The Mark of Innocence: Chapter 9 Pg 108 - Page 83

Originally posted by: starslinedup

Just caught up to the recent chapters n m loving hte way the story is progressing..loving the bonds that have been formed...cant wait to see where this goes..keep writing...ur doing an awesome job😊

Originally posted by: manognasai

Awesome update...especially the way Asad answered back to Tanveer's nonsense!👏Loved the way he held Zoya's hand and told her not to think abt other's words as they very well know abt their relationship and she is a friend of him and will forever remain...!⭐️Update soon:)

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

👏Awww!!

😳

' The dynamics of our relationship'! Word!

👏

This is NOT at all cheesy. Or in the vicinity of cheesiness. This is pure sweetness. And niceness. And hmmm and awwwness.

Smile smile blush blus. THEY HELD HANDS! and it seemed natural. And she hits him in the chest. Just Zoya's *ahem* favourite thing to do. Ha-ha

Leo mwah.

I'm a sucker for build-up. This. IS. an AMAZING build-up. Not even trying to sound smart.

Farhan-Tanveer Bring.it.ON!

Drama, drama DRAMA!! (am chanting it)

Kay, done.

Ayaan-Humeira *ahem ahem*

Originally posted by: arorasurbhi

This tanveer will never change... hate her
awesome update
Loved it

thanx for the pm

Originally posted by: lovephilic

thanx for the pm

😊

ur both stories r awesome😊👏

Thank u so much my dear :-)

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

😆😆

My stories are always slow with a build up and then I either make it or beak it lol

Really you weren't trying to sound smart...Ya Allah all this smartness and the girl is not even trying lol

Thank you for liking it miss Einstein

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Wow Fantabulous Update Saima!
This Tanveer is jst so stupid... I really hate her.
Now what game they are going to play to insult Zoya... Poor her she doesn't deserve all this.
I loved the way Asad supported Zoe... And the last part was too good.

Originally posted by: mariam1368

Wow Fantabulous Update Saima!
This Tanveer is jst so stupid... I really hate her.
Now what game they are going to play to insult Zoya... Poor her she doesn't deserve all this.
I loved the way Asad supported Zoe... And the last part was too good.

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

That's why I love 'em so much!! So natural! You could even be telling us a real story!

Okay, fine. You caught me. I try (super duper) hard to sound smart. What to do. Had to fish for some compliment. Such a cheapo, I know.

I'm just happy they held hands. Next up a peck on the cheek? Maybe not so soon...Take your time!! Leo mwah.

Trust me either way -make it or break it- it's gonna be awesome. And you know you're gonna totally make it. I mean. C'mon. And you'd totally break Farhan and Tanveer's hearts.

Coz...

👍🏼 You rock.

And fine, fine...here's your hug🤗 Teddy bear...oops I mean Pooh bear hug!

Can't wait for the dance...

Oh my, This reminds me...you got Leo to call her dancing queen! Should I be jealous? Should I? Hmmmphh