AsYa SS: Christmas in New York [Will update Mar-Apr/2014]

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DevikaRavish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Lovely Part 3 and 4... 😊😊

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snehasya

@snehasya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

this was just perfect

and asads letter to santa , 5years zoyas letter to santa it was all awesome well zoyas letter had innocence asads letter had love and only love he asked for everyone including tantalizing tina mina and what not

but the most awesome lines were where zoya explained the meaning of the song how deep the thoughts were really felt I was reading something which taught me the new meaning of the festive

awesome is the word and asad in the end just stole the show

thanks for pm and I hope you have a wonderfulll and love and joy filled Christmas with your loved ones

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Thanks for the pm :)

I loved that especially because it's getting me more into the Christmas spirit

By reading this it's making me more eager :P

Loved the way Zoya made Asad understand Christmas a bit more

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

awesome so far
love the change in asad
and his letter to santa wow
continue

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

🤣 I have not laughed this hard in a while...

This was absolutely brilliant👏

Asad's letter to Santa just had me cracking up with laughter, the best letter ever...Especially the part about Razia😆 Tamatar and tamato soup😆 and he needs a haircut😆

I guess that was a release for all your pent up frustrations😆

And when i managed to stop laughing, I thought about tentacle Sheila, Mina & Tina😆 Where did you come up with these ideas???

Mr. Duncan and the turtle doves were sweet...That came from Home Alone😉 I have watched that soo many times i can actually recite lines from it😃

This was a superb chapter and such a beautiful christmas story👏

I like the naughty Asad, wishing for Zoya in her birthday suit😆

You have to include the classic mistletoe scene...Christmas would be incomplete without it😉 and ice skating...and roasted nuts...and lots of presents...

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MissReadingFaye

@MissReadingFaye

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: NAVI55
🤣 I have not laughed this hard in a while...

This was absolutely brilliant👏

Asad's letter to Santa just had me cracking up with laughter, the best letter ever...Especially the part about Razia😆 Tamatar and tamato soup😆 and he needs a haircut😆

I guess that was a release for all your pent up frustrations😆

And when i managed to stop laughing, I thought about tentacle Sheila, Mina & Tina😆 Where did you come up with these ideas???

Mr. Duncan and the turtle doves were sweet...That came from Home Alone😉 I have watched that soo many times i can actually recite lines from it😃

This was a superb chapter and such a beautiful christmas story👏

I like the naughty Asad, wishing for Zoya in her birthday suit😆

You have to include the classic mistletoe scene...Christmas would be incomplete without it😉 and ice skating...and roasted nuts...and lots of presents...

Lol I'm happy you liked it and yes the Santa letter is in some way my pent up frustrations especially on Razia 😃 and his hair and the Siddiqui Mansion and well I kinda spent last week watching all the episodes from Oct up till now ... I have missed a lot and I got frustrated watching them lol.

I haven't written anything to saucy as yet in any of my SS's but it is an idea I've been pondering on but I'm not use to writing naughty scenes but it will be an interesting experience as I write the final two parts to this story 😳

Tentcale Sheila, Mina & Tina are resemblances of people I once knew in particular this tall skinny geek that use to be in my year at uni who thankfully hasn't returned this year. His arms are so skinny and so long they actually look like tentacles and he's always trying his best to grab all the girls in our year at every given opportunity so he reminds me of an octopus with lots of tentacle hands. 🤢 Trust me not a pretty sight.

I'm happy you picked up on Duncan part, I changed it to an orphanage in place of a hospital because Zoya's an orphan and a hot chocolate market chalet in place of a toy store but yes Home Alone 2 is also a fav but I won't be able to recite the lines like you can, that's remarkable in my opinion. because I have a memory of a gold fish lol , I'm rubbish with movie dialogues. 😆

Yes I will take your ideas on board and include a classic mistletoe scene ❤️, there is ice skating coming up, and I'll try and add roasted nuts somewhere.

There is one present coming up but this one hopefully will complete Asad's naughty wish. 😉

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment, much appreciated. Enjoy the festive season and seasonal greeting to you 🤗 xxx

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MissReadingFaye

@MissReadingFaye

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Rarepearl
Hey Ambreen,

This was so so beautiful & heart touching. You know the best part was Asad's letter to Santa. I so loved it. It made my eyes moist & smile like a goofy all at the same time. His love, concern for his siblings & Zoe goes beyond me & he never asked for anything for himself besides Zoe. He truly is an amazing soul whose seeing this beautiful day due to the innocent Angel, actually His Angel. She is someone with the purest heart. She goes beyond everything to reach out & do something & anything to brighten the day hopes of those in need. I so love her innocence, despite being bubbly & naughty, her innocence & pure heart, makes her stand out from the rest.

Well I hope you update the next part soon too. Can't wait to read how it goes from here.

Love...

Hi Nim,

Thank you for your beautiful comments as always and yes Asad's letter is my fav part too, 😳 and truly I felt goofy writing it. I am glad you liked part 3 and 4 and I agree with your comments, that is exactly how I wanted to depict Asad and Zoya 😳 in this story.

I will update soon and hopefully you'll enjoy reading those too.

Thank you for taking the time out to read my story, I know part was little too long but I appreciate your feedback a lot.

Love

Fatima aka Ambreen ❤️