SantaClaus &Tooth Fairy-FF,Chapt 16 updated,(23/7) PG 70

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taznim

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: akaswan
Hey 😃

Awesome story 👏

I just loved it i read all the udapte yesterday night and i found it amazing 👍🏼

I love who you write 😃

Continue soon and please PM me

Thanks Dear... glad you enjoyed reading it.. will try to update soon.😃

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akaswan

@akaswan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: kaussar
Thanks Dear... glad you enjoyed reading it.. will try to update soon.😃

You are welcome 😉

And i'm already wating for your next udapte 😃

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manognasai

@manognasai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Nice story...😊
Loved the way Zoya dressed herself as Santa and spent time with kids gifting them!
Back story of Zainab and Gafoor is nice!
So Zoya is taken care of her ammi and nani!
Feel bad for Zoya...!She misses her ammi a lot!😭

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Awsum!!
very well written!!!
pm me when u update!!

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Preeti

@FaultInMyStars

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Loved both the chapters...And felt like a spectator in Gainab love story...
Zoya's mom and her nani were so nice...so is Zoya! Who's that little girl? And that lady?
Can't wait for the next chapter! 😳

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GitaIyer

@GitaIyer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Thanks for the PM Kaussar.

Back to back updates. That makes up for the lost time.😊

Finally, got a sensible back story to Zoya's parents.

Zainab - Gafoor story was interesting.

Razia did a la-Tanveer on gaffoor.

Nice updates Kaussar.

Still waiting for Asad's entry and hopefully, Rashid's backstory too, that is if Rashid appears in the story.

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taznim

@kaussar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet
Awsum!!
very well written!!!
pm me when u update!!

Thanks Dear.. will PM you.😃

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A.S.K

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: kaussar
Thanks Dear.. will PM you.😃

Thank you 😃

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taznim

@kaussar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: PreetiASYArocks
Loved both the chapters...And felt like a spectator in Gainab love story...
Zoya's mom and her nani were so nice...so is Zoya! Who's that little girl? And that lady?
Can't wait for the next chapter! 😳

glad you liked Gainab story... thought most would get bored with it.. but I wanted to give a good background of Zoya and why Zoyas life shaped the way it is. As for who that little girl is you will come to know soon.. she is very important in this story... and so is the lady.. may be you can guess it from next chapter which I will upload soon.😃

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taznim

@kaussar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: GitaIyer
Thanks for the PM Kaussar.
Back to back updates. That makes up for the lost time.😊

Finally, got a sensible back story to Zoya's parents.
Zainab - Gafoor story was interesting.
Razia did a la-Tanveer on gaffoor.
Nice updates Kaussar.

Still waiting for Asad's entry and hopefully, Rashid's backstory too, that is if Rashid appears in the story.

welcome.. glad you liked the back story.. a la Tanveer.. hehe yea.. actually Raziya is more expert in it.. I think she is the one who planned whole SR for tanveer isnt it? And remember her doing the same with Ayaan and Hum? Asad will have a back story too.. but in this story more than Rashid it will be something else that shapes up Asads life... so im not sure yet if I will elaborate on Rashid or not... but definitely he will play a role.. and Tanveer will be there.. thats a hint and don't strangle me for giving Tanu Darling importance...😆😆