ASYA SS: 3 years later. Completed

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Gudduluvs

@Gudduluvs

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#351

Awesumm..it was gr8...thnk y so much for sgaring dis ff...

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neemasya

@neemasya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#352

Originally posted by: angel2930
lovely epilogue...proper ending...proper writing...evrythngws just so proper...😃
and i just loved it...👏👏👏

Zoya barging in Asad's meeting tht too to tell about Ayaan & Sarah...tht ws so so nice...😆

everyone happy in their lives...INSHALLAH...😃

and finally AsYa's twins...wow...amazing...😃😃😃

i loved your story...this was one amazing piece...keep it up dear...👏👏👏

Thank you ! glad you liked it :D

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neemasya

@neemasya

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#353

Originally posted by: Gudduluvs
Awesumm..it was gr8...thnk y so much for sgaring dis ff...

thank you !

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Debdatta

@Love_Surbhi

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#354

Loved it totally! Your story made me speechless. Staying up all night to read all the parts at one go was indeed worthy. It had all the essence needed to make a story perfect. The way you have portrayed the characters.. Outstanding! I could actually visualise everythng while reading the entire story! A splendid story and a brilliant read! 👏 😊

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neemasya

@neemasya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#355

Originally posted by: Love_Surbhi
Loved it totally! Your story made me speechless. Staying up all night to read all the parts at one go was indeed worthy. It had all the essence needed to make a story perfect. The way you have portrayed the characters.. Outstanding! I could actually visualise everythng while reading the entire story! A splendid story and a brilliant read! 👏 😊

Oh wow. Thank you so much for the comment! I'm glad you loved it !
Do read the two OS that I posted as a continuation of this SS :)

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#356

Hi...

Just came across this today😔 Two months later...

I'm not planning on getting any work done today because I'm going to read your FF😃

I 've read the first part and it sounds really interesting...Looking forward to this😃

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#357

I just read up to Part 7...I can't help myself I just have to comment...

This is such an awesome story I like your concept👍🏼

I like your character Rehaan aswell...He is fabulous. His and Zoya's relationship sound so cool👍🏼

Zoya is a CIA Agent...Brilliant Idea...From a musibat magnet to a spy😆...

I'm happy that Asad still loves her and she him...I'm a huge Asya fan

When Zoya tried to kill herself the first time (hopefully the only time) Did Mr khan faint in his office because he was so attuned to her???Was it like a kismet connection😕...

Brilliant story...You writing is lovely...I'm not very good with the hindi part but I'm able to muddle my way through...😃

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#358

Hi again😃

I'm annoying aren't I...Cant help it

Part 11 was lovely...Well all the chapters are lovely but I wanted to comment on part 11...

I liked Ayaan and Humeira's jodi but ever since he left and Haider appeared I think Haider is perfect for her...I'm very fickle😆

I'm so happy that you made Humeira choose Haider👍🏼 Because he gave her a reason to live again and love😉 I feel bad for Ayaan but he always took Humeira for granted...

As always I love all Asya scenes...They are the best. Happy that Asad and Zoya are finally together and all the secrets are out❤️

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#359

Oh how I love Cliche's and Happily ever afters

This story was absolutely lovely👏

You have penned it beautifully and captured each character and their emotions with amazing perceptions. I loved the drama, romance and humour❤️

This was a fabulous read👏

When ever you write anything new please do pm me...I would love to read more from you...

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#360

Chapter 1...coming home...

Chapter 2... realize ... something missing..

Chapter 3... so much .. happen everything hanging...

Chapter 4... wow zoya new life... what kind of confusion
in what asad said...

Chapter 5.. more misunderstanding... she did not meet him
asad have no idea...but he felt danger...