll give him a hand made card.
All-but how will uh give him. He dont even live here.
Zara who trying hard not to cry now ran from there and sat in a corner and cried for his father.
It was time for zoya to come and take her from skul.
Zoya-hii baby hows was ur day?
Zara with a fake smile-it was ok mom.
Zoya thought something is wrong as she only refer her as mom only when she is sad or angry.
Zoya-did anyone say anything to uh?
Zara-no mom i am fyn. Nothing happened. Plz lets go.
Zoya-ok baby come.
At night on same day.
Zoya was preparing dinner and zara was making card for his father he used to do since she learnt writing.
Zoya came in room and zara hid that card under the pillow.
Zoya saw that she is hiding something but she didnt ask her-come baby dinner is ready.
Zara-ok ammi.
So how was the first part? Sorry guys if i forgot someone's name. Afu, raj dont wry ur role will be in next part.
Guys plz do tel me who want pms of my story and which story's pm uh want. As i pm to so many bt dey dont even read it so plz tel me. It will be easier for me to send pms to only who r intrsted. Nd new readers plz send buddy rqst if uh want pms.
Love Vish❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: MagsDhingra


Oh ohk. Dnt wry dis ff i ll update now. Nd other i ll update before uh leave nd aftr uh update urs.
Vaise somu meko yad aya tri ek aur ff bhi thi jo zoyaan track pe bani thi. Tu vo kab update kregi? May be agle janam tak😆

thank u
mai apna naya ff kal update karungi 😉
oh...ya mera ek aur ff hai 😆
zoyan track toh khatam ho gaya...aab i m thinking aage kya update karu...i m confused 😕
but don't worry maine usske bare mai bhi sochna start kar diya hai 😉😆
toh shayad tumhe iss hi janam mai update mil jaye 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
yay...yipee
i m first
my zara is so sweet 😳
she can speak hindi also just to meet her father...awww...
Zoya to her p.a.-somya the work i said is done or not.
Somya-its olmost done ma'am we have sent our proposal to mr. Asad ahmed khan. He ll give his answer by tomorrow.
Zoya-ok uh can leave now.
yay so i m zoya's p.a. nice...i loved it
aye aye caption maine mr asad ahmed khan ko proposal send kar diya...see i m so punctual 😆
proposal k bahane asad se baat bhi kar lungi 😉
but zoya is a hitler 😲 in her office
omg bechari mai 😭😆
thank u so much vaishu for entering my name in your update 🤗
it means a lot 😳
asad is missing my zoya a lot 😭
yaar my dilshad is so funny 😆
father's day is coming...awww my poor zara😡
vaishu ki bachi meri zara ko fathers day pe asad se zaroor milwana 😡
zoya new york kyu gayi thi ?
konsa aadhura kam complete kiya zoya ne ?
kya asad ko pata hai k uski ek beti hai ?
janne k liye wait kijiye agle update ka ka ka 😉
so i just loved the update
update soon 😉
Edited by rockstar_16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: rockstar_16


thank u
mai apna naya ff kal update karungi😉
oh...ya mera ek aur ff hai😆
zoyan track toh khatam ho gaya...aab i m thinking aage kya update karu...i m confused😕
but don't worry maine usske bare mai bhi sochna start kar diya hai😉😆
toh shayad tumhe iss hi janam mai update mil jaye😆


Oh thts grt. Thnk God mujhe update ke liye next janam tk w8 nh krna pdega.
Vaise aftr zoyaan track show asya na pagal. Aur kya babaji ka thullu dikhaoge asya ff mein ap madam😆. Nyway i want a long update tmrw.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
very sweet part
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon
eager for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: MagsDhingra


Oh thts grt. Thnk God mujhe update ke liye next janam tk w8 nh krna pdega.
Vaise aftr zoyaan track show asya na pagal. Aur kya babaji ka thullu dikhaoge asya ff mein ap madam😆. Nyway i want a long update tmrw.

haan toh maine previous updates mai zoya ka birthday and asad k surprises show kiya na 😛
now i m thinking of asya nikah then gaffur's truth😉 whats say 😉😆
and i will try to give u long update tomorrow 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
saaarii stories ke liye pm kr diya karo..!! 😛
this part was reallyy good.. but y did zoya leave asad.. wat was the maksad behind it?? and y doesnt asad know where is she..??
sooo manyy questions r in my mind..
so keep writing so that u clear everything!! 😉
waiting for ur next pm...
update TINBSTIS soon too pleeaasseee...!! 😊


-fuii-

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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Zara is so cute...!
i really like Dilshad-Zoya conversation...!
awww poor Asad...!
I really like this update...!
update soon and plz pm me...!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

It was gud

Loved it

Keep writing

Thanks 4 the pm

Love
Linnet
😛😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
loved it
amazing updt
cont soon😊

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