Drabble/OS Prompts - #22 up FEB 26 (Index for all prompts on page 1) - Page 44

Originally posted by: Oldestfan

Beautifully put. This situation is so fraught that if anyone were to try to word in into a conversation, their emotions would run away with them. But you have done fantastic! 😆

Originally posted by: DancingDiva.

Amazing girl! :)

Originally posted by: mochhug

Simi can you please sneak into the set and replace the dialogues for the writers? I so wish this had happened in the show.

Zoya is sensitive to Asad's feelings but Dilshad seems to forget the hardships her husband put her through. She loves him blindly so she can. But I love how you made Zoya make Dilshad realize that Asad is not just hurt by his father for his neglect of his son, but more so for the hardships his mother had to go through to raise him and his sister.

You penned down Asad's feelings and what Dilshad failed to see brilliantly. I feel like kissing your hands. Okay cue the creepy music. 😆

But seriously. It was sooo good. 🤗

Originally posted by: TAnAz_

So good Simi.keep writing.

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Originally posted by: nilusoni

Awesome
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Amazing Amazing Amazing ...

Both os 10 & 11 are awsome...😊

Woohhhooo...sab kismat ki luck hai,is mein kya shak hai..my request os is finally up..yaaayyy😃😃..I dont mind at all that you left out Rashid..we can spare him the pain since bechara is already in coma..lets wait till he gets up😆😆😆...and it was beautifully written..I am so glad that you used such strong words while depicting Zoya's outburst.It was simply flawless👏👏