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Gourav

@Shubh007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

AWESOME UPDATE...😃👏

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amruta04

@amruta04

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

awesome update..loved it
story is getting interesting...
lets see what Asad do now...
do continue soon

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anushreemishra

@anushreemishra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

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You know what i logged on yesterday(on 8th) just to have a quick peek on whats going on in the forum and since I didn't expect a back to back update I thought that it was 9th and not 8th and logged off but then i realized that it was indeed 8th which means that you did update and then i rushed back and resd my spot😆

Haha i know that was lame but see you and your updates make me go crazy😆

Ah finally the cat is out of the bag...i knew zoya's innocent plans would lead to a lot of not so innocent revealations😆😆

OMG i am literally in your head...i predicted exactly this vijay leaking sensitive information to a rival and dilshad constructions losing their last contract...man i was dead only...only i didn't figure out Vinod's involvement in all this😕😕😕

I knew it..i knew it that satee chicken couldn't cause so much oil spill

So Narges and Miss RK are here...They are cool trying to lighten the mood..must be great to work with people like these...

Asad shook his head disappointedly, before grabbing Vinod by the collar and pulling him up a little, slamming him on an empty side of the pillar that Vijay had been tied to.

Gusse wala asad😳😳😳...i love him😳😳

Ah i guessed that Vinod was getting so much leeway because of his father...

I can understand Vinod's anger for Asad TBH but he has been very ungrateful

"You dare say one more word against Miss Farooqui, I swear I will pull your tongue out and feed it to the dogs," Asad growled, making Vinod cower a little under his scowl.

hayee gusse wala asad again😳😳Guys beware don't you say anything against Mr.Khan Miss museebat you guys won't be alive to see the light the next day😆😆

As if on cue, the main door swung open and a group of police officers entered, with Dhurandar Bhatawdekar and Dolly leading them in.

Ahh Mr.Bhatwadekar and Miss Dolly are here...story is finally reaching its climax..man Vijay has turned the tables around but I guess everything will fall in place afterall we know what a sucker for happy ending our Green is😳😳

Love you loads Green❤️❤️❤️

P.S.-not making predictions Cause i already read the next part

see you on next comment😆😆

Edited by anushreemishra - 11 years ago

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Amazing update. Left me wanting for more. The way the truth came out was nice. Loved Mrs.RK's response to being taken to Asad's office. Mr. Bhatawdekar n Ms. Dolly. Ab kya hoga?
Hope Asad proposes to Zoya infront of everyone.

Please update soon n pm me for the next part.

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t1234

@t1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Haha Vijay turned out to be more cunning than we thought!

I wonder if now the whole engagement fiasco happens?!!

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life4me

@life4me

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

What a twist! I am sure Asad will do something to stop Zoya and will kiss her again.

Update soon.

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Uh...Oh...

Dolly and Mr Bhatwa...Whatever is back😔

Another great part Green Ji👍🏼 The mystery has been revealed finally...That bloody V's...Cheaters😡 But that Vijay is a slime...He reported Asad and Zoya to the police and visa officers😡

I really hope that Asad and Zoya find a way out of this situation. Since mr whatever has re-entered would you be adding some humourous scenes??? I just love your sense of humour in your writings❤️

I really want Asad and Zoya's relationship to develop more...They have kissed already😉 Are you planning to take them to the next level?😉 ( Please remove your mind from the gutter, I meant are they going to become GF and BF's now😆)

Waiting to read more...Please do not keep me in suspense for too long dear

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@metoyou

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Hola, its me! Yes, yet again I have to catch up with some parts. Tum toh ek dum full speed mein ho. Mein peeche nahin reh sakti 😛

Part 27

So I did, and I was right, he was the one who did it (We knew he was the evil one)

Vinod had put oil there himself when he came in, and then Vijay came in later to check if the mall model had fallen or not (Whoaaa, really?! Okay quite shocking!) 😲

announcing hers and her daughter's arrival at the same time (We are here...and indeed, what a (bad) timing)

From what I caught, this fiasco seems to involve our project as well, so I would like to be in the know. Besides, there seems to be a party I'm missing out on... (I love my RK mom) 😳

just to be cut off by a tight slap on his face (There you go Vinod!) 😡

'I should've known that trying to keep you in a country that didn't even want you would turn out to be a big mistake'. You lied to the authorities and employed her just to keep her in the country right?" (What the...?!) 😲

and then called the immigration office (Oh no...)😕

As if on cue, the main door swung open and a group of police officers entered, with Dhurandar Bhatawdekar and Dolly leading them in (OMG...Nooo)

FREEZE! Yeh kya tha? The content of this part was not expected at all! That Vinod I care less about. But this Vijay...he is smarter than I thought! He knew about all that immigration stuff and he called Mr...Whatever. Did is really something very unexpected.

Lekin Mr. Khan is not that stupid. The tables might have been turned now but I am sure he will come up with some other plan. Engagement? Or is that too predictable? Well after this update, we can expect anything and everything from you!

What a great update, Green! Loved it, lage raho!👏👏👏

Can't wait to read the next part!😃😃

Edited by metoyou - 11 years ago