Hey Smiley,
Apologies for posting a comment so late, have been really busy! Just wanted to let u know how much I loved the last 2 updates!
So Zoya puts her hand under Asads foot on broken glass and Asad burns 50 lakhs for her? Wow, theres really nothing these two will not do for each other huh? What a intense and passionate way to reveal how AsYa is feeling to the readers! Our Janahpanah Six Packs is fighting the love as usual, but I am sure he will come to his senses soon enough...especially when he sees his Ms Musibat relying on Zaroon instead of him! Zaroon could not have come at a better time!
I see you are having trouble writing again, so I hope this comment helped in some litte way! You really have a way with words...and manage to weave them into a beautiful story!
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