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Meeshu

@LeMeesh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

It was an interesting concept, a different concept and you're really very good with the descriptions. I especially liked how you kind of portrayed the two people through the emotions they were going through. It was a bit confusing however, to read. I had to read it twice over to understand what was going on. But overall, I did like it 😊

Edited by meezishu - 11 years ago

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: friendsall
Ankie...so cute it was...🤗

its Asad less and Haseena full episode,,...wat to say now😡

hope atleast they open up d secret in Nikhat s house...too much of suspense is also no gud...

I have no expectations till Jan Dii 😆

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: meezishu
It was an interesting concept, a different concept and you're really very good with the descriptions. I especially liked how you kind of portrayed the two people through the emotions they were going through. It was a bit confusing however, to read. I had to read it twice over to understand what was going on. But overall, I did like it 😊

thank you meezi, i love writing in the second person. it makes me relate too easily 😆

I added the background in the first page do read it. 😳

Thank you so much for spending so much time over shit fiction of mine 😭 😳 🤗

I feel so honored 😭 😳

Well, in short, Zoya and Asad are best friends, Asad was joking all the while, Zoya thought he was serious, she had expectations while he was in his own jovial self 😆

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friendsall

@friendsall

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

I have no expectations till Jan Dii 😆

😆😆😆...

n coming back to dis work...suddenly kaise aise likh diya...itna seriouswala emotions with a pinch of humour????????

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: sona_naksh
of course ankie ...7 daz ho gaye 😭 hum logon ko guppi shappi kiye hue ...too long it is 😭 aap din gin rhe the awww 🤗 🤗 🤗

it is just soo cute ... 🤗

😭 Haam apko miss jo kiya naa 😭 😆

🤗

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: friendsall

😆😆😆...

n coming back to dis work...suddenly kaise aise likh diya...itna seriouswala emotions with a pinch of humour????????

ho jata hai kabhi kabhi 😃 😆 😆

Coffee ki badaulat maybe 😆

I felt satisfied after writing this. 😆

I am such a sadist 😆

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Ani-asya

Originally posted by: suganti
nice

Originally posted by: Ramlath
nice... 😊

Thank you! I hope you all really liked it. 😊

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

😭 😭 😆

thank you so much. Yes it was very different. it is not for QH actually but then i write in this forum hence didn't post it in the Fan fiction 😆 😳

Gladdy Nargess you found it niceoo 😳

Ab yeh rohna dhona bad karo. I am not gonna fall for that!😛 Well, I could imagine AsYa because they are the only couple right now on my mind 😳😉 Aisa koi doosri couple nahin hain.

I am glad you liked it that I liked it 😆

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: metoyou

Ab yeh rohna dhona bad karo. I am not gonna fall for that!😛 Well, I could imagine AsYa because they are the only couple right now on my mind 😳😉 Aisa koi doosri couple nahin hain.
I am glad you liked it that I liked it 😆

yea wala chechrah bhi nahii 😭 😆😆

Anyway i added the Background at Page 1 . 😃