ASYA/Kabhi SS: Four Seasons (ch.9, pg.41) note pg.48 - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update...😊


Love it...😊
Posted: 11 years ago
Beautifully written as always! :D
This was such an adorable update! I loved the pinkie-promises! And the pizza surprise and how Asad was taking care of Zoya so sweetly. <3
Continue soon, Reya! 🤗
-Fari. 😳 ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ahh! I loved this chapter, especially the ending quote. 😆😆 SO BEAUTIFUL!

I feel so bad, I posted really late, I am sooo sorry. I have like 84 stories to read, but I wanted to read yours first! 🤗


I am not sure if the beginning dedication kind of thingy was for me, it's normal cuz I am a confusing person. Anyway, if it was for me thank youuu so much! 😳😳 I feel loved. 🤣



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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Reya!

I'm a new reader to your story! 😊

Truthfully speaking, this is one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read. The way you express the feelings of Asad and Zoya is phenomenal. 👏

Please continue soon... 😳

I have buddies your PM Account, so to accept my request and send me PMs whenever you update this story! 😃
Also do let me know if your write any other story besides this! 😊

Love ❤️

Mrina
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Posted: 11 years ago
Please continue!!!! Its been quite a while!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Asadluvszoya

Late update but a lovely chapter. Love Asad, zoya and Stacie. Good luck with finals. Update soon..

Thank you so much hun 😳

Thankooo 😳

-Reya <3
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

beautiful confession and sad update...

Thank you Linsie for all your wonderful comments :)

-Reya <3

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update
Asad took care of zoya
Stacie was a good friend of her
Zoya shared her family history with asad
& asad did the same.
Continue soon
Thanks

Thank you...glad you have enjoyed this chapter :)


Originally posted by: -RM-

Beautiful Bond of Two Strangers <3

Thankooo :)


-Reya <3
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SimplySmile


just read the first chapter, already hooked on to the story, cannot wait to read the next,

I love stories written in New York, AsYa get better chances to romance there

Anyways will return with another comment for all 5 of the chapters soon

Oh a big hello to my story...i really hope you enjoy it and hopefully see more romance..lol..and i kinda want comments for all 5 chapters..i am greedy like that 😆😆 but really, welcome abroad.

As promised here is my comment for Chapter 2😃😃

I like that your using quotes, I love reading quotes just to find the deeper meaning behind the lines, and once you do it really does make you think as a person #Deep😆😆

You know i am glad you mentioned that, they are there for a reason, i choose one according to the feel of the whole chapter...getting my readers thinking 😉

So happy that they finally met, at least they know each other's name by now looking forward to see how there friendship develops in to love😃❤️

The best and most long lasting relationships is of best friends finding love in each other 😳

My fave part: Would so, without a doubt would have to be the hug scene, 🤗

I mean the fact that Asad let her cry and hug him, was just a fanigrling moment for me, it was that cute😳😳

My fave lines: "The girl, his stranger was drowning in sorrow, for reasons unknown to him but her pain, the pain he recognized. It was the pain that pulled him towards her. He came to believe that over the weeks that she too looked forward to their meeting."

I like it because, its the pain in her eyes that attracts him towards her and its not just the beauty, and plus I feel like this is their first sort of understanding each other kinda situation with both of them realizing they both looked forward to meeting each other

DAMN straight ! i loved how you picked up on that 😃

"Asad felt his own heart crack open at the sounds of her sobs and as the wetness of her tears began to trickle onto his skin"

First of all its very, very, VERY, VERY beautifully written, and also just because its so gushy mushy😆😳😳

So in the end loved chapter 2 going on to read chapter 3 will post my comment soon

Thank you so much for your wonderful comment and i am hoping you continue to enjoy the story. Welcome once again. 😃

-Reya <3


Edited by maankigeet4ever - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Zanutix

Aw, Asad is just so so nice.

Although they're 'strangers' and haven't communicated much verbally, I love the level of understanding they share. 😊

No Zoya! You are not an orphan! You've got Asad and your spunky best friend.
And its just a matter of time.. you'll have a mother and a sister too. 😉 😳

And Asad my neat freak! I like it!
Everything so clean, so orderly! 😳

Another amazing update! 😃


I kinda love my Asad, he is just so sweet. I like how you explained their relationship. Their understanding has never come from words, they have always commicated with their eyes and their presence for each other has been enough.

Lol...slow down girl..you are in a hurry to get our Zoe and Asad hitched...that gonna take a while 😆

Thank you for reading and your comment 😃

-Reya <3

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