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Lavanya.K

@Lavanya.K

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

This OS is wonderful, hope to read more from you :)

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Zanutix

@Zanutix

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Lavanya.K
This OS is wonderful, hope to read more from you :)

Thank you so much for reading and liking it! 😃

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Zanutix

@Zanutix

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Linsie

Thank you! 😳

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

You're right! It IS long. But I'm not complaining! 😆 'Cause I loved every bit of it. 😉 I absolutely adore your writing style. 😎

Anyways, I, as well as other readers probably, was really caught off guard in the beginning. I expected the girl Asad saw to be Zoya, not someone else. 😉 I liked how you used the element of surprise and the story wasn't totally cliched and cheesy. 👏👏👏

I loved the progressions too, how Asad and Zoya slowly started feeling for each other. 😳 And the necklace-thing/kiss-on-the-cheek was so sweet. 😃

All in all, I really enjoyed this! It was perfect. 😳 Great job! ❤️

-Fari. 😳 ❤️

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Zanutix

@Zanutix

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: -LiveLoveLaugh-
You're right! It IS long. But I'm not complaining! 😆 'Cause I loved every bit of it. 😉 I absolutely adore your writing style. 😎

Anyways, I, as well as other readers probably, was really caught off guard in the beginning. I expected the girl Asad saw to be Zoya, not someone else. 😉 I liked how you used the element of surprise and the story wasn't totally cliched and cheesy. 👏👏👏

I loved the progressions too, how Asad and Zoya slowly started feeling for each other. 😳 And the necklace-thing/kiss-on-the-cheek was so sweet. 😃

All in all, I really enjoyed this! It was perfect. 😳 Great job! ❤️

-Fari. 😳 ❤️

Thank you for reading Fari!

Haha! Well, I don't actually like the 'love at first sight' mantra.. hence the surprise! 😳

Friendship turning to love

The necklace thingy and Asad's plan to impress Zoya by turning up at the Van were my favorite parts!

I'm glad you enjoyed it! 😃

P.S. IT WAS SO LONG! 😆

Edited by Zanutix - 11 years ago

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Never again will I delay a read.

Never again.

You've touched a few unknown chords in my heart. Unknown for I never knew they existed. I'm very sure I have said something similar to someone else before this, but this, this is different.

Zanu. *No! No more running*

Tell me. Please. Please, tell me. Will it happen? Can it happen? To us? Are we deserving of this beautiful feeling. Most importantly, are we destined to feel this way? And for such feelings to be reciprocated? Tell me. I need to know.

Why did I wait till today to read this.

Will our Asad ever come to us?

Mera naam ishq

Tera naam ishq

Mera naam

Tera naam

Mera naam..

Ishq

Yeh lal ishq...

Mummy ne theek farmaya. Sabr ka phal meetha hota hai.

This meethi meethi ehsas...my eyes water with deep emotions...my heavy heart, ever hopeful.

You said cheese. And fluff.

This?

This is the first light at the break of dawn.

This is dew drops...

This is Zoya telling Asad where she keeps the spare keys.

This is reverence.

This is tranquility.

Rahan na main phir apne jaisa

Mera naam ishq
Tera naam ishq

Mera naam
Tera naam
Mera naam

Ishq...

Edited by farz_parachute - 11 years ago

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Zanutix

@Zanutix

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: farz_parachute
Never again will I delay a read.
Never again.

You've touched a few unknown chords in my heart. Unknown for I never knew they existed. I'm very sure I have said something similar to someone else before this, but this, this is different.

Zanu. *No! No more running*

Tell me. Please. Please, tell me. Will it happen? Can it happen? To us? Are we deserving of this beautiful feeling. Most importantly, are we destined to feel this way? And for such feelings to be reciprocated? Tell me. I need to know.

Why did I wait till today to read this.

Will our Asad ever come to us?

Mera naam ishq
Tera naam ishq

Mera naam
Tera naam
Mera naam..
Ishq

Yeh lal ishq...

Mummy ne theek farmaya. Sabr ka phal meetha hota hai.

This meethi meethi ehsas...my eyes water with deep emotions...my heavy heart, ever hopeful.

You said cheese. And fluff.

This?

This is the first light at the break of dawn.

This is dew drops...

This is Zoya telling Asad where she keeps the spare keys.

This is reverence.

This is tranquility.

Rahan na main phir apne jaisa

Mera naam ishq
Tera naam ishq

Mera naam
Tera naam
Mera naam

Ishq...

Aww.
That was really touching, but WUT DAWG, aap toh bohot serious ho gaye?

Did you not find it light hearted? 😕

Man, you're poetic! Wow!

But really, what made you feel so heavy nigga?

Edited by Zanutix - 11 years ago

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Zanutix

Aww.
That was really touching, but WUT DAWG, aap toh bohot serious ho gaye?
Did you not find it light hearted? 😕

Man, you're poetic! Wow!

But really, what made you feel so heavy nigga?

I don't know.

It just occurred to me that Love is possible.

Not the I love you kind.

The love you have going on in your piece of art.

That.

That exists.

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antiquegold

@antiquegold

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Loved it.! asad is like armaan! Zoya actually does something useful! They are both very cute.

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Zanutix

@Zanutix

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

I don't know.

It just occurred to me that Love is possible.

Not the I love you kind.

The love you have going on in your piece of art.

That.

That exists.

Yeah, it does! :)

Love is nothing but someone caring about you - your likes, your dislikes, your happiness, your contentment, your solitude - everything.

Which is why I don't believe in 'love in first sight', that's just infatuation.

Love is when the person knows you better than you do!

And friendship turning into love is perfect, because no one knows you the way your friend does. :D