Originally posted by: kals82
hai green,
awesome update by the way...
i am so happy that u drew the line on the right spot...
let their heart become one before they physically became one..
both of them are one confused soul...
still now zoya is not clear of what she feels for asad... the attraction ..oh yeah agree...but,...but...
asad miyaa... be a man and confess... bcoz so far that is the unwritten rule.. that man should confess...
so zoya wanted it to happen so.. she removed her pin... and suddenly she got a doubt... about asli or nakli... from whatever they were planning on.. how could they make it nakli.. or they planning to fake it...oops...
by the way... i have read all ur ff so far.. u never venture beyond kiss... i hope u cross the bar.. this time...
love it.. and waiting for more...