OS: Wishing Upon a Shooting Star - Page 2

Originally posted by: rajnid68

Hey..this is absolutely brilliant...

Did not seem ok from any angle...

Loved rhat zoya wished for asad..

And directly they would be in touch..

All thanks to ayaan and humeira..

Can you continue it..

If and when u get the time..

Thanks for the pm..

Originally posted by: Chahanya

Cute

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

'...one of Allah's beautiful creations'

👍🏼

Why you didn't like it so much, I'd never know. Actually Sis dearest. It's not good. Really. You're right. You shouldn't have posted it. I mean...it was just great. Quite amazingly written. That's all. What's so special about a very good story. A story that leaves you smiling and going all "Hmmm, if only". Nothing much right? I mean it's just WOAH. Like super WOAH. That's it. It's just very well written. No biggie. You should have just deleted it. Yeah. I mean fantastic is so mediocre right?

Hehe.

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Ooops.😆

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

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Seriously Einstein I am having to cover my mouth to muffle my laughter...if Z wakes up because her Khala has got her mother in fits of laughter you are in trouble

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Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

Beautiful and funny!! 😆

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

First of all, Khala? Who Khala? Nooo. Api okayh! FIRE! hehe.

Fine. Khala then. She might end up calling me Lala. Or Kaya.

Secondly, why you laughing. Such bakwas commentary that was. I didn't like your story, and you laugh?

Hehe.

Wake up baby Z!!!! WAKE UP!!!!!! Give Momma a hard time!!!!

And a super sloppy mwah mwa MWAH!! From your Khalooo...😆 (Oh God!)

If this does turn into something more than an OS, please, I very much like this very assertive Zoya. No public showcase of any make-out session. A peck, sure. No lip-locking. Just a very quick MWAH! She can be sweet. But very proper.

And I have to say this for IF records- I LOVE THIS OS.

2 am here, and I have Kamli.on.VIDEO.and.on.REPEAT. Katrina's HOT!

Civil Procedure, what?

Jr