asya ff :change my mind(asad as rockstar) CHAPTER 4 UPDATED - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: melissa05

Interesting!!! Asad is a rockstar!! Wowww, a very hot rockstar 2!! Hehe.. Continue soonn..
Wud luv 2 read it!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: reyna.

It's a new n interesting concept !

Go ahead !
Would love to read more !

Love... Reyna

thanks reyna
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: ashrina

Hey rocky!!!! Wen r u going to cont dis off????? 😃

i will update in an hour 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: angle_eyes

awesome and so interesting concept

please continue soon soumya
asad as rockstar m i dreaming
waiting⭐️

thank u shruti
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: angle_eyes

rocky nice name now even i will call her rocky 😉😆
so rocky when r u updating dear ????😉

ya u guys can call me rocky 😆
i m updating in an hour😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

chapter 1
ksg = asad

ZOYA'S POV :

I need to find a way get through to my dad . i dont think i can take anymore of this . i sat in my room wondering where haider is ? i hope he isn't coming home just yet . i dont want dad to see him first before i do and i dont want to face my dad just yet.suddenly i heard the front door open
"haider" i whispered so dad wouldn't hear him come in. "what ??"haider screamed . "shhh be quiet. do u want dad to hear us " i replied. "no" he mumbled. "look zoya baji,i have a great news " haider replied.
"ok speak !! " i said ."okay so here is my news u know my best friend james ? " "ya " " well his mom said that i could live with them. isn't that great " haider said with hope. i was shocked.i didn't know what to say.i was really happy that haider wouldn't have to be around dad anymore . but at the same i was sad to lose the only person i loved.
"zoya baji" " uh.um.yes!tha-thats a great idea" i said lying . "really !!! awesome !! so i m going to pack my bags and call james...thanks baji " haider said,as happy as i had ever seen him.
"whoa wait there little buddy ! does his mom know u want to come over right now " i asked hoping he would say no. "yes she said to come home and ask u and then call james and come over"haider said excitedly."oh she said that ???well i guess you ca-"i was cut off my haider. "yes thank u baji u r the best !! i love u" i smiled " i love u too little buddy"
i waved a good bye haider as james mom assured me that he was in good hands , and i could visit him anytime. i thanked her and she left with my little brother.
i went to my bed and i was trying to decide if this was good,or bad news

as i sat in my room i thought i should inform my dad about haider.
i went to living room . "dad" i quietly asked."what do u want. u do nothing but cause hell in my life" he screamed." i just want to tell u that haider went to sleep over his best friends house,and probably won't be back for a while" i told him."so i finally got one of the devil out of the house...lets see if i can get the other one too.." i stood there with fear in my eyes. i was scared...
"u know what dad ??? haider loves me and i love him but think about yourself..no body loves u...u r alone and thank god mom is not alive seeing u like this she would have got death alive "😡
" you know what ? u can leave ! and never come back !i always hated u !!! just leave now !" he hit me saying this..i started sobbing..
"get out of my life u living devil" he screamed louder than i ever heard him scream
i quickly ran out of the house with nothing . nothing but tears . i didn't know where to go. tori(humera's nick name) and her family were on vacation for a month ...i went to a near by coffee shop where i used to go with my brother haider.and the manager who worked there preety well knows me .
"hey zoya...so can i get u something ??"the manager asked
"sorry...i dont have any money" my voice trailed off,thinking of dad and how i had no time to grab money.
"haha !! really funny zoya !!anything u want is on the house ! absolutely free not just today but everytime sweet heart...u r just like my daughter to me.." he happily relied
"allah miya whats wrong with u !! then i would love to have everything on the menu" i said joking
"come on what do u want" he again asked
"frappe" i replied
he came back to me with my frappe,then went back to work
i started reading newspaper
i was reading an article about "breaking point band "
the article said
"eye witnesses recently spotted one of the members of this cute boy band breaking point, at a cafe. this cafe is a very popular cafe . we spotted aatif and asad ahmed khan getting a frappe. he is preety good in hidding his face. we got a quick word with asad and he said " i come here all the time" "
i read this and after somt time i understood that i was at same cafe

i was sitting there thinking " what if asad comes here ? i always had a major crush on him...every girl does..allah miya whats wrong with me...i look like a mess after crying.."
i went to bathroom to clean up my face
i came and went back to my seat
"hey..thank u for coming" i heard manager yelling someone excitedly.probably his favorite boy,since i m his favorite girl, i smiled
i again started reading newspaper for more headlines and articles but suddenly someone sat at my table i looked up but his face was covered with a hat and a sunglass.i was not able to see his face.
"hi" i asked hesitantly.
he nodded
i caught a glimpse of his face a little more.it can't be.asad?i must be day dreaming..i have to check
"allah miya whats wrong with u !!!! what ? u dont talk?" i joked
he shrugged . i tried again
"so, uh, nice weather we r having..don't u think?" i said
"actually its bit chilly" he said not realizing he talked.
"ha !! i knew it i could get u talk !! kyunki zoya farroqi iss duniya ka koi bhi kaam kar sakti hai" i said. he giggled
"hey, this might be little awkward for u to answer, ...but r u asad ahmed khan" i asked
no answer
" oh come on...i won't tell anyone... i have no one to tell.."i said with tears forming in my eyes.
" r u okay ? u seem bit upset"he said with his beautiful eyes staring into mine
"i m sorry i shouldn't be ruining your day, i'll just go" i said and was about to walk away when asad grabbed my arm
"yes" he said
i looked at him confused
" yes i m asad" he said smiling and facing the ground

ASAD'S POV :

what did i just do ?? i m not suppossed to tell anyone who i m . i just couldn't help it . man she is really preety . i sat her down to have more conversation
"so whats your name miss zoya farroqi" i asked her
she laughed a little bit
"i m miss zoya farroqi"
i was locked on her eyes .those big beautiful eyes. they were sparkling
"that's beautiful name,fatty"..he chuckled
"allah miya whats wrong with u asad...do i look u fat "😡😡 i replied angrily
"no...i m sorry my love...i was joking...u r as thin as kareena kapoor...zero figure u see"
and they both laughed
"so do u live near here ? i casually asked
"um,well not right now..."she said facing the ground
"what do u mean" i asked her and noticed that she started crying
"what happened love...why r u crying"
she didn't reply
"do u have anywhere to live" i asked quietly
she quitely shook her head
"oh i m sorry" i wanted to offer her to come with me .but i dont think she will say yes. but i asked her anyways
"why dont u come with me ! u can meet the others and stay with us until we can find u a new home" i told her
she quickly shook her head
"please" i begged
she hesitantly nodded


ZOYA'S POV
"what if they don't like me ? what if they don't have an extra room ? where will i go ? am i doing right by going with him ?
I M GOIMG TO BREAKING POINT'S HOUSE...I CAN'T BELIEVE IT...AM I DREAMING...



PHEWWW...
such a long update
u have to bear it😆
sorry guys if its boring but this part was neccessary for further parts...and hold on to your seats becoz in next update they r all going to meet zoya...😉😆
it will be fun
so do tell me hows it ???
PLEASE HIT LIKE AND DO COMMENT !!!!😉



Edited by rockstar_16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Loved it
its totally awesome
please updaye soon
yayy Zoe's going to live with Asad!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
awesome update
zoya gonna live with asad
its gonna be intersting
cont soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: delena_

Loved it
its totally awesome
please updaye soon
yayy Zoe's going to live with Asad!

thank u 🤗
i will try to update soon
yaayyy🥳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: CHOCOSWATHI

awesome update
zoya gonna live with asad
its gonna be intersting
cont soon 😊

thank u so much
ya😳
ya i think its gonna be interesting hopefully 😉😆
i will

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