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KaranSG_01

@KaranSG_01

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

very depressing os
but it was beautifully written like all your work.

Edited by love_kash - 11 years ago

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rajnid68

@rajnid68

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Full of pathos, pain and longing..

Beautifully penned..

Ps..how did storyline come in being..

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Gourav

@Shubh007

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Awsome os...😊

With a sad ending...😔

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Suganti Kularaju

@suganti

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

it was really awesome and emotional..u made me cry😭

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

very nice

thanx for pm

do pm me for next work

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linta

@Linnet

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

That was so sad😭

Great job

Keep writing

Love

Linnet

😃😃😃

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a.sharma

@a.sharma

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

well i know one thing for sure... she will come back because... she said herself that she will c him after her nap... she will wake up and one day asad will be there in some or the other way... bas i know this for sure... although this was painful... but very beautifully written ... loved it to the core... :)

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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Res

Zoya died..I dnt thnk so..

"Asad, I'm tired I am going to take a nap, I'll see you when I wake up." She smiled as her eyes started to close.

HOPEFULLY SHE VL SERVIVE ON DA NXT UPDATE

Edited by shreya11mehra - 11 years ago

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Annie, my girl!

What do I say about this...

Yes, I had tears in my eyes. Why? Because it is so damn well written. You never ever fail to impress me, whether it is your naughty side or your more serious side, you are just one hell of a talented writer.

You covered everything so well in this short OS; there was drama, romance, love, friendship, even a bit of humor and tragedy/misery. I could actually imagine every single scene and especially Asad's body language and expressions, totally imaginable!

Even though you had warned us, I was not prepared for that ending. Its like as if I was watching the last scene of a movie which can not be changed. How I wish he was given that chance to apologize to her!

He just screamed. He screamed because it was unfair. He screamed because he wanted her sweet smile back. He screamed because he didn't know what else to do

(This is beautiful yet so damn painful...)

Annie, with this you proved that you excel in drama as well! Thank you!!! 🤗

Edited by me2you - 11 years ago