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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Ankita,
Love Zoya's diary.
Love Asad and Zoya's text messages.
The bond is getting stronger with each passing moment.
Absolutely brilliant. A friend, a confidant, An understanding just teh foundation of a wonderful relationship ahead.
Just love the way the story is proceeding. Simply cute and Simple.
You write really well.
thanks for this story. It brings back my college day memories.
Hugs and much love🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: treasure11

HAWW...ANKI I THOUGHT HE WILL VISIT HER ON SUNDAY SINCE SHE WAS BORED AND THEN SOME ROMANCE 😉 🤣 🤣 BUT YOU BROKE MY HEART 🥺🤣

my asad and zoya are very sharif ash...🤣


AWWW...POOR NAJMA ...SHE WAS FED UP OF PRACTICING 😆COMPLAINING OF ASAD AND ZOYA NE CHANCE MARA 😲
🤣 CHATRI HAI BOHOT 🤣

yes, asad is driving najma mad with vigorous rehearsals...so zoya came to her rescue...
chatri???😕

ASAD IS TRUSTING HER MORE AND MORE NOWW...THEIR RELATIONSHIP IS GETTING STRONGER ...I LOVE HOW IT IS GNG ON SLOWLY...

with time, they will understand each other more 😳

SOO HE FOUND OUT BOUT HER DIARY ...WHAT IF HE READS IT 😲SHE MAY GET EMBARESSED NA ...

no, he wont read it 😆😆

RASHID'S TRUTH 😕...SPIT IT OUT SOON 😆EVEN AAFREEEN DOSE'NT KNOW 😲...WHAT BOUT HIS MOM???
you will know everything as the story proceeds 😆

OHHH...HOW I LOVE THEIR PH CONVO'S


thank you so much ash!!i am glad that you liked it 🤗




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Hey Ankita,

Love Zoya's diary.
Love Asad and Zoya's text messages.
The bond is getting stronger with each passing moment.
Absolutely brilliant. A friend, a confidant, An understanding just teh foundation of a wonderful relationship ahead.
Just love the way the story is proceeding. Simply cute and Simple.
You write really well.
thanks for this story. It brings back my college day memories.
Hugs and much love🤗



hi juliet,

i always wait for your comments...

yes, they are on their way of making their relationship stronger..

i am glad that you loving the pace of the story...

thanks a lot 😃

i am almost at the end of my college days...while writing it, i feel nostalgic too..

hugs to you too..🤗

lots of love❤️

ankita
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kals82

it is really wonderful...

asad is opening up...even if it is slow...
but that is realtiy isnt.. for some..it is love at first.. for some it slowly grows on u.. and also helping her in the studies...

wish u made zoya dance with asad... but that will look the obvious..

love the story...

thanks for the pm..


by the way dear, is it inspired by some personal experience...😉



thank you so much kalyani di
i am glad that you liked it...

yes, asad is taking his time to open up...but he trusts zoya...

in reality, yes it takes time.. for some it is a love at first sight and for others, it takes a long time...

i wanted zoya to dance with her, but that would not be possible for a singer to dance with a well trained dancer...



Ummm...you may say so 😉
Zoya in this story is a small part of me 😛😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

R

OKKK...AFR READING THE WHOLE UPDATE..I FELT ONLY ONE THNG...

ANKIE EXAM FEVER IS IN UPDATE...😆

is it so???i am really very tensed for my own exam..may be that's y...😆😆

the best thng in dis chappi..is..the relationship btwn asad n zoya progress slowly n steady..there is no rush thng..m fling..

yes...they are taking their own sweet time...😳😳

zoya is giving tym to asad to trust on her..

zoya is behaving in a mature way...😳😳

n sumwhr asad strt trusting hr...he find a very gud frnd in her..tats y he reveal his bitter relation wid his father...

"Asad!!!!" Zoya stopped him from saying more. She did not want a son to speak ill of his own father.

nw dis line is sumwhr my fav part of dis chappi..i knw there is nthng ..bt to interrupt frm zoya..bt she took her step at a very rite tym..to make him realise that he cant hate her father..bcz of dz issues..she want him to respect his father..to discuss issues to father..n solve differences..well done ankie..fr dis interruption.👏

thank you so much for liking this part shreya...i believe, no father in this earth, good or bad, does not deserve to hear anything bad from his own son or daughter...

tis line also remind me last days of ksg..wen he had convo wid his father..AP MAAR B JAEGE TO B NH AUGA..n zoya stopped him even dat tym...i had dat scene wen ws reading dis particular section.⭐️

same here shreya...i remembered the same scene too...i am missing him more yaar 😭😭

anywaz..najma is really pissed off while wrking wid mr perfectionist ahmad khan..😆

asad sabko apne jaisa samajhta hai..over energetic!!!😆😆

anki...hats off to u fr one more thng...

dat is..

DAIRY CONVO..BCZ THIS MAKES UR STORY SO DIFFERENT..SO UNIQUE






aawww...😳😳😳😳
thank you so much...🤗

the diary is the closest thing to me too...i also love to write that part...

thanks a lot for these wonderful comments shreya 😳😳🤗


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: treasure11

🤣 AM THE FIRST ONE TO LIKE TOO 😎



yes you are...😆😆
and you have unres'd early this time...so thaks foe that too 😳😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
hey tis is fabulous...
luv it...
asya are so cute...
the conversation between asad n zoya are superb n hw he share his feeling with her...
their bond are getting stronger luv the cute text messeage asya sent to each other...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...
Edited by jazsidhu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nihirash

res

bt update kab hogi?🤣

unres

Finaly upate ho hi gayi😛
It was awsm nd long one too😳
gud to see asad made sm advancement in thr relation by telng her regardng her father.. Bt waitng for real raaz to unfold😃..
Lovd their conversatn😳
lovly update...



yep!!finally i have updated !!!😆 just as i promised 😉

asad took a step ahead..he will need more time, but he will share it with zoya...😛

raaz will get unfolded soon...uske liye padhte rahiye 😆😆😆

thank you...i am glad that you liked it 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
🤣 CHATRI MEANS CHALAK 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

RESERVED 😭😭😭


Unres !

Nice part Ankita and a long one tooo ,,
thanks for that ,, it made some things clear 🤗

thanks bubble...i am glad that you liked it..i wanted to make the whole thing clear, but didn't do it 😈
learnt it from you i guess 😆😆🤣


I wish u can give me some of ur energy so I can also give a long update

that's because i update once in a week 😆😆😆
but yes, i will be happy if you give longer updates 😳

anyways loved their call convo ,,
I thought he is going to come at her place as it is Sunday ,,
and they will do some romance as they are home alone

they are sharif bachhas...they wont do MASTI in absence of their parents
🤣 🤣

but I guess u have got better plans for that ☺️ 🤣 🤣

i am not too good in 18+ stuffs bubble 🤣

again I hate this Rashid ,,
he is never going to do something good 😡

rashid apni kismat likhwa kar aya hai...he will never be good in any of the stories in IF...but he is good in your present story 😳😳😳

must have done something that hurt Asad ,,
maybe he married to Shireen or something 🤔

Ummm...not completely correct, but partly you are 😉😉

Zoya was right that he shouldn't talk about RAK like that ,,
but I know what my Asad must be going thru 😭

zoya is right from her own POV...but she is there for asad too...😛😛

update sooon now buddy ,,
can't wait to read more !! 😉

will try to update soon buddy 😉😃

Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago

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