FF: Yes Boss #3 - Link to #4 on pg 1 - Page 55

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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it.
awesome.
finally they are married.
yippeee.
plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update!!!
but seriously i would not want to be in zoya's place right now..knowing that asad think of it as a nakli nikaah...n the uncertainty of so many things...going thru that emotional turmoil is horrible!!!
finaaly they are married..bt im worried abt the damn papers!!!
update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
I hope you are planning to give us a wicked SR, it must be a spur of the moment kind of thing, like when he kiss her.
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Posted: 11 years ago
OH MY GOD! Loved it Greenu :)
Missed you hun!
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG...! Nikaah...? Cool...! Lets party...! 🥳 <3 But am i missing something...?! What are those papers all about...?! Contract marriage, Divorce papers...?! Great now my head is spinning in diffferent directions...! But a chotta wala update...? *sniffs*... 😭
Eagerly waiting for an update to clear out somethings... 🤔


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: akh20

ohh finally nikaah hogya!! yipee!! but couldn't exActly catch their axtions n reactions or feelings more clearly if I say!!!



Ohh, that's disappointing ): I was trying to convey it through subtle actions, but maybe it didn't make as much sense in writing than it did in my head. Chalo nevermind, I'll try harder next time (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lasya13

Itna chotu wala update??
hmm I thought they ll resolve everything before nikaah..
but as usual u surprised me..
So nw they r bound by nakli nikaah...
u still din reveal us abt tripati n papers...

loved the update...surprise me by giving an update soon plzzz 😆



Haha yeah, my initial plan was to resolve it before the wedding, but then I changed my mind because like you said, it'd be too predictable haha. I didn't reveal on purpose, while Zoya's in the dark, so are the readers hahaha. Glad you liked it (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: NAVI55

Nikaah Mubarak🥳

I really could care less if it is a fake marriage...They got married that's all that matters...We can work from there😆
I'm going to find an outfit to wear because I'm sure I'll be invited to their Walima😆
Brillliant Green Ji👏 Well written...
I loved the part where Asad did not say Qubool Hai until Zoya looked at him...It was so poignant
I'll be waiting for the Nakli Suhagraat😉 That should be next right after the Walima😉...
I loved this❤️
Green Ji you must be well...Two updates in a week😃
🤗🤗🤗



Find a green outfit :p Is your real name Navi or something else? Yeah even though it's supposed to be nakli, I still wanted to show some form of realness in it haha. Glad you liked it (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

wow for the first time your FF showed an AsYa nikaah and not just an implication of a future wedding. Ok it was a nakli nikaah but a nikaah none the less!


Im way too curious about those damned papers! UGHH! 😆



Yeah haha decided to try something new for a change :p Continue reading and you'll find out soon enough hahaha. Glad you liked it (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerose

Finally the nakli nikkah has happened which is completely asli for others except the bride and bridegroom. Lol

I wonder will they have nakli consummation or not and Asad will "We will have to have a nakli suhaagrat Ms. Farooqui otherwise we ll be caught"😉
Superb update yet again with superb elaboration of the intricacies. I love your writing style. It seems its all going on a screen which captures each and every expression, action and gesture.



HAHA gosh, it'd be hilarious if I made Asad say that :p Thank you so much for the compliment, I do try to add as many details as I can so it can be imagined better (:

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