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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey...awesome concept..loved it continue soon
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very nice part
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wow it was an awesome update i just loved it to the core of my heart please do continue soon and thanks for the pm dear😊
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Asad is gone and zoya did not feel like eat
Zoya: ammi I'm going to the room I don't feel well I got a headache
(Zoya get up from her chair wen dilshad said)
Dilshad: zoya u never even ate two bits PLZ eat then go
Dilshad thought: I think she is think about wat asad said n is upset I hope asad come back quick n tells her so she can have that dimple smile back(upset worried) I will tell her to eat
Zoya: nahi ammi don't feel like eating anything
Dilshad : but zo..(cut of)
Dadi: leave it dilshad... Umm...zoya beta wen u feel well n feel like eating come n take ur food
Zoya: good night
Everyone: good night

Asya room night
Zoya was in her bed n waiting for asad to come . she called him his phone was not reachable n she could not sleep because the fear of losing asad was scaring her more as the time was passing she lost her parent n does not want to lose as.
Show was think about this n go a headache but the fear was more then her headache

In the morning
Everyone had breakfast but zoya never had it she was still in her room n everyone thought she is not feel well so let her sleep
Everyone in their room living room phone rings najma answers it
Najma: hello
Asad: tamatar.. I have I'm coming back in a hour tell ammi that I came back in the morning at 6am so don't worry I'm just going to office n will be back in a hour
Najma: k bhaijaan bye
Asad: bye
Najma disconnects the phone n turn to tell dilshad but her phone rings
Najma: hi nuzzat
Nikhat: idoit it Nikhat not nuzzat
Najma: k sorry now tell
Nikhat: wat day is it
Najma:(smirking) ummm... It is Monday why
Nikhat: no it is not (upset angry)
Najma: yaar I checked on the calendar it is Monday
Nikhat: yes it is...but...(cut of)
Najma: see I told u it is Monday
Nikhat: but there is more to it
Najma: is there wat am I missing...urm...is it
Nikhat:is it wat
Najma: is it
Nikhat: wat yaar tamatar u always do this ...(crying)
... How.. Can u forget it my birthday
Najma: buddu I was just kidding how can I forget it is ur birthday
Nikhat: I don't want to talk to u talk to nuzzat I'm not ur friend any more
Najma: wat yaar come on I was kidding
Nikhat hand nuzzat the phone
Nuzzat: wat yaar najma u upset her now come quick she is really angry
Najma: k I'm coming(najma runs out without informing anyone about asad)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~flashback~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Asad calls dilshad at night
Dilshad : asad were r u
Asad: ammi go to sleep I will not be back tonight there is a deal that I got n it has some problems I have to go to Ajmer for that I can call u after this because there is not signal
I will call u wen I'm back
Dilshad:k but wat about the promise u made
Asad: ammi I will tell her wen I get back
Dilshad: k

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~end of flashback~~~~~~~~

Precap: mein ku bato
HahAha
Kkk
So
The precap: zoya faints
That it now wait for update comment or I will not update n I will update tomorrow if I get more then 20 or even 20 comments by today so send it to friends
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update 😉
loved it 😛
update soon
Edited by --SH7_Sunny-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome,fabulace how can you update so nicely😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome updates
Dilshad knew that both love each other
Zoya is scared to lose asad &
Asad thought clear by dilshad that she loves u
He is going yo Ajmer
Precap was looking more interesting
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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the story is really nice ...
asad miyaan is always confused hope he confess soon...
continue soon
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Awesome!!👏
Read all three parts in a go!!
update soonish..😳

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