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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Azraa01

Update please
Update please
Update please
Update please
Update please
I don't have the patience to wait for 10 days unlike Asad and Zoya

Dear Azraa01
I know!
Bechare Mere Readers 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kals82

hai again,

have a loads of free time till next week, so here i am in ur thread...

so here is my story so far,

i am a happy go lucky girl till 24 yeah may be now too happy go lucky woman... marriage , love etc was never part of my dream... yeah but did have crush one at my 8 th std on my distant cousin of mine... and one more after my post graduation,, on a good friend of mine... he is a good friend ..so can be a good partner... but never serious about that or about falling in love.

u across 24, i.e the boundary line.. after that age u have to get married... i was happy with my job and my life at that stage... so i was not interested in marriage...but... people back home were very serious about marriage and got some proposal at hand...

how we get proposal... this will be interesting for u to know.. in ur conv with aashna u spoke about horoscope... my marriage was made through horoscope... how it happened...

my parents have strong believe in astrology i too have some faith though not a blind faith.. for my eldest bro we chose our SIL, was my first cousin.. so we never saw the horoscope of her since it was decided... but for me and my 2 bro... horoscope played a major part. they have association here who literally make money using this belief here.
since we are searching for someone in the same caste but not a relative.. that was the option.. they will bring home only those biodata were the stars match... they will look at the details of the guy and family.. if it passes their expectation then it will go 3 astrologers. who did eavulate the horoscope with mine and see how the stars are matching.. and give some inputs on them... when i go home in between there will bags filled with rejection.. ok.. good... my hubby was in the good list, with 2 others... and they did came to see, and we were not that interested in others...

why horoscope... there is the reason... for that... when we go for a relative or a love marriage.. we know how the partner is ... we know them to an extent.. but when we go for stranger as a partner... the parents need some kind of faith or hold to move..forward.. it gives them satisfaction that they tried their best to find a good partner for their kid.. some assurance from the horoscope that the future is good.

so, my husband came to see me with his family, both the family met, i was hardly interested, but yet for the parents wish ok.. and they went back home,...i was ok... the next morning my MIL, called and said we like the girl(she still feels bad for that😆)... looks can be misguiding isnt...😉 she thought i am very soft spoken.. bcoz my family members are very soft esp my dad,...

i was like what... so what next.. my family started doing their research on my hubby.. only thing they didnt do was hire a detective.. leaving that they did all.. my bro visited their house and heard the neighbour about the family, my 1 bro and my husband seem to be in the same line of profession, so he called up all his contacts to know about is hubby.. so it was positive from all the sides.my husband told me that even after marriage he had friends telling him about how he was enquired.


even my family was happy with them and my mom was happy that they r only 2 brothers and no sisters...😆...my hubby is the eldest son...so all good..except me... i said i dont want to get married... please .. i am so happy in my life.. i can manage on my own.. i am not interested in marriage...

my dad is already retired from work, and he wanted to see me settled in life.. but i was quite stubborn for 2 days.. they were also kind of open, if u love someone do let us know.. we r ok...u know.. bcoz of my stubbornness...i said i dont love anyone.. for that matter.. so tug of was went on for 3 days between my parents +i bro and me.. but no conclusion.. so they called my 2 bro home.. we both share very special bond.. i open to him easily.. and we both a chat for 3 hrs.. and he kind of brain washed me in saying yes...i was so naive.. didnt get the fact i have to clear the route for him to marry😆... poor me.. i was ok.. i have to marry some day... so why not now... for the family.. bcoz i am the only girl child to do a post graduation ... in the family and getting married at 24.. all my cousins were packed and parceled around 21- 23. the weekend my family visited his home and no dowry asked.. financially.. they were just like us.. so finalised.. and the date for marriage was fixed 3 months later.

follwing his sunday his family visited us and had lunch with us.. and we both talked , and he bought me a love birds statue as a gift.. and i bought him a blue tie and cufflings.. my first and final gift for him so far...

so we exchanged no and we talked, he is simple man, but was very much interested to know more about me, i was ok.. he visited me in my work place once... we talked.. and trust me guys like before marriage... he will say yes for everything we say...but it is a different story...

so after 3 months i got married...

post marriage i will share later

WOW!
You should start a FF with your story Kalyani.
I want to know more.😃 Next part😃 post marriage hehe!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SHIKHA.GOHIL16

Hi!
Update pls :D
Love ,
Shikha

Updated 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvarmaanmalik

Peeez pm me ur writing. M loving it! Nd yesh this asad is omigoood I love him! hehe 😉 I've already sent u a buddy request plz accept.

Love Z!

HI iluvarmaanmalik,
Thanks for your comment.
glad you liked it.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerose

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Hey Juliet
Sorry for getting so late with the comment. Had been travelling.
Yet again thoroughly enjoyed myself reading the update.
I am just loving the pace and flow of the story. So many things coming up and adding spice to Asad and Zoya's relation and it is an utter joy to read it. I am a fan of your way with playing with words. Sexy vocabulary u have and your super sexy imagination, hands down. It is just awesome.
The entire scene in the bedroom in the morning was extremely hot. Wow.
Looking forward to how Rashid is going to affect their life and how Asad is gonna handle him.
Loved Asad's predatory ways. He is definitely territorial but its time for Zoya to make him understand certain things though territorial Asad is fun.
lovely update.😊👏
Will be waiting for the next update. Take your time and Take care.

Hey Jasmine.
Loved travelling. Must be fun. Thank you for your gracious comment it is well worth the wait.😊
Thank you once😊 again for the wonderful adjectives you use for my story and my writing although it is a little too much because IF is filled with so much and so many talented writers and FFs, I will greedily hog up the limelight for the moment.😆
Yeah lots of different emotions and characteristics that lovers go through in a relationship is coming up. It is my tasked attempt to showcase some of those but let us see how well the portrayal comes up in the end.
I love territorial men myself but I also like woman to tell it the way it is. It is something very bold about this that not many can digest so then there is where do you draw a line.
Thanks again for all the encouragement and I am so happy you enjoy the updates.
Love love love our chats. Hopefully will end to know more of you too by the time this FF ends.
Another 7-8 more chapters to go btw.😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nilusoni

wow part

thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon

Hi nilusoni
Thanks for your comments.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kals82

Hai girl

Seriously browsing net at 2 ...especially when u r sick. ...health mAtters. ..

Take care s
And take time. ...u r one unique writer..
On ur own...oops. ...too much
...cant helpit...I 😃

Ok now to our lovestory...
I s
Am in a love hate relationship with ur asad...love the concerns and care... hate his dominance...this kind of blind things will just suffocate. ... the partner...
Hope zoya make him realize that soon...

Love the friends group of zoya. ...nice bonding. ...is goa still o ...n...
At the same time zoya should have talked to asad. ...before saying yes for goa...they r equal partners nowsothe fault is is equally zoya 2gg

Love the way asad claims her..love the declaration of zoya to het friends the

looking forworddrfar yeah dr update from u... aftet a long gap..



Take care


Love


Kalyani. .

Hey Kalyani,
Yeah IF does that to me. 2 AM and late nights have caught up and now I am sick for God know till when.
But all good after a few more days of good sleep.
This chapter was about Territorial Men, yes they do exist and every relationship has a citing of this kind at least once in a life time.
It was also about Woman of today who take their liberty too seriously. And then there is love that confuses it all.
Hope I could capture that. Many more juicy bits coming up. So stay tuned.
Can I say I love Asad no matter what he does. Gimme a Man who cares and is so involved with his woman. Now that is some Love.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

Hey hope you're feeling better now. Thanks for updating as had been waiting for this ff to be updated.

Hope Asad will not fight with her again.

Thanks for the pm n please pm me for the next part too.

Hi LoveOnlyAsYa.
I have missed you. I miss your comments from when you used to post on the initial chapters about you and your hubby.
but thank you for this comment.
I am feeling much better now thanks for asking and just a few more good night of sleep I should be ok.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: CHOCOSWATHI

awesome as usual
asad working extra hours to spend some time with zoya.hayye how romantic
The butterflies were bloody traitors, Asad
Addicts! give them Asad and they will switch
sides, when did they ever side her anyway.
i loved these lines very much 😆
jealous asad s fun to read 😉
hate dat rashid simply 😡
everything s beautifully written
loved it throughly
cont soon 😉 😊

Hi CHOCOSWATHI
Glad you liked the butterflies. Just are just like us, they die to know what Asad will do next.
Asad is so Asad isn't he.
Rashid- He has a very strong reason to be like that. You will know in the next chapter.
Thank you for your beautiful words of praise.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asyafreva

Loved it...!!! Nd its k... get well soon...! hope dat raashid's situation does nt become too difficult...! nd d surprise is still on no...?! eagerly w8ing fr d surprise...! bt hope Safiya sint ruin it with confessin abt Zoya-Zafar crush thingy...! Oh lord...! dont make any fights between asya..!

Hi asyafreva,
Yeah I am getting better. I can update once I get back my laptop. Right now I am being treated like a 10yr old by family.😡
I will see what I can do with your line of requests on this FF.😆 But you will have to understand I write only romance and for me to make things romantic. And cute Make up sessions if you need them to follow they have to fight. It is like a normal husband and wife.
They are just getting to know she other. So yeah you might hate me in the next update because they will fight but they will also get back and do things that you like to read.😛

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