AsYa FF Battling The Curse - Thread Three - Chapter Eleven To Fourteen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#351

i quite like the horror part
and who is dat girl
do update soon

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#352

oh god!!! poor zoya was trapped again!! the girl on phone ...is that some sort of illusion that the spirit wanted zoya to hear??? asad can't do that!!!
ayat's concern for zoya...so cute!!!
continue soon...

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vyshu9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#353

Wow its awesome and scary.
u can try as a script writer seriouslly
very well written 👏

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EuphoricDamsel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#354

NOW I NEED A RES FOR THIS !

edited !!!!

waaaowww !!!

was the word that came out of my mouth after reading the update ...

it was sooo awesome !!!...

i mean i got a very ini mini mimy moe ! scared in this update !...

it was awesome ...

and holy cow ! who's the girl on the other side of the phone ???...

i was just flabbergasted ! i mean is asad with some girl ? 😲

or it is the same girl * the chudail * ...

n here i am with a prediction :~

will the story end like after all this ghost hula ballu we'll get to know it was their neighbours doing this kinda thing for the house ?... hmmm ? 😉

this is just a prediction !...

its a guess ...

n ya please please please please pretty please update before 10 : 50 ...

PLEASEEE !!!

Edited by ASYA4eveAAA - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#355

Originally posted by: -Maliha-
Amazing update,,
wasa lil bit scary,, but not much,,,

n you told readers to read the last few lines??
these were hell scary,,,😆😆😆
so sophia n asad are together!

Cool!

Thank You 😳

I am glad that you liked it !!

I tried my best to not make it scary !!

haha yes the last lines were more scary 😆

well you someone is with Asad !! The call will be continued in next update !! 😉