AsYa FF Our Lives Entwined - Thread 4 - Chapter Eleven To Thirteen - Page 70

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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg omg so this was the past..So
for sure she shouldnt forgive.. atleast not so soon..
How can he say so..
Though in toxicated state but he shouldn't say those things...
Omg sehrish i will kill u for sure..
How can u ?
U ghost i hate u , i will kill u...
Arghh...
The flashback was beautifully written..-
But was upsetting..
Yeah i know that if the man say talak 3 times then the couple gets divorced n then they cant marry agAin unless n until the girl is again married n divorce his husband..
She shared everything with dilshad..
still asad how can you..
I didnt expected this from u ...
Dildhad tried to console her..
So sweet ..
Thank god rashid slapped him on time..
Otherwise he would have done something which he would regret later..
So she finally said that they should get seperated.,..
N she moved back to new York..
She studied hard just to prove him wrong with pride in her..
But what asad said was really bad..
He was ashamed that he married a girl in high school..
He didnt wanted to marry her..
He was a singer so he didnt wanted to marry her..
He hated her..
He didnt even cared to give her explanation..
Zoya is an indeed strong girl..
He tried to apologise but she didnt responded..
Very good zoya you should take full revenge..
It was superb, really well written
Update soon



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rattyswami

Asad in his foolishness was about to divorce Zoya😲

Yeh ladka pagal hai😕
Zoya should never forgive him...infact she should leave him if he can't accept her for who she is...
why did Zoya give up her dreams for Asad's wish to marry a doctor??
That's wrong yaar...such a talented and intelligent girl and married to such a grouch...
Zoya should be pursued by a guy who is just like her...fun=loving, crazy, musically inclined etc etc
then Asad would know that he too isn't the 'Perfect' match for Zoya...and even she was forced to marry a dull guy like him...cuz till now I think he thinks that only he is the one who is compromising in this marriage😲


Thank You 😃
I am glad that you liked it !!
I will clear all this in coming updates and make sure that Asad regres for his deeds 😆
Will try to update soon 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--


yeah but what will my readers think ?? 😭😆😆


CHILL DEAR...I DON'T THINK ANY OF UR READERS LIKE SEHRISH...SO NO PROBS FOR THAT...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

he owes her a big fat apology for past and current situation too


I will make sure he regrets 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank You 😃
I am glad that you liked it !!

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aksasya


CHILL DEAR...I DON'T THINK ANY OF UR READERS LIKE SEHRISH...SO NO PROBS FOR THAT...😆


But I love her isn't that enough 😳😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Woaw so this is how everything happen 😡😡

Asad was going to Talaq her please bubby preaty please send him here like this I knocks him out with his big ego and his anguish 😡😈

Poor Zoya when she felt on the floor and was crying i feel so bad for her 😭

And this Sherish like always Asad is so blind that he did not saw that she was manipulated him

But awesome udapte bubby even if Asad have upset me i really liked this udapte 🤗🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

Omg omg so this was the past..So

for sure she shouldnt forgive.. atleast not so soon..
How can he say so..
Though in toxicated state but he shouldn't say those things...
Omg sehrish i will kill u for sure..
How can u ?
U ghost i hate u , i will kill u...
Arghh...
The flashback was beautifully written..-
But was upsetting..
Yeah i know that if the man say talak 3 times then the couple gets divorced n then they cant marry agAin unless n until the girl is again married n divorce his husband..
She shared everything with dilshad..
still asad how can you..
I didnt expected this from u ...
Dildhad tried to console her..
So sweet ..
Thank god rashid slapped him on time..
Otherwise he would have done something which he would regret later..
So she finally said that they should get seperated.,..
N she moved back to new York..
She studied hard just to prove him wrong with pride in her..
But what asad said was really bad..
He was ashamed that he married a girl in high school..
He didnt wanted to marry her..
He was a singer so he didnt wanted to marry her..
He hated her..
He didnt even cared to give her explanation..
Zoya is an indeed strong girl..
He tried to apologise but she didnt responded..
Very good zoya you should take full revenge..
It was superb, really well written
Update soon




haha ya she is not forgiving him for sure 😆
Thank You soo mucchh Ridhhi I am glad that u liked it !!
It really means alot to me 😳
He gave explanation in his mail,,
I will show it sooon 😆
Will try to update sooon buddy 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--


Aww I am sorry Aisshh
U can expect this from normal Asad moreover he was drunk here 😆
LoL no she wasn't mature if she was then she wouldn't have asked him to finish this chapter or she wouldn't have told all this to Dilshad 😆
Yes he took her ,,
I was just not making Ayaan's thing too much as I had to finish FB today !!
Thank You Aisshh 😳
I am looking for a good punishment for her these days 😕


PUNISHMENT FOR HER 😲 WHY????
SHE ACTED MORE MATURE THAN HER AGE ATLEAST...BUT ASAD ACTED LIKE 18 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: akaswan

Woaw so this is how everything happen 😡😡


Asad was going to Talaq her please bubby preaty please send him here like this I knocks him out with his big ego and his anguish 😡😈

Poor Zoya when she felt on the floor and was crying i feel so bad for her 😭

And this Sherish like always Asad is so blind that he did not saw that she was manipulated him

But awesome udapte bubby even if Asad have upset me i really liked this udapte 🤗🤗


Thank You 😃
I am glad that you liked it !!
am I mad that I will give my Asad to u,,
he is only mine 😆
Asad is always blind when it comes to friendship 😛
Will try to update soon 😉

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