ASYA/Kabhi SS: Four Seasons (ch.9, pg.41) note pg.48

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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+ 46

Posted: 11 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever
And Mrina...there is something i added just for you...let me know if you pick it up 😉

Enjoy

WOW!

There are so many things that you added but mainly I guess It's Dilshad and Zoya's conversation and then Dilshad telling Zoya to call her Ammi. 😳 And also the slight realization of Love from Zoya's side! 😉

It was beautifully written! 👏

Asad has finally come to first name basis with his boss eh? 😆 Asad can cheer up Zoya at any moment of time! 😃

Awww... I so loved Zoya's inner turmoil trying to fight with her feelings for Asad and OMG! Dils Momma and Zoya's convo was so beautiful! 👏

Asad's gift was amazing! Zoya must be on cloud 9! 😳

"Asad, I changed my mind. I want to celebrate this birthday, celebrate it with you."

"Seriously ? You mean it ?"

This is so good! I'm truly enjoying every bit of this update! 😃

The house party and then the skating ring! This is AMAZING! 👏 Ahaan.. I love jealousy tracks where Asad is jealous. But he doesn't need to be jealous! 😉

"Do you enjoy your birthday?" He couldn't help but ask as he settled next to her on the couch. His arm draped around her shoulder, Zoya leaned comfortably against his side while she ate.

"Yes," She whispered tenderly and her eyes brimmed with unshed tears. "Thank you for making it so special." And with a blink of her eyelids, the tears tumbled down her cheeks.

Not surprised by the moisture of sudden tears, he leaned in already brushing them away. "Happy tears?", Asad asked, cradling her face.

She clutched his hands and shook her head negatively. "Asad, how am I going to live without you when you are gone?"

Say it Asad. Confess your love. She loves you too!

Continue super soon! I'll be waiting impatiently! 😳

Loads of love ❤️

Mrina

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#202

Luvd it... awsum yr...!!! 👏 👏

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Gourav

@Shubh007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#203

Amazing update...,.👏

Just love it...😃

Zoya birthday is amazing...👍🏼

Like the jealouse asad...😉

Wanting to see jealouse zoya also...😛

Love all asya scenes...😃

Waiting for nxt part egarly so update soon...😊

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sweetnandu

@sweetnandu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#204

that was so beautifully written..

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Avie

@Avie

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#205

Awesome update..

Loved it..

Do continue soon :)

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#206

Awesome update
Asad made a portrait of zoya as her birthday gift
Dilshad wished her & said call me Ammi
She was more than happy that asad mother accepted her as daughter even she didn't see her
She called Ammi with teary eyes
Asad gave her gift & she said she want to celebrate her birthday
What a birthday party by asad & stacie
Ice skating & jealous asad
Dilshad & stacie both knew that they love each other but asya doesn't want to accept it
Hope asad said to her that she will go with him & confessed as well
I know it's little early to say confess but I want their confession soon
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#207

This chapter was simply beautiful!

Asad is an absolute sweetheart! ❤️

Lovely writing! ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️

Look forward to the next chapter! 😃

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 11 years ago

#208

hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! Well written! Ahh Asad is so sweet! update soon. pls update Maaneet SS! Thanks 😊

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#209

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#210

Eeeksss I loved Zoya's birthday! :')

The present, Asad's Ammi talking to the birthday girl, Asad's jealousy, the ice skating (I LOVE ICE SKATING! As I may have already mentioned to you. :D), everything! 👏

It was SO adorable. I especially found this chapter extra-cute. 😃

I can't get over myself - this was such a great update! <3 I enjoyed it a whole lot. 😳

Excellent work, Reys! 🤗 That's your nickname now. 😆

-Fari.