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Lolly

@KaSufan2013rox

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Amazing read the whole ff in one go. I LOVE zoya's new character 👏 Amazing job.

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linta

@Linnet

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Lovely

Missed ur updates

Keep writing

Love

Linnet

😛

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Indianbuddy

@Indianbuddy

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Please update soon! This was such a good update! Can you make them longer? I really like this story! I just started reading it! I read all 10 chapters just now! I really want to know what happens next!!!!

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For me to know and you to guess :)

@-Awaari-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Nice song...zoyas put her heart N soul in those words
It's terrible to see their pain
Glad asad is able to see thru her
Poor Najma :P
Nice update

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linta

@Linnet

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Superb as a usual

Keep writing

Loved it

Update soon

Love

Linnet

😛😛

Edited by Linnet - 11 years ago

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Swetha Natarajan

@Aishdegreat

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Wow!!! superb...!!!!

YAY!!! lovely update,...!!!

Woah! woah! so zoya is a soccer player as well a guitarist...cool!! just like me... i too love soccer and guitar...wow.. !!!!!

OHO!!! the khans finally got to know that zoya is a christain...very good!!!!

"Bhabhi, you're a christian?" Najma asked. Zoya smirked at how Najma looked right now. Her eyes were wide and mouth open like a fish."...this was sooo funny!!!

HAhaha!! cute najma..."Here, it's Bhaijaan's, he won't mind."

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

super ctie pie najma zoe evergreen aderent supporter

i hope the khans understand the pain of zo esp asad

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Swetha Natarajan

@Aishdegreat

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Oh i loved zoya sing...it was a beautiful song...it brought tears in my eyes...being a daughter i too feel that my dad is my first love...i feel blessed to have a dad...i just love how u implement the love of a father in everything in ur story..."You held me tight, protected me when the storms are out at night.

Kept me safe and little girls depend on things like that."

Zoya paused as she saw Casey's smile.

"And when I couldn't go to sleep, you stayed with me.

Keeping me safe throughout the night and little girls depend on things like that. "

"Your laugh kept a smile on my face and your jokes made me laugh, little girls always depend on things like that.

You had to take me anywhere, waiting and shopping but you never left. I depend on things like that"

Zoya smiled as she thought about her dad.

"You were a knight in a shining armor, a son's first hero and daughter's first love. So please come back.

You were always there."

"So Father, for the love of a daughter, please come back and don't let God take you away.. me and my sisters are missing you."

Zoya grimaced knowing that once you're dead, you are forever in peace. But she wrote this song when she was seventeen with admiration and love for Nikhil.

"But what's done has been done, the past can't ever be changed. You'll always be in my heart." Zoya smiled knowing that Asad and Najma will have questions...

... super...amazing...i think u have not only got writting skills but also avery good poetry skills...

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Swetha Natarajan

@Aishdegreat

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Please keep writing...contiue soon...and try to give a few long updates...love ur story...love u...thanks for the pm...i think ur a happy daughter too...

We should be blessed to be girls and have a lovable father...

For me my father is my hero as well my love because he doesnt have a son...and i am his son-like becoz i like, do and share all those crappy works that boys do...and i am the one who loves all my dad's adventure when he was teenager...

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Swetha Natarajan

@Aishdegreat

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#90

i just love the way u have fitted a whole new story... with the real story of show...its really like a real story...thanks for the pm. do pm me for the next part which i hope will be soon

Edited by ashrina - 11 years ago

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