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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: QueenOfMyCastle

Gitu (can I call u that? I tend to give names to everyone here...😆?)

awesome post, well put and thought out.

Pri -i will give the verse a shot once I have some time.


Yes dear, you can call me Gitu. Just now I replied to Anu that today I'm getting a lot of nick names.
Thanks.
You didn't make a post?

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: QueenOfMyCastle

continuing with the story

Two goons came that way
Came that way, Came that way
Two goons came that way
To scare Zoya away

Zoya fought with all her might
All her might, all her might
Zoya fought with all her might
Until she fizzled out

Razia put the factory on fire,
Factory on fire, factory on fire
Razia put the factory on fire
Soon there was smoke all around

In the distance a lion roared
A lion roared, a lion roared
In the distance a lion roared
His appearance was awaited

He fought through the fires and smoke
Fires and smoke, sires and smoke
He fought the fires and smoke
To get his lady out

Okay now I am out of ideas...plus the last verse can be improved


Good work Rivs.👏
QH is one of its kind.
It not only brings out the writer but also the poet or poetess.😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: GitaIyer


Yes dear, you can call me Gitu. Just now I replied to Anu that today I'm getting a lot of nick names.
Thanks.
You didn't make a post?

no...there was an abundance of them last night...maybe on Monday? Kids have 4 days off now so will be a little tied up.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: QueenOfMyCastle

no...there was an abundance of them last night...maybe on Monday? Kids have 4 days off now so will be a little tied up.

Ok. Will wait for monday, anyways precap doesn't make me look forward to monday though.
Me too kids are having winter break.
Have a good time.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: GitaIyer

Ok. Will wait for monday, anyways precap doesn't make me look forward to monday though.
Me too kids are having winter break.
Have a good time.

u r in Jaipur right? Abhi tak winter break? We are having Sankranti break here..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Awesome post as always :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: QueenOfMyCastle

u r in Jaipur right? Abhi tak winter break? We are having Sankranti break here..

Yeah, I'm in Jaipur. Winter break from 1st to 15th, to be extended if winter becomes anymore severe that it already is.😆
Where d you stay?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Oh wow u guys continued the poem
Lovely poem del and rivs 👏
We have a new nusery rhyme for kids 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: GitaIyer

Yeah, I'm in Jaipur. Winter break from 1st to 15th, to be extended if winter becomes anymore severe that it already is.😆
Where d you stay?

Hyderabad
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MisZoobieDoobie

Oh wow u guys continued the poem

Lovely poem del and rivs 👏
We have a new nusery rhyme for kids 😆

I doubt we need the kids in on this...thanks.

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