AsYa FF Our Lives Entwined - Thread 4 - Chapter Eleven To Thirteen

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Sabina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#641

Loved the update

Update soon❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago

#642

unresed on Page# 66 n 84

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Posted: 11 years ago

#643

dat was nt done at all
zoya shld give him a real hard tym
he deserves it
do update soon

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@Zola029

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Posted: 11 years ago

#644

Awesome update !

Asad was such a fool back then !

First for believing Sehrish😡😡 and then for saying all thoses harsh words to Zoya ! 😭

Poor her 😭

eager to see to which extent he'll go to be forgiven !

Eager to read the next update !

Continue soon (:

Thanks for the pm (:

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Posted: 11 years ago

#645

Originally posted by: -Maliha-
ask shreya!
she is good in that😆😆😆

Res For Chapter 13😆

well thanxGod aftera long time you gave a long update,, so no complaints over that

so now whole past thing is open...

Sehrish,, well am on 🤬 mode fah her..
so she was planning to GET REAL😲
i mean cox she thought she didn't plan to giva show to Zoya,,

Drunken AAK...
Man! he was hard to handle,,
he was about to divorce?
ThanxGod dillu slapped @ the right moment
that whole argument...n especially zoya's part was written awesomely

well if i had been on zoe's place,, then i must had not given em a second chance...
she must have read that e-mail...might be thas why still hada soft corner,,,

update soon

haha ya it was long I just wanted to finish this FB thing 😆

Yeah real is better than fake ni ?? 😳

Thank You sooo mucchh Maliha !!

and Rashid slapped him just for a change 😎

Yup she has a soft corner for him also because she loves him na !!

Will try to update sooon !!

and thanks for giving ur review before I updated even,,

what a prediction 😲

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Alone111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#646

Wow... It was emotional... Wonderful update.. Continue soon..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#647

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet
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very well written update!!!

Shreish dis witch needed to taught a lesson now!!!! 😡

Asad he should take anger management classes 😡

Thank God Rashid slapped him!!!
If he would have continued dat sentence he would have regretted more!!!!

Zoya did right thing!!!

thanks 4 pm

should wait for 2 days again!!!!

Thank You 😃

I am glad that you liked it !!

I am thinking about a punishment for her these days 😆

Ya he would have but I stopped at the right time I am soo smart 😎

Will try to update soon 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#648

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

haha ya it was long I just wanted to finish this FB thing 😆
Yeah real is better than fake ni ?? 😳
Thank You sooo mucchh Maliha !!
and Rashid slapped him just for a change 😎
Yup she has a soft corner for him also because she loves him na !!
Will try to update sooon !!
and thanks for giving ur review before I updated even,,
what a prediction 😲

it seeems mae 6th sense is getting better,,,🤣🤣
ps thanx fah fulfilling the promise... making RAK, Obl*****e☺️🤣🤣

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Posted: 11 years ago

#649

Originally posted by: awesome
awesome part

Thank You 😃

I am glad that you liked it !!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#650

Originally posted by: CHOCOSWATHI
awesome update
poor zoya felt bad for her
sherish said akram to mark her innocence..and asad also belived her...
wanna read asad's letter though it was official

Thank You 😃

I am glad that you liked it !!

I will show it sooon maybe in chapter 15 I guess 😆

Will try to update soon 😉