AsYa- the day of nikhaa os part 1

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hey guys this is my first os i always had this hope that this would happen so i wrote my thoughts over here so if u think they r good plz tell me ...
After nikhaa: mr khan AKA known as jahapana six packs is now married to zoya and r ready for their first night
Dilshad: Asad ab tumhara nikhaa ho gaya hai aur mein jaan ti hoon ye tum dono ke liye bhi utna hi special he jitna hum sab ke liye. Asad is stealing glances to look at his newly wedded bride she was looking like an angel today in her red wedding attire😉 zoya looked absolutely stunning this instantly took asad back when he saw zoya for the first time in red he remembered how she was crying.
Asad to himself: mjhe kya pata tha ki yehi ladki jinse mein itni nafrat karta tha wahi meri zindagi ban jayengi.
Najma: (coughs) bhaijaan ab aap zoy.. i mean bhabhi jaan ko dekhna ban dkar sakte ho. zoya is blushing at this.Najma and other girls laugh
Dilshad: chalo sab so jaoo ( there are other girls and other boys there as well the boys are with asad and girls are with zoya) gud night girls. Dilshad goes to asad and says asad gud nigh... oh sorry pataani tum dono kab nind ayaagi teases asad by saying this asad has a faint smile on his face,
dilshad goes to her room. as asad and zoya are going to their room najmaand other girls say
Girls: kahan ja rahi hein ms farooqui oh sorry mrs asad ahmed khan zoya look at them confused 😕
GIRLS(nikhat, najma, humeira and other girls ): confused kyun ho rahi hein aaj hum sab ladkiyon ne girls night out plan kiya hai (asad is distraught at hearing this the boys see this)
BOYS(Farhan, imraan, ayaan and other boys):koi baat nahi bhaijaan hum hein na app ko puri company denge dont worry.
zoya goes with the girls and asad with the boys they both turn around while going to their room asad could see zoya upset he knew ho much they had waited for their nikhaa.
Zoya's room: all the girls are gossiping as zoya comes out of the bathroom changed in her usual night clothes she was missing mr khan badly she wanted to be in his arms tonight...
that's it guys for today i will write more if i get encouragement plz forgive me if i wrote something wrong because i didn't proof read it plz guys tell me how u found it
how did u find?😕 love qubool hai go quboolians ⭐️




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plz tell me how u found it
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It was a really gud start

Keep writing

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Nice start !!! 😊😊
do continue and do pm me please !😉
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Awesome
plz pm me for next part
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nice
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sound like fun story...thanks for the pm...
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Nice part ... Continue ASAP
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okay why they got separated...
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poor asya... so this is like teasing them...

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